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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 34:-

Huda was a bit confused that how can Naina be so much happy as she was in shock when Raj left her, from that day he didn't see her smiling and that much relax but when Vyom met her first time & he saw her with him she was...oh this can be the reason. Vyom was keeping her happy, he thought but once again he didn't want Naina to be hurt by someone. Kahin ye bus is misin k liye to nahi? Kya hoga agar is misin k baad dono humesha k liye alag ho gaye to? Kya Naina tab ye sab seh paayegi? Kya Naina tab samhal paayegi ye sab aur kahin ye Vyom mauke ka fayda utha k Naina k saath kuch ulta seedha karne ki koshish kare to? Nahiii, his blood boiled mai aisa nahi hone de sakta apni phoolan k saath. Us Vyom ne agar kuch galat karne ki koshish bhi ki na to meri roopa ki kasam us ko zinda nhi chodne waala mai. Kahin Naina ki majboori ka fayda uthane ki na soche vo aur Naina...vo kaise? Par ho sakta hai Maine dekha hai us ko us k samne kamjor padte hue aur is baar to hum sab bhi saath nahi honge na us k kahin kuch galat kar liya Naina ne to?'

Naina shook him nearly tenth time, "Huda...kya hua? Kahan khoya hua hai?"

He came out of his terrance, "oh nahi Naina...par mai vahi jaana chahta hoon ki kahin us Vyom ne tere saath kuch...?"

Naina could see the concern in Huda's voice she didn't want to hurt him, "nahi Huda. Jaisa tu samajh raha hai aisa kuch nahi hai."

Huda was still not assured, "tu sach bol rahi hai?"

"Haan Huda, mai tujh se jhooth kyoun boloongi?"

"Par mujhe samajh nahi aata hai ki is mission me kya tum dono ka aise mera matlab miya biwi ban k yahan aana jaroori tha?"

Naina knew that he would ask this question, "Haan Huda jaroori tha, us din jab mai HQ gayi thi na tab..." and she told him all what happened there skipping the parts where she came to know the actual truth of Raj's identity and he proposed her.

Taking a deep breath Huda continued, "Pata hai mujhe kehti to tu yai hai ki kabhi kisi se jhooth nahi bolegi par kabhi apna dard aur dukh share nahi karti na aur humesha apne aap me hi sara dard samet leti hai. Teri isi adat se to hum aur pareshaan hote hain. Mai nahi chahta ki is baar tere saath kuch aisa ho jis ko hum seh nahi paayein aur vo bhi tab jab tu us insaan k saath hai jis ki shakal ..." aage vo keh hi nahi paya kuch.

'Shakal hi nahi Huda vo insaan hi mera pyaar Rajveer hai.' She thought but said, "mujhe pata hai Huda ki tu mere liye kitna pareshaan rehta hai par see mai kitne khush hoon aur sun tu jara sa bhi tensin mat le is baare me."

Taking his hands in his she said, "mujhe yakeen hai har baar ki tarah is baar bhi mere saath kuch galat nahi hoga."

Huda thought for a while and than asked a question, "Do u trust him?" he said taking deep in her eyes.

Naina smiled and gave a very convincing look, "yes i do."

Huda sighed and said, "mai bus ye chahta hoon ki tera bharosa kabhi na toote kyounki ab mai tujhe kabhi bhi rote hue aur dard me nahi dekh sakta."

Naina smiled and changing the topic of their discussion she asked, "haan ab pehle mujhe ye bata kaisa laga yahan aa k?"

"Oye ye bhi kuch poochne ki baat hai? Jis jagah tu, kaidi saath me hai us jagah to Huda k maze hi maze hain aur kasam se phoolan yahan ki jananiyaan to kasam se badi hi kamal hain."

"Hude to yahan aate hi shuru ho gaya?" Naina said laughing. "Kya karoon oye apna to charm hi kuch aisa hai ki kudiyon pe jadoo ki tarah chal jaata hai. Haan bus tujh pe nahi chala baaki sab pe chalta hai. Ab kya kiya jaaye tere pe to apne captain ka jadoo chala hua tha na." He said winking.

Naina gave a smile, "accha ab ye sab chod ye bata ki aakhir kis k liye aaj kal Huda manners seekhne laga hai?"

