Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 107

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Have you replied to my comment on TDA? 🤔

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Originally posted by: Sanaa629

oh dear..there were sooo many comments to reply to..I kept procrastinating..and then finally it got sooo much and I had certain demands from you to update LM..therefore I took the easier option and posted a thank you note instead for everyone..!!😆 if you really want a reply..I'll do that..😊

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

My comment on Love Maybe. Say yay.

Title - F the 'Maybe'. It should be 'Definitely'. But obviously, our Riddhima is Einstein's chatti aulad, so she is obviously going to be confused, going to weigh her pros and cons, drown in love equations, question her history, keep in mind both her choices' biology/physics/geography, you get the point.

This was my reaction when you named the SS.

So apt. Perfect-o. Why? Because when there's Riddhima in the story, there's always a 'Maybe' lurking around somewhere. She's a big question-mark, that girl. And yet people like Armaan, sorry, correction, Greek Gods like Armaan - fall for such stupid bimbos. How, like, how?!

Okay, done with Riddhima bashing, but I will come back to that when I do the character analysis.

Anyway, moving on -

Story - Nothing out of the box, been written about, been heard about. Then why is it so special? Because you've written it. Plus, obviously, it has Armaan in it. That one name still turns the whole plot around, eh? But yea, like I said, you made the story special by the way you wrote it. And the 1-D songs you put in between. HA!

If guys like Armaan actually existed, the world would be a much better place, but hell, they don't. Because no guy is ever this self-sacrificing. And yet, thanks to this stupid story, I still believe in fairy-tales like him. So if I remain single all my life, and live with a bunch of cats, you're the one to blame! (Read: LOOC, WK, TDA, LM, woman, stop writing about Armaan so perfectly!).

Characters -

Sid: Asshole. Its true you realize the value of something only when you lose them, but he hadn't realized his undying love for Riddhima at all! He was jealous of Armaan, and angry at losing to him. That's why he proposed to R in the first place. What a tart. And again - why does R, the bimbo, choose such lunatics?

Riddhima - Confusion personified. But since I've bitched about her enough already, I'll stop here.

Armaan - Sigh. Throughout this story (and just like DMG!) I was chanting in my head - 'Ditch her! Choose me!'. He's so perfect, I feel like crying. Because I know he is impossible to find in this world. So much for fairy-tales and love stories.

I still don't get how he just took her back without even a single complaint, but I guess that's what love does to you, eh? Wouldn't know, never been in his position, but yea, still, I can't understand him. His character was just too...Prince Charming type. You can't believe in him, but you want to.

I'll still say though - He could do a lot better. As for R - well she just found herself paradise didn't she?

Nikki - I don't like her much, because if she was like a true best friend, she would have told R to move on instead of pushing to pursue Sid. She's the reason R seemed so desperate in the first place. So yea, don't like her much.

In the end, I just want to say, I loved the story. And as you already know - it kept me hooked until the end. So you know its been a success.

Such stories give me hope =) That's why I like them =P

There! Comment done!

P.S. I know the comment's terrible, but its been pending for too long, so yea, posting it anyway. Sorry Xx