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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jaldi batao ki who s yash's friend

dis part was awesome............................👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 9B
very nice part.................the things they try to keep Geet happy...............lovely..................cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read your FF!
It's great!
Continue soon and do PM me if you can!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. guess yash's frnd is dev... Arjun's dadi is cool.. continue soon n plzz add me onto ur pm list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
maybe evil dev
arjun is sweetheart
the way he put of geet
mind awesome update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
PlZzzz update soon n do pm me really interesting story really liked it wannA read more
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 10

Yash and prem liked this Geet better' her smiles and her laughter were precious to them'. They had always seen geet smiling. After all she was the most priceless possession any of the handa family owned. Prem walked out and ran to the garden to see geet. When he got there he saw arjun and Arohi giving each other sly smiles. They were both trying to speak to each with their eyes without getting caught.. little did they know prem had caught them.

Prem ' ahem.. yahan kya ha raha hai.. hmm?

Arjun and Arohi quickly stopped what they were doing and looked at prem..

Arohi ' who bhai hum tho'. Baas ermmm'

Geet was still laughing at this whole situation. She decided to tell prem what had happened. Geet narrated the whole story to him and he too started laughing' he looked at Arohi who got a little shy and she ran back inside the house. Geet fell on the floor laughing. For some reason she couldn't stop laughing and the situation was at all that funny. But why did she find it hilarious for'

Prem and arjun looked at each other and smiled. They were glad to see geet getting back to her normal self. Just then Sonia and Vijey came in the garden followed by maan and daadi'.

MAAN POV

Maan seeing geet smile and laugh like that was like he hit an million pound jackpot' wait what' he thought '. I need to focus on the reason I am here.. to BABYSIT' that too a teenager' how my life has changed these past few days' firstly I hate girls'.i don't like the way the fall over me' or their intentions to use me to get what they what' I'm just a money making machine to them' something about them really P***es me off.. but with geet its totally different.. I'd do anything to keep her smiling' shut up maan' focus'

END OF MAAN'S POV

Prem broke out of his hug. He saw that geet had stopped laughing. Immediately she went to her father' she looked at him and wondered if he knew anything about her past. She had hidden this from him nd her mother.. but her intentions were good. She didn't want to hurt them.. she didn't want them to get upset over nothing' she loved them soo much' if her father found out what had happened to his beloved daughter he'd have an heart attack'

Geet ' Papa'. Aap yahan kya kar raha ho?? Hmmm???

(Sorry guys I'm tired of calling Vijey by his name so now I'm going to call geet's parents mama and papa')

Papa ' arre yeh mera ghar haii' main yaha nahi aae saktha kya??

Geet ' kyun nahi aae sakthey lekin'. She paused giving prem a mischevious smile'. He knew she was upto something'

Papa ' lekin kya???

Geet ' arre papa'. Agar aap ko yahan anna hai tho hum log ko kahi baaj do'

Papa was confused. Hmmm.. she was getting stranger day by day she thought' after all she is my daughter so she would be strange.. mama was thinking the same thing. She looked at her dear husbands face and noticed his little confusions'

Mama ' arre Vijey yeh chehra kyun ban raha ho hmm??

Papa ' kaun sa chehra'

Mama ' wohi jo aap ki beti bana thi hain jab use kuch samaj nahi hata'

Papa ' aur vo kaisa hai'

Chi chi thought geet'. They have guests here and here they are romancing,.,

Prem and Geet ' chi chii.. mama aap dono yeh band karoge please. Yuck'.

Sonia and Vijey both smiled at their son and daughter' and when Vijey looked at his wife she smiled shyly and blushed at the same time. She then put her head down so no-one can see her blushing'. Even after 18 years of marriage their love was still there' thought geet'

Mama changed the topic'.

Mama ' acha kaha jaana hai hmmm'

Geet ' hmmmm cinema'..

Prem ' what noooo discooo..

Arjun ' nooo ermm to a party'..

Maan ' party' aur thume haha ' yeh right ' dicsoo sounds fun'

Geet ' cinemaaaa'.

Prem ' discooo-

Arjun ' Partyyyyy

Geet ' YASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH VEERJIIIIIIII' YASH Veerjiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ' jaldi aaye'' YASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'

Everyone stopped talking' they all looked at geet'. Oh sh*t' we are in big trouble'. Yash heard geet screaming his name' whats wrong with geet he thought. There in his bedroom yash was doing some important work for his company.. he had to leave everything and he rushed down to the garden where everyone was. even Arohi heard the screaming and she thought something was wrong'.

