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Part 31:-

After ten minutes Raj was in his room with Naina. Raj ne Alekh ki help se cameras se peecha chuda liya tha to ab koi tensin nahi tha us ko.

"Naina...", he called her name softly.

"Raj kya hai ye sab?"

"Kya?"

"Vo aadmi...aadmi bhaiya jaisa kaise ho sakta hai?" It was her question.

(Here comes the revelation of your guys doubt Major Abhyuday Verma is this guy)

Samir Sharma

"Naina us ki shakal bus Naveen se milte hai vo Naveen nahi hai."

"Tumhare bhi shakal to Rajveer se milte hai par tum Rajveer hi ho na? Ho sakta hai vo apni true identity chipa rahe ho?"

"Naina tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho? Tum ko yaad nahi hai ki Naveen ki body bheji gayi thi aur...mujhe lag raha hai tum yahan bekaar me pareshan ho rahi ho."

"Par jab se maine us aadmi ko dekha hai tab se mujhe lag raha hai ki vo mera bhai hi hai."

"Vo bus isliye kyounki us insaan ki shakal bilkul milti hai tumhare bhai se." Naina soch nahi paa rahi thi kuch aur jab Raj us k paas aaya aur us k kandhe pe haath rakh kar kaha.

"Naina mai jaanta hoon ki kitna jyada pyaar karti thi tum Naveen se but sach yahi hai ki Naveen ab nahi hai humare beech. Tum hi socho koi bhi insaan jis ki shakl bilkul tumhare bhai k jaise hai kya tum us ko apna bhai maane lagogi?"

Naina was still silent but she was understanding what Raj wanted to say, "Naina tum meri ek brave cadet ho aur ab meri wife jo aaj apni kabiliyat se yahan pahuch chuki hai ki itne kam time me vo Captain ban chuki hai, kya tum ko suit karta hai sab k saamne aise respond karna? Naina hum jaante hain ki hum yahan kyoun aayein hain aur agar isi tarah se tum apna patience kho dogi to bahut jaldi hi sab ki nigahein hum par hongi jo mujhe lagta hai aaj k baad vaise bhi honi hain."

He said thoughtfully and now Naina realized that kitna bada us ne problem create kar diya hai is misin k liye.

After sometime of silence Naina said, "i am sorry Raj."

Raj looked at her and said, "tum ko pata hai kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki ab tumhari hobby banta jaa raha hai sorry kehna."

Naina looked at him and her face was telling that she was geniunely sorry for what she did, "i am extremely sorry Raj, mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha aur kaise mai bhool gayi ki aap ki wife hone k saath saath mai ek army officer bhi hoon jis ko aisa karna shobha nahi deta hai."

Raj gazed her and he didn't like that sad expression on her face so he thought of some mischeif, "Galti ki haito saza to milegi hi."

Naina looked at him and said, "Mujhe pata hai Raj ki maine jo galti ki hai us ki koi bhi saza kam hai. Par mai kya karoon...", aage Naina bol nahi paayi kyounki us ki awaaz us ki aakhon se behte hue ansoon k saath hi shayad kam pad gayi thi sab kuch kehne k liye.

Raj was unable to see these tears in her eyes he moved towards her and gently removed her palms which were covering her face, "Naina...meri Naina k naino me ye anson nahi bus hasi acche lagti hai."

He said. "I am sorry Raj." And she hugged him tightly shedding tears because of her guilt and Raj was just making her relax knowing very well that the results of this blunder can be harmful.


Here:-

"Kuch pata chala hai sir, jo humare kaafi kaam aa sakta hai."

"Bataiye Captain." "Sir phone pe ye sab batana kya theek rahega?"

"Hmmm," and he thought for a while, "do roj k andar sapatami ghumman shah."

"Theek hai."


Next day:-

When Naina woke up she didn't find Raj near him and she bcame tensed. 'Ye Raj kahan chale gaye?' she tried his cell but it was not reachable. But she has to leave for her clases so she got ready and left for the class.

Raaste me hi Alekh mil gaya us ko. "Alekh tune R...", to which he gave her a glare, "Mera matlab Vyom ko dekha hai kahin? Pata nahi subah subah kahan chale gaye hain."

"Tu tensin mat le, mere ko bata k gaye hain sir kahin kaam se nikle hain aa jaayenge thodi der me. Tere class vahin arrange ki gayi hai un ki jagah par."

"Mujhe bata k to jaa sakte the na?"

"Tu so rahi thi n ato tujhe distrurb nahi kiya unhone bus."

"Haan bahane to aaj kal vaise bhi bahut rehte hain un k pass?"

