~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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CHARACTERS
Geet Handa- An 18 year old modern/ traditonal girl from Punjab studying in Delhi. Fun loving, bubbly, Beautiful, smart.

Maan Singh Khurana- 25 year old business tycoon from Delhi. HOT, charming yet angry.

Savitri Devi- Maan's Dadimaa. Very kind and wants the best for her grandson.

Dev- 22 years old. Maan's younger brother. Kind, handsome and loving.

Rano- Geet's Mother.

Kuldip- Geet's Father.

Aditya- Geet's friend who is attractive but Geet doesn't really like him that much
PART 7
After a few minutes, both Geet and Maan realized that they were getting too close to each other and quickly moved back. Geet was uncomfortable and decided to leave. Maan runs after Geet.
Maan- Wait Geet! I know that I went too close, I'm sorry.
Geet- No no, I'm..I'm not mad.
Maan- Geet, I'll take you home.
Geet- Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, I'm 18 years old. I'm capable of going alone.
Maan- Dekha. Tum gusse ho.
Geet- Maan, main gusse nahi hoon. Mera attitude bas aisa hi hain.
Maan- Par pehle nahi tha.
Geet- Han..par..vo main.... bye!
Geet starts walking and Maan slowly follows her. Geet decided to take a shortcut through an alley which leads her straight to her house. But, there were gang members over there.
As Geet walked by, a few gang members slowly came behind her and Geet knew that someone was following her. She tried walking away but someone came from the front.
Gunda- Eh, chori, chal aa na.
Geet- No thanks.
Gunda- Chal chal, bari English bol rahi ho, chal aa na.
Geet- Kaha na nahi aana.
The gunde from behind hold her by both her arms as one gunda slaps her and rips her saree. Then, Our HERO Maan Singh Khurana comes and saves her. Maan slaps the gundas and tackles the gunda who ripped Geet's saree. Geet screamed as Maan beat them up. When the Gundas were nearly unconcious, Geet started crying and came running into Maan's arms and HUGGED HIM. Maan also hugged her and smiled. As Maan comforted Geet in his arms, Maan spoke to her.
Maan- Maine kaha na, main tumhe chor doonga, par tum baat to sunti nahi.
Geet- Lagta ab mujhe aapki baat sunni chahiye.
Geet pulled back from the hug and tried to hide cover herself as her saree was ripped. Maan took off his coat and put it on Geet. As Geet was about to walk, she tripped an almost fell but Maan
saved her. He picked her up in both his arms and took her to her home. Maan asked Geet for her keys and still picked her up and took her upstairs to her room. He put her on her bed and was about to leave.
Geet- Arey, aap to mere boss hain. Atleast kuch peekar jana, aisa aacha nahi lagta.
Maan nodded.
Geet- Mujhe 2 minute change kar lendo.
Maan nodded. Geet went to the bathroom to change and came out in her nightsuit, cute shorts with a tank top.
Geet- Neeche chale?
Maan- Hmm...
Geet- Coffee peenge?
Maan- Han.
Geet makes two cups of coffee.
Maan- I only want two sugar cubes.
Geet- Okay.
Geet and Maan have coffee and talk for a while. Maan decides to leave.
Maan- 2:00 AM ho gaye, ab to jana parega.
Geet- Kyun? Wife pareshan ho jayegi? Ha Ha.
Maan- Uhh, I'm not married. Meri Dadimaa pareshan ho jayegi.
Geet- Oh. Mera matlab tha ke agar aapke girlfriend ko pata chal gaya ke aap raat ke 2:00 AM apne Assistant Architect ke ghar mein ho, to use kitna bura lagega.
Maan smiles.
Maan- I don't have a girlfriend.
Geet- Oh, mujhe laga ke aap jaise hot larke....
Maan looks at Geet as Geet realizes that she called her boss hot.
Geet- Mera matlab tha ke aap jaise businessman ke paas to girlfriend hogi.
Maan- Nahi abhi nahi. Vo special larki ab tak nahi mili.
Geet- Ohh. I'm sure ek din mil jayegi.
Maan- I hope so.
Maan stares in Geet's eyes and Geet was totally hypnotized. After a few moments, Geet and Maan controlled themselves.
Maan- Uhmm. ok, bye.
Geet- Maan! Mere se Thank You nahi keh hua.
Maan- Thank you?? Kiske liye?
Geet- Vo, aapne mujhe gunde se bachaya.
Maan- Oh, that. Your welcome. Apna dhyaan rakhna. See you at work tomorrow. Bye.
Geet- Bye.
Geet closes the door and bits her lip and jumps.
Geet- YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! HE'S SINGLE!!!!!!!
Geet starts dancing and starts doing bhangra.
Then, Geet went to sleep only thinking about Maan, her boss, her saver, her dream boy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update

loved it

loved maan saving him

loved geet jumping saying yes he is single

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome👏.......... geet kitni smart hai .😆......... baatoh baatoh mein maan ka relationship status jan liya ......... of course geet ur jumping in joy after all he is Maan Singh Khurana😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

awesome👏.......... geet kitni smart hai .😆......... baatoh baatoh mein maan ka relationship status jan liya ......... of course geet ur jumping in joy after all he is Maan Singh Khurana😉

i know geet is smart!! shes really really different from the geet on tv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it

loved maan saving him

loved geet jumping saying yes he is single

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

thanks sooooo much for the love!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 7
Maan is a hero.....................lovely part.................

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