Huda blushed and said, "oye tujhe yaad hai Yudi aur Shalini mam...uff ab to vo apni Shalini bhabhi hai na..to mai kya keh raha tha Phoolan ki us ki shaadi me vo ladki mile thi na...vo gori si sundar se, badi badi aakhon waali. Ek dum meri chameli ki tarah chamakne waali...ek dum chand jaise khoobsurat aur vo red color ka vo dress jo us ne shaadi k ek din pehle pehan rakha tha na kya kamal lag rahi thi tab na. Yaad hai mujhe us pe jo us ne pink color ki lipstick lagayi hue thi us me us k vo gulaabi hoth ek dum taza gulab jaise lag rahe the ... aur mera to man ...aahhh, jaane do na kaise kahoon sharam aati hai mujhe. Par sach me pehle baar zindagi me itne khoobsurat ladki dekhi thi... " to which Naina coughed and gave him a glare, "oh...nahi mai ki keh raha tha ki tere se to khoobsurat koi bhi nahi ho sakta par ab vo bhi tere hi takkar me hai",and he goes on and on finally after five minutes Naina broke his rhythm of praises and said.

"Oye tu seedhe se kuch batayega ki us ka naam kya hai? Kuch naam bhi to hoga na us ka?" Naina said finally getting irritated.

"Oh..batata hoon Phoolan aise naraj kyoun hoti hai? Tujhe pata hai na ki khoobsurat jananiyaan gusse me aur bhi jyada khoobsurat lagne lagti hai to tu kyoun ab apni khoobsurati ka kehar barpana chahti hai mere uper."

"Huda", and she hit his forehead playfully and said, "tu kabhi nahi sudhar sakta hai."

"Oye sun to meri gal...us ka naam pooch rahi thi na tu us ka naam Anvesha hai aur tujh se milwaya tha Maine us ko yaad hai tujhe?"

Naina tried to recalled the girl's face, "actually Huda mujhe theek se yaad nahi aa raha hai ki kis k baare me keh raha hai tu."

"Oye Shalini mam ki behan Anny yaar." Now she understood but she was shocked more than that surprised,

"oye Huda mujhe ye bata ki vo tujh se pat kaise gayi? I mean ...mujhe galat mat samajhna but vo to kaafi tough ladki thi na?"

Huda tried to blush and Naina got irritated once again when he continued, "oye tu bhi na kitna underestimate karti hai mere charm ko. Mai capatin Amarjeet Huda hoon mere charm se jananiyan bach nahi paati aur vo bhi kaise bachti? Pata hai phoolan vo mujhe kya bulati hai?"

Naina asked smiling showing totally lost in his talks, "kya bulati hai Huda?"

"Oye pooch mat, pehli baar apna naam kisi aur k muh se itna beautiful laga ki pooch mat. Vo mujhe Amar kehti hai...hieee:, he hide his face in his palms.

Naina smiled and hit him in his shoulder, "oye bus kar nautanki, kahin tu ladki to nahi ban gaya us k pyaar me?" she said teasing him.


Later in evening:-


When Raj came back from checking all the arrangements, his prime concern was the security and still he was not satisfy with the things he saw whole bed room was messed up with dresses lying here and their like a showroom. He placed his hand on his forehead and called Naina, "Naina...".

"Are aap aa gaye, kab aaye aur mujhe pata kaise nahi chala?" she said coming out of washroom having five more dresses in her both hands.

"Vahi to mai soch raha hoon ki ek army officer itna careles kaise ho sakta hai? Tumhe kayal hi nahi hai ki kab koi andar aa jaaye aur ye sab kya hai?" he asked pointing out at the mess up.

"Sorry first, Ahhhaaan vo actually mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki aaj raat ki party me mai kya pehnoon, to Maine saare dress nikal k ek ek kar k check kiye par phir bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki mai kya pehnoo?"

Raj smiled, "Naina tumhe pata hai na ki tum kuch bhi pehno khoobsurat hi lagogi?"

"Vo to hai Raj par phir bhi mujhe best lagna hai na aaj."

"Samajh sakta hoon, aur tum," he said pulling her hands towards him, "is duniya ki sab se khoobsurat ladki ho." He said giving a peck on her crane of neck. Naina blushed. Raj couldn't take his eyes from her whenever she blushes. The pink color which rises in her chin makes her even more beautiful. The eyes which speaks volumes to him and whenever he looks at her eyes he forgets all his pain and sufferings he has gone through. Naina has given a new meaning to his life now.