"Naina tu bhi na, jaanti hai na sir ko. Chahe jitna gussa dikha apun k saamne par sir k saamne tera ye gussa nahi chalne waala hai." Naina smiled at him.


Far away from the Academy:-

"Hak allah..." a baba traced someone.

That man turned to baba's direction. "Kuch dhoondhne aaya hai baccha yahan ya kuch maangane?"

"Dono samajh lijiye baba?"

"Kuch chal raha hai tere man me?"

"Bahut kuch."

"Jis ki talash me aaya hai, teri talash jaldi hi poori hogi aur mil paayega tu us se."

"Par baba koi raasta nahi mil raha hai."

"Jaise har marz ki dawa hoti hai vaise apni chahat tak pahuchne ka bhi raasta hota hai na beta." "Par baba vo raasta kaise milega?"

"Kuch palon me tujhe teri uljhan se tujhe aaram aa jaayega. Yahan se utaar(north) me jaa aur jo sab se pehla insaan milega vahi tujhe saari baaton ka jawab de dega."

"Theek hai baba." Vo insaan jaise hi mudne laga fir se us ko baba ne rok liya, "sun ye leta jaa."

"Ye kya hai baba?"

"Ye babhoot hai is peer ki dargaah ki jo tere kaam aayegi. Apni biwi ka dhyaan rakhna vo kuch pareshaan hai abhi kisi baat se. Ye us ki madad karega pareshaani door karne me." That man smiled and went in same direction which was told by that baba. After reaching approx one kilometer he saw some guys loading something in a truck. 'Itne ghane jungle me truck is waqt?' he became surprised. 'Is ka matlab mera shak sahi tha. Kahin na kahin bahut bada plan hai ye.'

"maine kaha na aap se ki yahan aap ko vo mil jaayega." He turned and now we can see his face he was Rajveer.

"Hmm, par maanana padega acting bahut acchi kar lete ho tum."

"Kya karoon sir jaroori tha. Aap ne dhyaan rakha tha bahut yahan aane me mai bus check karna chahta tha ki kahin koi aap ka peecha karte karte yahan tak to nahi aa gaya hai na."

"It's fine Captain, filhaal mujhe ye batao kaise pata chala tumhe ye sab?"

"Sir training me laga hua tha."

"Training kaun se?"

That man smiled, "sir aap ko pata hai jis din mujhe yahan in logon k hone ka suraag mila tha us din se hi mai is mazar par reh kar baba bana hua hoon."

"Oh to ye waali training."

"Bus sir tab se mai yahin rehta hoon aur baaki saari information maine in k baare me collect kar li hai."

"Par kabhi kahin kuch gadbad to nahi hua na?"

"Abhi tak to sab theek hai aur saari information maine is chip me load kar di hai." And he handed him a chip placed in a coin.

"Par ye to coin hai officer."

"Haan sir," he pressed a small point and the coin opened and Raj could see a small chip inside. "Sir aap is par apne finger rakhiye, koi bhi." And Raj did the same. The man pressed some keys on his lap top and start doing something.

After sometime, "ho gaya", and he looked at Raj, "sir ye ab aap ki finger print se hi open hoga, if someone tries to steel this chip he will be unable to take it out untill he has your finger prints." Raj smiled at him and his mind.

"Well done captain."

"Thank u sir. Sir to aage ki startegy kya hogi?"

"Us k liye mujhe thoda waqt chahiye officer, kuch log humare team aur join karne waale hain. Jaise hi vo team join karte hain baaki k plans un k saath baith k banane padenge."

"Theek hai sir."

"Anything else officer?"That man thought for a while but his mind was hesitating and he was thinking weather he should say this or not. "Kya baat hai officer, mujhe aisa kyoun lag raha hai ki aap kuch kehna chahte hain mujh se par kisi vajah se keh nahi paa rahe hain."

"Sir vo...thoda personal baat thi."

Raj looked at him, "kahiye."

"Sir vo mam ka behavior thoda jyada ho gaya tha aur jahan tak meri information hai un logon ne mam k past k baare me jaane k liye logon ko laga diya hai. And you know i fear kahin vo aap k past k baare me jaane ki koshish na karein. Kyounki aisa agar hua to i am sure that un ko kuch pata to nahi chalega but ho sakta hai shakal k milne se vo aap ko Rajveer prove kar k trap karne ki koshish karein." Raj thought for a while and it was right that it can be dangerous for him and he should have to control Naina more and he knows how.

"Don't worry officer mai sab theek kar loonga."


A few days later:-

"Raj...kya baat hai kuch soch rahe hain aap?" Naina asked.

"Haan Naina soch to raha hoon."

"Kya baat hai?"

