Chahat -2(Raj and Naina) Updated pg. 64 Part 39

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: varshita
Hey once again a super romantic update 👏
thank u sweety 🤗🤗🤗

RN's all scenes were superb.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Raj was super happy to see Naina's concern for him. 😊
Obviously he will be 😉 😉 😉

Naina gayi thi Neelu k pass ready hone varna I am sure Raj us ko ready nahi deta.😆
AV was so sweet and he knew about being in love it means he has tasted this medicine.😉
I was laughing to read about Huda's condition.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Raj knew that he must have been thinking that, but Raj faste faste bacha.😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕
Neelu teased Major so much but karti bhi kya Naina ko dekhne k baad Major ka haal hi aisa tha.😳
Beautiful and stylish dress.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
I love this romantic and passionate part of Raj and his cute and fake anger.😉
Raj k to hosh hi ud gaye Naina ko dekh k. Song was perfect and suitable for the situation.😳
Major Vyom kya chahte hain party me jana hai ya nahi? 😉
Ye to vahi jane. 😉 😉 😉

Good that they didn't bring Neelu with them and Alekh is so sweet and caring hubby.😊
Thank you Alekh for calling at perfect time varna Major was not ready to leave the chance.😉

thanks for lovely comment dear. 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: poorvi16
Nice update 👏 👏
thanks 😊 😊 😊

Raj was so happy ki Naina ne us ki life ko change kar diya hai and he was surprised ki kaise Naveen ne ye baat pehle se hi predict kar di thi. 😉 😉
Obviously, kahin na kahin vo yahi chahta tha shayad.😊 😊 😊

Accha hua AV aa gaya vahan agar Raj Naina ko chidata to Naina pakka gussa ho jati us se, par ye bhi hai kab tak reh pati? 😉 😉
Kitna gussa rahegi? 😛 😛 😛

Raj is so romantic...I wanted to see his this side in LRL but thank god u all write these FF's for us.
Yup, tum logon ki secret desires poori kar rahi hoon. 😳 😳 😳

Lovely song again, they were so romantic.😳 😳

Alekh disturbed them but it was necessary as the place was not appropriate for their romance.😛 😛
Varna yahin lage rehte dono. 😉 😉 😉

Her dress was so sensuous but I like it.

Bechara Huda, Alekh ne bhi Raj ko bol diya ki Huda ki koi help karne ki jaroorat nahi hai.😆 😆
Karmo k fal bhog raha hai vo apne is tarah. 😆 😆 😆

Pls diii update fast time.

Obviously sweety thanks for update.🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: prerna1
great part dear
liked it...

thanks so much dear 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: XoxowpdXoxo

Are koi baat nahi di aapne bhi badi fursat me update kari hai to socha hum bhi 3-4 mahine ki neend leke hi comment kare😆😆

Sahi keh rahi hai mai sab ko kitna rest deti hoon. 😆 😆 😆

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: XoxowpdXoxo
Lekin socha chalo Kumbhkaran wali neend khatam kare yah to comment kie hue 1 saal ho gaya ab zara line per aa jae 😆😆
Aur kya aur vo bhi jab maine update bhi nahi kiye jyada. 😆 😆 😆

Both updates were good at least something is happening excitingly just like thos fresher's ball😉😉😊
thanks darling 😊 😊 😊

Now update Soon

Dobara holidays per mat jaiyega 1 saal ki😉😛😆

Nahi ab bilkul nahi jayenge holiday pe. Jaldi se update karenge. 😉 😉 😉

Thanks for comment. 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: arpita25
Kis ka karegi update? 😕 Kisi ka kar jaldi se.

Originally posted by: poorvi16
Dii pls is ko kariye na update!!!!!!!!!

