Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 74

Originally posted by: Aanya.

You always come up with these adaskdhkj AMAZING concepts. HOW? And you like my writing?! 😆 I shall definitely comment on this after finals <3

Love you!

xoxo

Originally posted by: cant.be.assed.

You live in UK right? :P

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Haha..at the moment yeah..😆

Originally posted by: niknavyu

If i am to conclude in short i can say that an extremely sensitive n unjust thing put in a justful way n now the detailed comment- by reading the first 2 lines i could make out that it is a rape case but all my guesses were on armaan being the criminal n as the case proceeded i was busy giving him all sorts of bad words bcause of the way u had written abt ridzis emotion, later when u showed him as the lawyer of that criminal i hated him all the more. It was only later the supermarket n cofee wala episode made me think that if every lawyer supported the good then there would be no profession called lawyers n later the restaurant scene melted my heart. While reading i could go through all these emotions because u have potrayed all these characters at its best, i am really looking forward to the way ur continuing it. this concept is definately one of the ur best

love

nikki

Originally posted by: cant.be.assed.

Yay me too, hi5! 😆

Originally posted by: Arima47

Amazin part n totaly new n superb concept...
armaan in opposite party bt stil looks out for ridhima
hope ridhima soon gets justice n nxt time she is strong in court...i knw it is easy to say bt difficult to do...
love d bond between rahul,ridhima n muskaan...
i m already craviin to read nxt part...so want d nxt update super fast...
thnx 4 pm 😊

Originally posted by: roshni_A

OMG...that was a splendid piece from u...i am still searching for right words. .I always love ur writing and u just again proved why...

1st of all having Armaan in this avatar was absolutely refreshing and welcoming...i love the way how u gave a whole new dimension to his character altogether. . .brilliant..his character stands out erect, strong and powerful with the blend of supremacy and grace..i loved it... and now Riddhima..i fall in love with her here. . .loved the way u defined her confidence and poise . . given her a total new shade. .i can't say i can understand the feeling of a women who gone through this type of mishap but its a remarkable job from ur part to bring such kind of story in the from of Riddhima. . .i just pray to god for the women who have been trough it be have the courage like Riddhima to stand tall. . .

i will just look forward for the next part...pls don't be late...i think it will be a hell for me to wait for the next part...

Originally posted by: hopefully

Sanaa, that was FAB,Period.

Do u accept online hugs🤗🤗

that was one brilliant piece of work girl.. where is the superlike button?!😆

Ive hardly stumbled across stories involving these touchy kinda topics recently, i must say im still in awe!

-->The USP is the plot Sana.. how much i adored it! what's in the Grey matter of yours?? giving you all Hatke ideas! oh, my... all i could think of was how cool is this plot uve threaded!

-->the scenario's u put up,its very easy to picturize the scene going on there as it folds..

your narrating style is mesmerising, getting us all involved in this story, imagining it happening as spectators..

-->Characters! 👏 a splendid work there dear.. Rids Armaan Muski Rahul! we know them as happy-go-lucky characters mostly all the time, but here it was so easy for them to fit in these shoes!

Loved the first part of the story(court).. i was almost certain what was going on in her mind, sympathised with her, felt how uncomfortable it must be for her but most of all,i felt a sense of Pride for her.. for standing up against even when facing it is the hardest thing to do..

-->Armaan!! girl u have the knack in bringing out all possible Armaan's!!

i wanted to hate him, just for a moment.. but couldnt.. something told me, complete the OS then judge him!

-->Incident after Supermarket, i looved it how Armaan listened to her, letting her talk.. vent out her feelings.. Rids is one hell of a strong character!!

also could you please post this and Love, maybe in other separate single posts? ?just a suggestion, i know this thread contains all your short stories but i somehow feel it will garner more views if posted separately.. Ignore this if u feel otherwise..

Please continue this soon.. im very much eager to read what happen's next.. pretty pleachh!!

Cheers (still in awe with the story)

Prarthana😊

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Perfect..!! so you can stay awake till then..😃

Originally posted by: Riarai2346

nice start dear:)