Raj looked at her and showed her a small piece of paper which was in his pocket
, "bach k rehna captain rok nahi paaoge tum hume is baar."

"Ye kahan se mila?"

"Aaj mere class k baad mujhe orderly de kar gaya tha, maine poocha ki kahan se aaya hai paper to us ne bataya ki mere naam ka Courier hai."

"Par aisa kya ho sakta hai?"

"Naina kal fresher ball hai na."

"Haan to?"

"Mujhe lagta hai us me koi gadbadi jaroor honi hai."

"Par Raj ye to bahut risky ho jaayega humare cadets khatre me pad jaayenge."

"Hmmm", and he started thinking something, "kuch sochna padega." And looked at Naina.

Suddnely he got up with his chair and close to Naina, "ek plan hai mere pass."

"Kya?" And the rest convo was secret as usual.


Next day:-

"Raj kahan the aap subah se pata hai maine aap ko kahan kahan nahi dhoondhna?"

He just gave a smile and said, "haan to batao kahan kahan nahi dhoondha."

"Mai mazak nahi kar rahi hoon, bataiye na kahan the aap?"

"Bus aaj shaam ki kuch preprations karni thi."

"Oh ok"

"Poochogi nahi ki kya prepartions thi?"

Naina looked at him, "mujhe pata hai na ki jab aap jaroori samjhoge to bata doge mujhe." "Itna bharosa hai?"

Raj looked in he reyes. "Apne aap se bhi jyada."

"Kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai Naina ki kahin tumhara yakeen to gaya to mai to jaaoonga." Raj said still looking in her eyes but Naina knew that he was thinking something deep.

"Major...kuch bhi kahiye aap par mujhe apni jaan pe yakeen hai ki vo kabhi mera saath nahi chodegi." She said whispering in his ears and gave a peck on his lips. She tried to move away but Raj didn't gave her a chance and pulled her in his embrace tightly to kiss her on her lips. Soon the kiss bcame more drugging and demanding when Raj carried her in his arms and lay her on the bed. They were still engrossed in their kissing and soon Raj's hands started roaming at her body. Naina shivered at his touch on her.

This was the first time when Raj was touching her like this arising a feeling to be loved by him in her. She was moaning under him and he was just exploring her female beauty. Soon he left her lips and moved downwards to kiss her bare skin. He removed her saari pallo and his gaze fell at the twin mounds just perfect to be explored and his sensous touch has made their tips erect to see how much Raj would love to taste them and love them. He wanted to love them and taste those honey peeks and he captured them with his hands in order to make Naina loose her senses and yeah it affected in right direction.



Here:-

"Sab set hai na."

"Yes sir, aaj us captain ko dikhana hi padega ki hum bus dhamkiyaan nahi dete.Bahut kuch kar bhi saktein hain."

"Dhyaan se Major, tum jis tarah se chal rahe ho mujhe nahi lagta hai ki Major Rathode ko itne halke me liya jaa sakta hai."

"Mujhe pata hai sir aap fikr mat kijiye mujhe pata hai ki kaise kya karna hai. Is baar maine ek back up plan bhi ready kar rakha hai."

"Theek hai Major hum aap ko ek mauka aur de rahein hain aaj par ye samajh lijiye ki aaj agar aap fail ho gaye to aage se aap humare kisi kaam k nahi aur phir kya hoga aap hum se acche se jaante hain ye baat."

"Don't worry sir aisa mauka hi nahi aayega is baar."


In Academy:-

Cadets were busy in preprations when Major Talreja entered and saw everyone busy in doing preprations for Fresher's ball. "Oh to ye sab fir se is faltoo k kaam me busy ho gaye hain."

"So cadets aap sab k pass aur koi kaam nahi bacha hai kya jo yahan apna aur hum sab ka ek poora din waste kar rahe hain." All cadets stopped listening this.

But one of them said, "par sir ye to har saal hota hai na."

Talreja glared at him and said, "mujhe pata hai cadet, aur ye bhi pata hai ki aaj se do saal pehle is bakwaas concept ki shuruvaat ki gayi thi. Mujhe samajh me nahi aata ki aap logon ko kya lagta hai ki aap log yahan kuch seekhne aaye hain ya party manane k liye. Kitna ajeeb lagta hai mujhe is Army Academy ka atmospehre. Lagta hai jaise yahan sab masti aur time pass karne aaye hain. Jab se ye faltoo ka kaam karna start kiya hai aap logon ne tab se sivaay is k socha ka hai? Aap logon ko to maza hi aata hai na ki class na ho ek din aur aap sab ko aaram karne ka aur maze karne ka mauka mil jaaye."

"Galat soch hai ye aap ki Major." He was interupted by Major Abhyuday Verma.

