1st of all Thank u for writing such a story...it will remain one of my all time fab...its just amazing to realize how u had summaries such a brilliant concept in just two parts when sometimes a full flaged ff is not suffice for it. . .hatts off dear...
Now for the part, as far as i know the character of Armaan had gotten into my heart as soon as in the previous part he uttered those sexy " good, now get out"(oh , i mean it, it would be hell sexy to think of an angry Armaan, with his dangerously stern and husky voice, coupled with his blazing yet cold blue orbs uttering such words) to that ba****d in his car. But in this part u had staged him more higher. A devil's advocate who fought against the devil itself for justice. U portrait the humane elements of love, care, concern, worry , fear , need, vulnerability within his cold, hard and professional exterior with so much ease that people can not help but fall in love with him more and more. All people has their own baggage to bear. Armaan also have his own in the form of the treatment of his ill father but what made his character is his choice. His choice to leave his own baggage behind ti ease the weight of some one else. In his conversation with Rahul when he said those words three times i somehow knew that there lies the loophole of this case but i am happy to be proved right but what i liked most that u have not made this story clinched by making him drop the case. I think he also wants to see that b*****d get punished infront of his eyes not only this its him who paved the way for more vigorous punishment. all in all this Armaan will always remain in my memory.
Now Riddhima, in this part u r more keen on showing her vulnerable parts whereas in the previous part it was more about her strength and i felt in this part u have made her more humane. The way she was craving for support at the lift, love at the park and hope at her suicide attempt brings out the trauma of an women who had gone through such ordeal , brilliantly. Its really ironic how she is expecting a hope of life from the man who himself is the barriar between her and life. but thats how life is...i guess...
u surely deserve an brilliant applaud for such craftsmanship... cudos..
P>S> i would jump up and down if u would decide to give
an epilogue to it. I know its thrilling to imagine an end by myself but i think that the end...no 'end' would be wrong word , i should use the 'course'of this story should be only decided by u... i don't want ,even my mind to turn and twist the story ( i know, u would protest but trust me if u can have a live version of how ur story would take shape in other people's mind {no offence to anyone, i am even taking myself in this 'others' }, u will want to write it on ur own, this story deserve it )..but at the end its ur story , so ur call. . i only can request.
love ya...
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