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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.. maan always leave geet😡
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar agagey se mere comment mein sirf ek sawal hongey tumhare liye nothing else i am going to comment...................kab mila rahe ho maan aur geet ko
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Posted: 14 years ago






















part 129



mk - da da da dy loves mama too. yah we know tat but mk msk na thora sa he ajjkal tumhare dady ko der se samajh ati he. un ko thek karna pare ga.aur is kam me hum sab tumhare sath haan.


yaar muskan aik baat to batao kahen yeh maan ki DB to nahi jo esi harkaten kar rahe he coz original maan wali koi adat is me nahi siwae gusa karne k. kam karne ki bhi i think acting kar raha hoga


The whole night Maan wondered wat was it he couldn't read in those eyes. dekha kaha tha na maan wali koi baat nahi rahe is me ab to mujhe pura yaqeen he k muskan tum bhi maan ki DB se kam chala rahe ho.

original maan hota to geet ka yeh haal na hota.
bachi khud daaadaaaayyyyyy kah rahe he aur ose samajh nahi a rahe.
agr bachi k expression samajh sakta he to alfaz ko samajhne me der kyo




geet




Geet didn't know how long she could pull these lies with her. The lie that her daddy comes home late..that he is traveling most of the time.. she didn't know wat else to tell her. In there house in kashmir it was easy to lie that he stays in delhi.. but staying in delhi how will she explain why her father not coming home.
Anyone who came to their house in kashmir would assume that 3 people lived there..maan, Geet & mk.. she had a separate wardrobe of Maan with his belongings. His toiletries in the washroom. His cups, plate, bowls in the kitchen. His shoes in the shoe rack..soil it at times. Like he just lived with them. She would pretend Maan visited them now & then. She would gift her toys saying her daddy got it for her. Maan is been part of their life ..every single day. Geet wonderfully portrayed to her until now since she was young..but now as she is growing it is becoming tough & impossible.





geet and mk's convo is




Maan Singh Khurana didn't know wat was happeneing. He cleared his throat , stood up & turned to leave.
Rano came running - tumne Geet ko dehka kya??
she held his collar & cried - u saw her right?? tell me u saw her. Tell me she is alive.
She shook him - woh zinda hain na. Ek bar bolo who zinda hain..bus ek bar...



haan haan wo zinda he. dont worry

app ki geet aur mk ayen ge (in rakhi gulzar style)



simi91 poem is




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Posted: 14 years ago
part 130

Rano hugged him & cried - meri bachi... ..sab meri galti hain. Mujhe unki shaadi ke liya haan nahi karna tha. I shouldn't have told him get registered married
papaji snapped - WAT?

mami g k 7 salon baad hi sahi app ne bataya to maneet ki shadi k bare me

Rano had never seen her husband breaking down.. but he did today..he broke down fearing the terrible pain his daughter might be going through that too alone.
Papaji - woh ek bar kahti mujhe se main Maan ke paavan tak pakade leten uskeliya



papa ji




Geet took mk to the ice-cream shop & got her fav chocolate ice cream. After eating her third cone she was little better mode than wat she was in. All she was speaking was about her daddy. She still couldn't believe she actually met him.

She kept giggling & laughing when she saw him walking in holding devansh & anjali on either sight. Geet sensed her restlessness & followed her view. Maan instantly looked at them. Mk threw the ice-cream away & began to cry & ran out.





ab maza aye ga maan tumhe sedha karne tumhari beti a gaye he


for u mk

They ran behind mk ..she was crying & not liking her father with some one else. She rushed out in the traffic.. Geet instantly picked mk who stood in the middle of the traffic crying not knowing where to go further. Maan immediately hugged them & pushed them away from the car that just zoomed passed them. He held them like it was his life. His heart raced like it may just explode any time. His hand held them like a cocoon. It felt so earthy to have them close to his heart. Like it was just yesterday when Geet was in his arms in the hospital scared of prem's baby. His hold was like the blanket to all the pain & sorrows she has been facing all alone. It felt like home, this was she wanted , longing, craving, yearning, desiring.. just to be in his arms, just to be with him she probably may would have just melted .



Geet - aise koi traffic main bhag tha hain kya
Maan was immediately reminded of her standing over the ambulance & firing. He snapped out of his thought seeing mk scared. - usse kyun dant rahi ho
mk immediately jumped to his lap from hers. Geet gave a glare to her.
Mk - da...da....d.....a.....ma.mmmma...guuu....s.....a.....he couldn't follow. He just kissed.
he turned to cross the road carrying mk.. Geet kept looking at their instant bond they seem to form. She thought he may envy it..actually she was loving, like it was so perfect. Before she realized his hand held her wrist & helped them cross the road, his grip around her wrist, like he cared, like it was his, like it belonged there, it send sensation she thought she may not feel again, or thought she has over grown such feelings it felt wired craving for his touch yet again.