Yash panicked' he ran down to the garden to see geet's face red with anger'.

Yash ran to her and put his hands on her face'

Everyone knew what geet and yash relationship is like'. Geet gets what she wants with yash and after everything that happened he would do anything to keep her happy'.

Yash ' kya hua geet'. He was scared.

Geet ' bhaii yeh log mujhe cinema nahi leh kar ja raha hai.

Yash looked surprised.

Yash ' kya??.... baas itne se baat'

Geet ' haan' she said innocently'

Yash took a deap breath in and then out and looked at geet.

Yash- mujhe laga thumhe kuch ho gaya hai'

Geet ' bhai mujhe kuch nahi hua'

Arohi ' baas cinema keh liye'

Geet ' haan diii. Prem bhai and maan want to go discooo and arjun just wants to go to a party'

Arohi ' party!!! Where??!! I want to go to a party'

Prem & Maan ' Discoo..

Geet ' cinemaaa..

Prem ' discooo..

Geet looked at him with her eyes wide open and then she give him her best puppy dog eyes'

Oh crap'' he thought' no wayyy..

Prem ' geet. Don't look at me with them eyes' please he said and turned away'.

Geet ' please bhaiiii and she went infront of him again'

Prem then closed his eyes and said ' geet' stop na'..

Geet looked at maan then maybe he will soften up she thought' after all no-one can say noo to these eyes she thought' :)

Geet ' please maan' pretty please' she smiled at him and gave him her look of distruction' distruction for the boys she thought. They will defo say yeahh'.

Maan was getting distracted by her eyes' he was already falling for them and now this look has made it worse' he didn't like the idea of her begging '.

Maan ' voo' main'. He looked at yash.. yash grinned'.

Yash ' Good luck getting out of this one dude'. Ufff' that looks a killer to say no too'

Arjun ' yeahhh defooo a killer' geet we can go to the cinema okayyyy'.

Geet looked at arjun and said yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee'. She then looked back at maan and gave him her killer look' she had to make him change his mind'. She folded her hands together and she kept saying please over and over again in her quiet voice'. Pleaseeee'.

Maan gave up. He was getting lost in them eyes'

Maan ' okay okay' cinema it is then '..

Geet shouted .. wahooooo'.. and she launched herself in his arms. She threw her arms around his neck and pushed herself into his chest. Involuntary his arm came around geet and went to her waist.. she hugged and when he hugged her back she felt a weird buzz. This was the first time their bodies were this close ( I think :P) her body started warming up and he suddenly felt a weird desire wanting to pass through his whole body' she closed her eyes and he closed his. He squeezed her closer to him. She started to breath heavily.. her heartbeats were starting to beat faster as if they were having a race' she breathed in his scent'.he smelled manly lol ' hugo boss aftershave' wow' she thought' suddenly she thought her little fantasy was coming true' wait what fantasy she thought'. While the hug was going on everyone looked at the young couple' they were surprised to see this reaction that too coming from geet. Yash was smiling anf at the same time was cursing his best friend. Prem wanted to drag maan off her but they both knew it was geet who had hugged him first soo they didn't do anything. They knew maan wouldn't think anything of this hug but even if he did' they trusted maan' maan was thinking all sorts before he hugged geet' but when she launched herself in his arms' he forget everything.. he even forget where he was stood'. They immediately broke out of the hug when they heard the sound of a phone ringing' both moved back and looked down' geet felt awkward but shy' she kept her head down and she smiled' sorry. She said..

It was yash's phone that rang' he answered it '

Yash ' hey dude' long time man'

Guy'. Haan bro ' how are you'

Yash ' I'm good thanks.. whats up?

Guy'I'm in india'. Thought I'd come and see you for a little while'

Yash ' kya'?? Sach '. Sure dude I'll come and pick you up'

Guy ' cool thanks mate'

Yash ' no problem Dev'

There it was' that name that immediately sent geet in to a pool of misery' that name ruined her life and he was friends with her brother'. She looked up at maan' she couldn't see anything aas her vison was blurred by here tear.. before she could fall and hit the ground she felt a strong pair of hands lift her up..

Next part'.GEET AND DEV MEET'.. Geet THINKING about maan'


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Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update
Haha geet with her killer looks
Awww luvd der hug & Geets mum & dad romancing infront ov der kids
Can't w8 4 nxt part
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomee ff
read it in a go
cont soon
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thank ya

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Posted: 14 years ago
super amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm

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