Bus ab karne jaa rahi hoon. 😉 😉 😉

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Great update 👏 and thanks for being patient.😆 Sorry for being so late.😒
Lovely update with RN romance.😳 Raj was unable to take his eyes off from Naina and her such sexy dress makes her more sensuous.☺️ Raj and Naina now no need to have a room, all they want just to romance 😳 but Mr. Major u need to pay attention towards your surroundings as well.😉 Raj ko sahi time pe call kiya Alekh ne.😊 He was behaving as if he is getting angry over Naina and vo kaise Raj ko gussa rehne deti.😉 Good that Neelu didn't join the party with Alekh as she was not in condition to do that. Huda poor boy. 😆

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 10 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Great update 👏 and thanks for being patient.😆
thanks and my pleasure 😊 😊 😊

Sorry for being so late.😒
It's ok

Lovely update with RN romance.😳 Raj was unable to take his eyes off from Naina and her such sexy dress makes her more sensuous.☺️ Raj and Naina now no need to have a room, all they want just to romance 😳 but Mr. Major u need to pay attention towards your surroundings as well.
😉 Raj ko sahi time pe call kiya Alekh ne.😊
Romance karte waqt surroundings pe dhyaan dena bhi jaroori hai. 😉 😉 😉 Thanks that u liked it.😊 😊

He was behaving as if he is gett😊ing angry over Naina and vo kaise Raj ko gussa rehne deti.😉
Ya she knows so well how to cool Raj's temper. 😉 😉 😉

Good that Neelu didn't join the party with Alekh as she was not in condition to do that. Huda poor boy. 😆
Ya she shouldn't has to and Huda to kuch nahi kar sakta ab.😉 😉 😉

thanks for such lovely comment. 🤗 🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 10 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

Part 50:-

He came out of his dreamland and said, "Oye gud evening sir jee, gud evening madam jee haan jee kaafi enjoy kar raha hoon party aap batao aap badi der se aaye."

Raj gave a small smile looking at Naina and said, "Sardaar jee u know na ladies ko kitna time lagta hai ready hone me."

To which Naina protested, "Aisa nahi hai...Mai to time se hi ready ho gayi thi but late aap ne kiya."

"maine kahan late kiya Naina? Mai bhi to vahan time se pahuch gaya tha." He replied.

Huda gave them a confused looked and said, "Jab aap dono time se hi pahuch gaye the to late kahan ho gaya?" On this question both blushed to the core, specially Naina her face turned in to tomato red.

Alekh rescued them, "Oye sardar jee aap bhi kya pooch rahe ho jane do husband wife hain raste me kahin romance karne lage honge."

Naina's face turned red again, it made Huda confused a bit 'Ye Phoolan aisa kyoun reaction de rahi hai jaise ye dono sach me romance me lage hue the. I swear agar ye Major Naina k saath kuch aisa vaisa karne ki koshish karega na to mai is ki vo halat karoonga ki ye doosre ladkyion k saath flirt hi karna bhool jayega aur shadi ki to sochega bhi nahi. Are headquarters se pretend karne ka order mila hai sach me dono husband wife thode na hain.'

Alekh and Raj could clearly read what was going on in Huda's mind that time. So it was better to ignore the topic.

Raj asked, "How is party going?"

"Nahi sir abhi start kahan hue ,bus it's about to start just we are waiting for Brigedier Genral." Alekh informed.

"Great." And he kept a serious glance around to check whether his men were present there in civil uniform and he got the confirmation as thumbs up.

Soon the party started after arrival of BG who entered with his wife. Raj met her for the first time. "Good evening sir."

"Good evening Major, nice arrangement." BG praised Raj's hard work.

"Thanks sir, I am happy that u liked it."

"Aana hi tha, akhir aate hi aap ki humare cadets pe kamal ki pakad ban chuki hai." He smiled. Raj got surprised who has seen him smile for the first time from whe he came in this Academy.

"Sir ye to aap sab ka support hai aur mere students ka trust n affection hai mere liye. Vaise as far as I can see Major Verma bhi kaafi popular hai students me." He signaled in AV's direction where he was surrounded by cadets. Girl cadets were there more than boy cadets.

"I know, I will be happy if this party finishes with a good note." BG said thoughtfully.

"Sorry sir, I couldn't get you." Raj showed as if he was unaware about everything.