Come Around, Its Time To Baby Come Around
Come Around, Come Around

Its Time To Baby Come Around
Come Around, Come Around

Khaabon Bina Nigaahein Meri Ji Rahi Thi
Koyi Nahi Tha Yeh Akeli Meri Thi Jindagi

Khaamosh Tha Honto Pe Baatein Nahi Thi
Koyi Nahi Tha Yeh Akeli Meri Thi Jindagi

Tum Mile Toh Mil Gaya Yeh Jahaan
Tum Mile Toh Har Pal Hai Naya


She was still in his arms, the best place on earth for her. Raj wanted her to be here for eternity. The distance and time couldn't seprate these two hearts and they were finally together. A lot of hurdles came in their way but at the end of everything they were together and this was the most beautiful time in their lives.

Tum Mile Toh Sabase Hai Faasala
Tum Mile Toh Jaadu Chha Gaya

Tum Mile Toh Jina Aa Gaya
Tum Mile Toh Main Paaya Hai Khuda


The emptiness he has in his life from the begining till now, he never craved for any one that much as much he wanted her to be in his life. He couldn't make her his earlier as there were a lot of things coming in their ways in KMA days. Their love which started growing from that time and they could never speak a word to each other for it. Raj never wanted to spoil her life more just because of him.

Come Around, Its Time To Come Around
Come Around, Come Around

Its Time To Come Around
Come Around, Come Around


His beautiful thoughts got disturb by a phone call. He recieved the call, "yes".

"Major Vyom".

"Yes speaking."

"Taiyaariyan to bahut acche se chal rahi hain. Koshishein bahut kar rahe ho par mujhe bahut dukh ho raha hai ye batate hue ki kahin aisa na ho ki ye taiyaariyan adhoori na reh jaayein."

Raj immedieatly signalled Naina something and she made a call from her phone, "Captain Saigal".

"Yes mam."

"Just trace and record the call on Major Vyom's no right now."

"Ok mam." Here Raj was still or should we say purpousely speaking to that man, "kaun ho tum aur ye sab kya keh rahe ho?"

"Major tumhe lagta hai ki mai samajh nai raha hoon ki tum na samajhne ka accha natak kyoun kar rahe ho?"

"Tum jo bhi kehna chahte ho saaf saaf kaho,"

"Oho Major naraj mat hoiye. Mujhe aap trace nahi kar paaoge bus ek baat dhyan rakhna ki bina patakhon k koi bhi jashn adhoora lagta hai to aaj bhi taiyaar rehna atishbaaji k liye." And the person on another line hung the call.

Raj smiled and looked at Naina and she was surprised to see the smile on Raj's face. "Aap smile kar rahe hain kyoun?"

"Haan kyounki mujhe lag raha tha ki ye call trace nahi ho paayegi fir bhi mujhe ek clue mil gaya hai."

"Kaisa clue Raj?"

"Suno", and he played the call recording once again. In whole conversation Naina didn't notice something.

"Is me kya hai mujhe samajh nahi aaya." Than Raj played it again to her. "Naina ye baat karte time tum ko peeche se koi awaaz aayi?"

"Haan shayad ek bada sa gate open hone ki awaz aayi thi jaise koi lohe (iron) k abada sa gate ho."

"aisa koi gate humari academy me kahin hai?"

"I think north east corner ka gate hai aisa kyounki last week mai udhar se aayi thi to us gate k open hone se jahan tak mujhe yaad hai aisa sound aata hai. Par confirm karne k liye ek baar check karna padega." She said. "Par is se ek baat mujhe pakka samajh me aa rahi hai."

"Vo kya Raj?"

"Vo ye Naina ki ye call Academy se me hi kisi ne ki hai hum ko dhamkane k liye aur koi hai aisa jo jan chuka hai mujhe aur us area ko mujhe fauran check karwana padega." He said and dialled a no.

"Yes captain, major speaking."

"Yes major good afternoon."

"Kuch kaam tha aap se." (rest is silent for u guys). After a while Naina asked again to Rajveer

"accha ab ye sab chodiye mujhe bataiye to ki kaun se dress pehnoo mai?"

He said same thing again, "koi bhi dress pehan lo mujhe pata hai ki kayamat hi lagogi." And winked.

"Rehne dijiye aap, army me har misin me to aap ka dimaag bahut lagta hai par maine itne choti se cheej kahi vo bhi aap nahi batayegi. Jaaiye mujhe baat nahi karni aap se." And she made a sad face.