When they walked back to the ice-cream parlor Mk was still angry about Maan coming in with anjali & devansh. She couldn't stand their sight. Her face turned red & annoyed.
Geet looked at him & nodded - u came to meet mk right
Maan just played along - umm
Geet - u got them to make frds with mk
Maan - umm
mk was no where listening. She was still fuming. Maan lifted her kissing her again. She immediately showed the other cheek. Her nose where all red & eyes filled with tears. He placed few more kisses on her eyes & nose. Geet turned away not able to bear the happiness & emotions. Her eyes did feel burned but guess tears had dried up, long ago.
Mk - ka...l. me..ra sa....ath bo...a,,,rd ga..m..e. k...yy.....uu..nn. n..a...h..i kh...el...a. MK k..i..th..n..aa w..a...i..tttt k..ii..y..a...
yaar muskan yeh hamari mk pe deewangi wali geet ka kafi asar lagta he


mk - muje..wo....wali ch..aa..hi..ya
he got her another one. She giggled looking at Geet.
Geet - u have already had
Maan - its ok, just one more
Geet - aap isse begad rahen ho
Maan - tum hona isse sudharne ka liya



muskaan_cute19



Edited by cute-aly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES
CANT WAIT FOR NXT UPDATE
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.. how cute is mk doesnt want to leave maan 😃
but uhh maan why doesnt he understand geet 😡

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Posted: 14 years ago



part 131

Mk was still licking her cone & once in a while feeding him sitting his lap.

Geet - mk aap mama paas aajavo, they are going to gaming place now
mk snapped Geet hands & hugged Maan....nahi
geet looked helplessly at Maan.
Maan - why don't u join us.
Geet looked ay him reluctantly & then looked at the pleading face of mk.
She took a sharp breath & nodded.


she hugged him & kiss him all over, she didn't even look at any of the games.
He tried showing her some games, but she didn't want to get off from his lap not even for a sec. Eventually he had to leave the game.
Ayur - u r not coming to office today
Geet - nahi medical pe hoon
ayur - we have some leads on Maan Singh Khurana's kidnapping
Geet - umm..
still looking at Maan who was looking for her.
Ayur - it looks quite misleading
Geet - why
ayur - it seems like second kidnapping may not be connected with militants

By then she notices some wired moment, some guy walking towards Maan ..may be 6ft well built. She scanned him, he had a gun tucked in his back which bulging under his shirt.. she instantly cut the call & reached behind the person while Maan was still looking away from them. She pulled her mousegun & pressed it at the back just above his belt while his hand was just about to take the gun.. She whispered softly don't move. He instantly tried to lift his hand, hands down, walk out without creating any scene.

Guy smirked she kicked on his bleeding rib washing off the smile on his face & fainted instantly. She wiped the gun on his shirt & her shoes too.

Get him ready for interrogation.
Khan - aap tho medical

Maan - where were u?
Geet she was still panting & wiping the stain on her shoes - like always behind u
Maan - she didn't play any game
Geet - aap ho to she won't
he smiled ..but didn't understand that bit.
Geet - where are ur body guards?
Maan - neeche parking main hain
she rolled her eyes in frustration - aren't they paid to be with u
he quiet didn't get why she spoke about them may be because of this sudden panic in the mall he thought - mainne hi unhe



zingadi me bhi kya se kya hota rahta he kahan to maan ne prithvi ko geet ki protection k liye bheja tha aur kahan ab geet maan ko ese protect kar rahe he

and btw is sare kise me abhi tak raj ko kuch bhi pata nahi chala
.ose kahen na kahen se gk ka pata chal jana caheye tha

she didn't bother to listen to that & turned to leave. He held her hand - ghar nahi chalo ghi
her heart just skipped a beat.

He pointed at the door.. she just followed his gaze. Her dreams shattered ..came down like glass house shatters...again..like all her dreams... not her house..he meant papa - mama.. the smile which was forming expecting Khurana Mansion just died, she turned her face & walked away. He ran behind her, still carrying Mk.
Maan - ek bar mil tho lo
she couldn't refuse him, she could never. Not even if it killed her.


Rano - kanha tha beta?
Before she could say anything
papaji - koi kuch nahi puche ga meri bachi se
mk peeped from behind & looked at every one
Rano's heart missed a beat & tears just fell looking at the baby Geet as she reached to her. She looked just like Geet ..when Geet was a baby. Rano hugged her instantly - na..naaa..ni...
Rano nodded - naani
she carried her & took her to papaji & said - nanu
she smiled & kissed his cheek. - na...nann.uu



pic thanxs to aleena

in frndship no thanks dear




waiting for next




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


beautiful post muskan.👏loved it.
loved every pics.
aww so cute.


HHey
dear im glad u liked it
😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

omg how can u du this 2 me how could u i was so damn happy nd eagerly waiting 4 ur update nd u nt only broke her heart bt mine toooooo


the way her dreams gt shattered mine tooooo
nd then i understood the fact that this is only true


4 the very 1st time of aal ur updates this was the 1st 1 in which my heart cried (the 1 where she left also ) bt this 1 tou just 😭



my heart actually felt the pain i also dont kno y so much bt believe it pained so much so that my eyes gt dried

nd this really helped
i loved 2days part coz believe me it actually made me cry it made me feel how bad does it feel wen ur dreams are nt fulfilled nd u have 2 wait more inact wait that much that u will eventually 4get wat u were waiting 4 he knocked the door of her heart once again nd once again wen she opened she found nuthing in simple words she is still standing there where she was b4 7 yrz he stiil dont find any need 2 take her to their home nd nt her parents
4 him he is geeting her back aal her happiness in his way in his pov bt y dnt he understand 1 simple thing that her happiness lies in him is it so difficult 2 understand it is really so difficult 2 feel the pain is it so hard 4rm the 1 to whom u love 4rm the core of ur heart
bt i read this nd my heart came to the normal state jus 4 few moments


im sure soon he will realize everything
nd u will repair my heart once again


Bt i will try my best 2 sleep coz it seems real dificult 2 me

well nice part keep writing

wow..that was touching
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

part 130



muskaan_cute19





a lot dear😳

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