"Ahh nothing Major...sorry I forgot to make you meet my wife Aditi. Here she is.." and he made Vyom meet her and both wished her. Vyom aka Raj was surprised to see her as BG's wife because she looked so youg to him. "Actually Aditi is a tarrot card reader and she told me that something big is going to happen very soon around me so I was a bit tensed She just told me this yesterday."

"I am really sorry Major Vyom as u know it's my hobby so I always gets all the idications either they are good or bad. I didn't know that my husband will take it so much seriously."

"It's fine mam, good that u told him. We have to be alert now." Raj said smiling. "aur phir ye to accha hai, kabhi aap k saath bhi baith k apna future jaana chahenge."

She gave a small smile, "hum chahe kitne bhi alert rahein Major par kabhi kabhi jo hona hai us ko badal nahi sakte." It gave some doubt to Raj.

Soon Naina and AV joined them whereas BG excused them and went to talk something with MT who has joined the party at its begining but completely ignored to meet Vyom and AV.

"Hello Aditi..." AV greeted her in his usual flirty tone which reminded Naina more of her brother Naveen and she gazed at AV.

"Hello AV...how r u?"

"Ab kaisa ho sakta hoon aap k bina." AV said. Not only Vyom but Naina also could not stop herself from smiling.

Aditi laughed n said, "Major aap nahi sudhroge na."

"Ab aap saamne rahengi to kaun kambhakt sudharna chahega?"

"Samhal k Major mere hubby yahan k BG hain."

"To kya hua? Kisi rule book me ye to nahi likha hai na ki BG ki wife agar itne pretty ho to aap flirt nahi kar sakte?"

"Oh AV ur seriously mad." She smiled.

"By the way no one make me meet this beautiful lady standing besides you, can I know who is she?"

AV smiled, "I seriously appologize mam." And he turned towards Raj and Naina, "Meet Major Vyom Rathode as strategy and communication teacher and Captain Naina Rathode his wife as History teacher for Academy.

"pleased to meet you Major and Captain." She greeted them by shaking hands with them. "Par mai Major se pehle hi mil chuki hoon."

"Good evening mam."

"Good evening and both of you make a nice couple." Raj and Naina smiled to get this compliment.

"Thanks mam," Naina replied.

"Thank god aap logon ne same to you nahi bola varna kabhi kabhi kaafi embarrassing ho jata hai jab koi same to u or like both of you bol deta hai. Mujhe to nahi par BG ko accha nahi lagta." And she laughed.

Naina smiled as well, "It's fine mam but the truth is that age doesn't matter, BG is still very smart and you both make an ideal pair."

"Indeed it's true Naina, you are really very sensible." Aditi said.

Sensing them busy in conversation, at some corner of party, "Be ready bahar ka dekh lo baki hum yahan ka dekh lenge."

"Yes Boss," and that man checked his surroundings very cleverly.

Finding everything fine he slowly signalled to rest of his men to unload all the arms which were placed in a car. Here in the party Rajeev got the signal immedieatly. "Sir kuch movements aa rahe hain west gate k pass se."

"Go check it and inform me." He said.

"Yes sir." Recieving the order he immedieatly left but couldn't reach to that point as he was badly attacked by some intruders which injured him and throw him unconsious at some corner on the way. Raj didn't get any report in next fifteen minutes which worried him and he signaled one of his trusted men Captain a under cover agent who was working as an orderly in the Academy. "Vinod go and check the west gate maine Khanna ko bheja tha but I got no response. Don't go alone."

He instructed n this info was send to Alekh as well. Alekh was alert and consious when two of the attackers attacked him. He sharply and smartly got saved and soon two of his men joined him. Taking the full advantage of situation they caught the whole gang loading all the arms and ammunations. He immedieatly informed Rajveer about it. "Sir yahan pe bahut bade level pe arms ki loading chal rah thi. Ye sab humare academy k ammunations hain jin ko yahan se kahin aur le jaya jaa raha hai ."