"Oho to Naveen ki chuhiya ka gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua hai lagta hai." Naina got more irritated, "aap na sach me...bahut vo hain.

" Raj came closer to her and asked, "vo matlab?"

She didn't show that his closness was creating butterflies in her tummy. "vo matlab bahut bure."

"Oh to mai bura hoon."

"Haan hain aur thode bahut nahi bahut jyada bure hain." Raj said normally making a face, "to theek hai mai phir jo gift laya tha tumhare liye vo kisi aur ko de deta hoon."

"Kya gift? Kaisa gift? Dikhao mujhe." She said like a small kid.

Raj who was enojying her expression said, "nahi dusht aur bure log to sab ko pareshaan kaarte hain na to mai kyoun koi accha kaam karoon? Mai bhi ye gift kisi aur ko de deta hoon."

"Nahi nahi kis ne kaha aap bure hain, aap to acche hi nahi bahut acche hain pls batao na vo gift kahan hai?"

"Theek hai agar mai bura nahi hoon to mujhe kuch mil sakta hai na?" Without even thinking a minute she said, "haan haan bataiye kya chahiye aap ko mai pakka doongi."

"Pakka na?"

"Haan haan jaldi batao na kya gift hai?"

"Theek hai." And he walked to his cup borad opened it and took out a gift pack from it and handing over it to Naina he said, "ye lo."

Naina got excited and asked, "kya hai ye?"

"Khud khol k dekh lo." And Naina started unpacking it and when she opened it and said just one Word, "woowww". There was a beautiful pink saari in it.
Naina was surprised she was amazed, "ye kab li aap ne?"

Raj smiled n said, "tumhe yaad hai jab hum mandir gaye the to..."


Flashback:--

Raj got a sms in his phone and he suddnely stopped the jeep all of a sudden. "Raj kya hua?"

"Vo..vo Naina ek jaroori kaam tha mujhe yahan mujhe adha ghanta lagega."

"Oh... To tab tak mai kya karoongi?"

"Tum ek kaam karo us shop me dekh lo agar kuch jaroori saman chahiye to." He said indicating at a shop.

Suddnely Naina remembered something and said, "oh haan yaad aaya kuch saman lena tha Maine socha bhi tha ki market aaongi kisi din accha hua aaj aa gayi." Us ko yaad aaya tha ki kuch dino baad karwa chauth hai aur us k liye koi new saari leni thi but vo Raj ko us k kaam se distract bhi nahi karna chahti thi to kuch kaha nahi us ne.

"Theek hai."

Naina came out of the jeep and said, "jab aap ka kaam ho jaaye to mujhe call kar liiyega."

"Fine," and both left. Half an hour later when Raj was coming back after completing the work he saw a beauiful saari on a dummy and it caught his eyes and he at once decided to buy it and told the shopkeeper to deliever after a day to him directly.

Flashback over


"Oh to kaafi smart ho gaye hain aap." Naina said smiling.

"To tumhe kya lagta hai tumhare pati ko army waalon ne aise hi major bana diya hai?"

Naina smiled more and said, "haan ye to maine socha hi nahi tha."

"Sach me Naina ye saari pasand aayi na tumhe?" Raj asked curiously.

"Sach kahoon Raj?"

"Haan sach bilkul sach."

"Theek hai..." She took a deep breath and said, "actually ye saari..."

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum
superb
mindblowing
fabulous upd
keep it up dear
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was really gud.
Huda is so cocern for Naina but atleast he is not fallen for her again.
Raj and Naina's scenes were gud.
Raj is too smart.He got a clue from that call and now he wud do his best to catch the culprit.😃
Raj is so happy to b with Naina like this.Now nothing can come between them.That saree was really pretty.😊
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update dear
liked it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story dear

Loved it...

Continue soon

Pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
huda is really concerned and worried for naina
naina who got tocuhed by seeing his this concern feels good but she cant tell him that the person about whom hud a got doubt is actually their captain her capt rajveer so changing the topic she shtarted the one on whcih huda gets lost and she thought huda started saying about the girl he met in yudi's wedding
anyways raj and naina both had some romantic nostagic moments when again they got a call disturbing their romance but its a part of their life
The saree gifted by Raj is really i know Naina will surely like it
plz cont soon and pm me

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