"Oh to aap aa hi gaye, aakhir jab aap k pyaare nikamme cadets ko daat padti hai to aap se door kaise raha jaayega."

He just smiled and said, "I think Major ye to aap ki bhi duty honi chahiye na ki aap ko pata ho ki har ek Military Academy me aisa hota hi hai humesha se to is me koi nayi baat nahi hai aur itne se vajah se cadets ko daatna mujhe samajh me nahi aata hai."

"Mujhe aap se ye pata karne ki jaroorat nahi hai Major ki meri duties kya hain aur mujhe lagta hai ki is time waste programme se accha cadets kuch aisa karein jis se un ki physical strength increase ho."

"So i think Major kabhi kabhi apne regular schedule se hat kar agar cadets toda break le lenge to ek fresh mind se vo training lene me jyada interest lenge. Don't u think like it Major?" he asked.





Done for now

so pls read and enjoy

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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing

thanxx 4 d pm yaar
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i knew it i knew it ye naveen jaisa hi dikhta hai per problem ye ha ki kya ye sach me abhyuday verma ha ya fir naveen😕😕😕 ab problem ye ha ki naina ne usko dekha aur use naveen hi laga to ab wo pura time uske peeche hi padi rahegi ki ye naveen bhaiya hi hain😭😭😭 uske saath saath wo guilty bhi ha ki use sab ke saamne aise react nahi karna chahiye tha ab mission me problem aa sakti hai aur yahi baat raj use samjha raha tha aur cheer up karne ki koshish kar raha tha😳😳😳
aur ab ye naya captain kaun aa gaya yahan is per bhi raaz -the mystery continues ka board lag gaya ab toh😆😆😆 the convo of naina and aalekh was good😊😊😊
lekin ab ye dargaah waale baba kaun se hain jo raj ko uski manzil ki ore ishara kar rahe hain😕😕😕 ye wohi waale baba to nahi jo orderly ban kar ghoom rahe hain😕😕😕 aur ab in dono ne kaun sa plan bana liya fresher's ke liye😕😕😕
and after that rn romance was superb😳 the way naina relied on raj is very good👏👏 ab main phir se ek baar poochti hun ye sachci main naveen ha ya koi aur kyonki wo kuch kuch dialogues bhi raj ki tarah hi bolta hai😕😕😕
itni bak bak karne me to batana hi bhul gayi ki update to bahut achcha tha👏👏👏
ek baat poochun...fic ka naam edit kar dete hain aur rakhte hain chaahat the mystery continues😆😆😆
pls pls pls pls continue soon😉😉😉 to give us more and more suspense😉😉😉

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Mehak

Nice part😊👏👏 So Maj.Abhyuday Verma is Naveen's look alike and thats why Naina shouted like that.I hope he is Naveen but how is this possible?? Naina was finding it hard to believe this but Raj convinced her..he was just his look alike..Naina was feeling so guilty for shouting like this but Raj comforted her like always.he really knows her well. but this has really put them in a dangerous position..their enemies have started investigating their past.Raj knows this and he is really worried..but Naina has full faith in Raj's capabilities.
That baba scene was really written well.loved it completely👏👏👏
Who is trying to create trouble during fresher's ball??.I hope Raj is able to fail all thier plans.
Raj was so happy to hear that Naina has full faith in him..both of them were lost in their love😳😳
As usual Maj.Talreja was shouting on the cadets (he seems to b inspired by Maj.Nair😆😆😆 ) when Maj.Abhyuday come for their resue.he seems to b a nice person who is friendly towards his cadets just like Raj. 😊
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
abhyuday naveen hai kya????? and dekho use positive hee rakhna...and use naina aur rajveer ka dost banana...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update !
talreja is just like major nair...😡
good that Abhyuday came...his words were same what Raj had spoken to Maj.Nair during fresher's ball at KMA...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi ver!!!!
awesome part!!!!👏👏👏
Major Abhyuday Verma is the identical twince of naveen!!!...and naina is finding hard to believe that its not naveen!!!...raj and naina convo was really good!!!...hahahah the great BABA sceen was hilarious 🤣!!!
i love the romantic sceen between RN!!!!...SUPERB JOB!!!
who is that major playing the evil roll???...wow yeh talreja kitna khados hai😡...totally opposite of Major Abhyuday Verma!!!
really nice update!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️...cont soon!!!
love
esha!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxxx😊
nice 👍🏼
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hey.. lovely update..😃 bingo! so that guy was a look alike of Naveen.. 😲 and the baba scene was hilarious.. was it Choubey, by any chance??? 😆.. looking fwd to the fresher's ball..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update by u dear <3
i loved it😍

thanks a lot for the PM🤗

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