"Well done Alekh, you be there and I am coming." And he immedieatly left the party when he sensed that no one was noticing him and after signaling to Huda but someone's eyes were fixed over him.

"Mission successful, I think they were trapped. Kya orders hain sir?"

"Major Vyom West gate k liye nikal chuka hai it's high time for blast in the party."

Here Raj was moving up to West gate suddnely he got some thought, ye sab itna easy kaise ho sakta hai? I mean itne easily yahan pe sab ka pakde jana should not be a plan. Kahin ye koi chaal to nahi hai humara attention kahin aur focus karne ki.' He immedieatly connected to Alekh. "Alekh r u there?"

"Yes sir."

"Tum vahan ko samhalo mujhe kuch doubts hain I think ye sab itna easy nahi ho sakta hai. I should check the party."

"Captain Huda".

"Yes sir."

"Al lis fine in party?"

"Sir jee abhi tak to hai."

"Dhyaan do, mujhe doubt hai vahan kuch gadbad ho sakta hai. I am coming."

"Kisi bhi movement k liye alert rehna."

"Ok sir."

At one place:-

"All set?"

"yes sir."

"Ready for blast?"

"Haan sir bus two minutes and ye party khalaas."

"Taiyaar raho Major Academy me first jhatke k liye." And that man switched on the timer of the time bomb with his remote. Huda sensed a few men leaving the party checking here and there as if no one was noticing them.

He connected to Rajveer, "Sir kuch log is party se khishak rahe hain specially jo waiter uniform me hain. Surprising ye hain ki ek saath itne logon ka party se vahar jana ajeeb hai vo bhi tab jab ki abhi party chal rah hai."

"Tum un ka peecha karo. I am on the way."

"Ok sir." He connected to Alekh, "Alekh apne aadmiyon ko vahan chod k party venue pe aao. Meri sixth sense keh rahi hai ki party me kuch hone wala hai." He rushed inside the party and jumped to floor making the sound of a sweet cum romantic number quiet he took the mind in his hands and announced "please I request you all to empty the hall asap."

"ye kya keh rahe ho Major." BG asked. "Sir please it's a request. Is party me bomb hai so please leave. Captain AV, Mohan Singh jee and Naina please help it's an imergency." A rush was started, but Naina and AV managed it so well and all were brought to grounds and three consecutive blasts took place as soon as they came out and half of them were on the way.

"Major Rathod meet me in my office now." BG announced.

"Oh my god, ye sab kya hai?" Aditi asked shocked.

"Vahi jo aap ne predict kiya tha." Vyom replied smartly.

Here Vyom and Alekh in BG's office:-

"Sir hum ne aap ko bataya tha ki party k din kuch bada karne ka plan kia gaya hai as I got some threatening slips. Kuch calls bhi aaye the but internet calls hone ki vajah se track nahi ho paye hain abhi tak. We are trying our best."

"To in blasts ko rokne k liye koi bada step kyoun nahi liya gaya?"

"Sir hum ne apni taraf se sab plan kar lia tha. Poori Academy ko high alert pe rakha gaya tha. Har jagah security check lagaya gaya tha. Yahan tak ki aaj ki party me aane waale sare cars ki n bikes ki bhi serious checking ki gayi thi."

Alekh said, "Actually sir ye ek aisa plan tha jo hume confuse karne k liye banaya gaya tha. Jab hume ye pata chala ki arms n ammunations load kiye jaa rahe hain. hum ne vahan Lft. Khanna ko bheja tha who was injured badly. Us k baad mujhe vahan bheja gaya aur maine apni team k saath un logon ko pakda aur Major Rathod ko inform kia aur vo mere pass aane wale the."

Vyom continued, "Bus us time mujhe yai laga ki ye sab itna easy kaise dikh raha hai. I mean itne jaldi ek aise group ka pakda jana jo Academy me aayi ek car me arms load kar rahe the to kahin aisa to nahi hai ki is me main plan koi aur ho aur hum ko confuse karne k liye ye story dikhayi jaa rahi hai. Bus maine Alekh ko bola ki vahan sab samhalo aur mai party venue ki taraf jaa raha hoon. As soon as I was about to enter in to the party mujhe time bomb ki sound padi jo genreally kisi ko sunayi nahi padti in DJ's sound but ye ek khas tarah ka bomb tha jo door k uper side me lage board me lagaya gaya tha and aise hi theen aur bombs lagaye gaye the jin se me ek DJ floor pe tha aur baki k do bombs ko hum locate kar pate is k pehle blast ho gaya. And for it thank to the slow sound playing in hall varna aaj itna bada blast hone se koi bacha nahi sakta tha."

"But ye bomb academy me aaye kaise? Aap ne to poori security team banayi thi aur sab check bhi kia tha na?"

BG asked. "Yahi baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai sir. Kahin na kahin koi na koi loop hole reh gaya security me ya phir humari academy me hi koi mila hai un logon se."

"Ye baat to mujhe bhi samajh aa rahi hai Major." He paused for a second and asked next, "Arms kis gadi se unload ho rahe the?"

Raj looked at Alekh, "Sir...vo aap ki gaadi thi."

"What??" he was shocked. Raj looked at him shocked as well.

Alekh further continued, "Yes sir, bus ek aap ki hi car thi jis ko hum ne security check se free rakha tha."

"Kis k orders se free kia tha aap ne meri gaadi?" BG asked in full angry tone.

"Sir Major Talreja k orders se." Raj looked at him. "This is really shocking, mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki meri gaadi...kisi ne kya soch k use ki?" BG was thoughtful and more than that confused.

"Obvious hai sir, jis ne bhi plan kia tha ye us ne soch rakha hoga ki aap ka vehicle check hone k chances bahut kam hain bus us ne isi baat ka fayda uthaya." Raj cleared his doubt.

He seems tensed, "I know Major and Captain aap log soch rahe honge ki mai is matter me involve hoon but I give you full permission to interrogate anyone any time. I want the truth to be revealed soon."

"Yes sir."

"Aur mai chahta hoon ki is matter pe jo bhi improvements hoon aap dono vo mujhe report karenge."

"Yes sir." They salutated and exit. After they exit BG was in deep thoughts.

Aditi entered in his office, "Brigedier..."

"Aditi come in."

"I think hume ab chalna chahiye. Aaj k is incident k baad I feel horrible." She said and her mood was down. BG could understand the tension, being wife of a army men she couldn't show her emotions as she has to show that how strong she is but the seriousness of the blast and thinking the possible would be consequences of it make her frighten more and more.

BG came to her, "I know Aditi tum aaj k hadse se thoda pareshaan bhi ho aur dar bhi gayi ho but don't worry jab tak mai kuch nahi hoga tum ko."

"I know Brigedier, I am not worried." She said to assure her.

He paused for a second and thinking something deeply, "You know Aditi aaj tum car le k kahan kahan gayi thi na?"

Aditi was confused, "why are u asking it Brigedier?"

"Kuch baatein hain jo mai tum ko baad me bataoonga filhal jo pooch raha hoon vo batao."

"Aaj before party mai parlour gayi thi and kuch saman purchase karne k liye market gayi thi." "Aur in dono kaamo me tum ko total kitna time laga tha?"

"approx two hours," she replied, "But baat kya hai Brigedier aap ye kyoun pooch rahe hain?"

"Kuch nahi," he thought for a while, sufficient time hai kisi k liye bhi gadi load karne ka with arms.'

"Kya baat hai Brigedier kya soch rahe hain aap?"

He looked at her and said, "Nothing, let's leave for home." Here Alekh and Vyom aka Raj left from BG's office and Raj was in deep thoughts when Alekh disturbed him. "Kya hua sir, aap kahin khoye hue lag rahe hain?"

"Kuch baatein hain jo mujhe confuse kar rahi hain, par un k baare me mai pehle kuch investigations kar loon tab kuch bol paaonga."

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 10 years ago