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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

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awesome update! kitna tadaapti ho, yaar. 🤣

i loved madhu & asmin's conversation. LOL @ her scared face on seeing her whole room covered with pink roses. 🤣 & she had to wear a DRESS. 🤣 and daksh is all confident & what-not. ah, i BET he looked hot. aww, mud mud ke na dekh mudke (credit : sana) 😆 danceee ! <3 i love JEALOUS asmin!

continue soon. 😊


thoda toh tadpo na yaar kya jata haiROFL
thanx alot🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mansim

nice part👏

asmin really wore a red lehenga😲😆
hope so she likes daksh's present😕
thanks for the pm😊
update soon😉

thank u so so much🤗 n u don't need to thank me 4 pm...it's my workSmile
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-28
(party ended)

(Aish in her room looking at herself in the mirror………………suddenly someone knocked her window, she got shocked…………she went to the window n opened it…………………that was Daksh holding a package ……………….Aish astonished)

Aish:"tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

(Daksh jumped in the room…………….didn't said anything just gave the package to her)

Aish:"yeh kya hai"

Daksh:"tumhara birthday gift" (smirked)

(Aish opened the package n it was a chocolate cake which he had made with his friends)

Aish(smiled):"chocolate cake"

(Daksh came close to her & kissed her cheek n said)

Daksh:"happy birthday sweetie"

(Aish couldn't control herself………she closed her eyes & left herself in his hands)

Daksh:"lets cut the cake"

Aish:"kitchen se knife leke ati hoon"

(she turned to leave but Daksh stopped her n pulled her to him…………their eyes met)

Daksh:"don't need knife………………cut the cake with your finger"

(she done the following……………….she cut the cake with her finger…………….Daksh took a piece of cake & put it to her lips, she ate one side……………..then she took the piece from his hand n said him to eat it………………her fingers were covered with cream……………..he took the piece from her hand n left it in a dish……………………..he ate the cream from her fingers looking at her…………………….she didn't know what to do now………………..she just looked away…………….they were losted in each other's eyes)

Daksh:"so…….what's your answer?"

(she had no words for explain her feelings, just looking in his eyes)

Aish:"I don't know………………..you tell k mera jawab kya ho sakta hai?"

(staring at each others eyes…………………..knocked her door……….it was Arnab)

Arnab:"Aish…………open the door………………kisse baat kar rahi ho?"(shouting out of the room)

(both of them got scared………………………if Arnab saw them together in room so he will kill Aish)

Aish:"tum bathroom me jaao………..main papa ko handle karti hoon"

(Daksh went to bathroom & locked the door………..Aish opened the room door………….she was looking at the bathroom door)

(Arnab entered in room)

Arnab:"kon hai tumhare sath?"(shouting)

(Aish shocked)

Aish:"ko….koi bhi toh nahi hai…………why did you asked that papa?"(looked at bathroom)

Arnab:"mujhe kisiki awaz ayi tumhare room se(noticed she was looking at bathroom)or yeh tum bar bar bathroom ki taraf kyu dekh rahi ho?kya hai bathroom me?"

Aish(looked at him):"nothing just mujhe……..

Arnab:"mujhe kya?"(doubt)

Aish:"vo mujhe bathroom jana hai issi liye"(fake smile)

Arnab:"what?"

Aish:"yes papa…………..ab aap jaao"(pushed him)

(he left)

(Aish closed the door n Daksh came out from bathroom)

Daksh:"uff…………tumhari family bhi na…………..last time tumahri masi n today your dad"

(she didn't replied)

Daksh:"ok now my answer"

(Aish smiled)

Daksh(smiled):"I think mujhe apna jawab mill gaya hai………….see you later babes"(winked)

(jumped out throw the window)

Daksh:"kal milte hai…..take care"(left)

(Aish looked at the moon)

(in Raichand's house)

(Shlok also looking at the moon)

Shlok:"kal punam ki rat hai, yani Kruti ka agla shikar…………….i need to stop her……………………….vo Asmin ko bhi hurt kar sakti hai, vo locket usse zyada protect nahi kar payegi……………Kruti is very evil……………..mujhe uske bareme Daksh ko inform karna hoga"

(next day in college)

(Aish was waiting for Daksh………………….Daksh came n stood backside of her & hugged her tightly)

Aish:"ohho………….tumhe toh sirf yehi karna ata hai……….flirt"

Daksh:"kyu apni girlfriend ke sath main itna bhi nahi kar sakta kya?"

Aish:"kar sakte ho lekin yaha sabke samne nahi"

(Daksh left her)

Daksh:"okay madam,apka hokum sarakho pe"(both laughed)

(Kruti noticed them together n she got jealous)

Kruti:"ye Asmin mere Daksh ko mujhse cheen le isse pahele mujhe isse thik karma hoga n I know how"(evil smile)

(in Dobriyal's house)

(Arnab was sitting on sopfa n Madhu came n sat beside him)

Madhu:"Arnab mujhe tumse Arjun k bareme baat karni hai"(she looks nervous)

Arnab:"ha bolo na itna soch kya rahi ho"

Madhu:"actually sirf Arjun nahi…………..mujhe Anchal k bareme bhi baat karni hai"

Arnab:"Anchal??kyu kya hua?"

Madhu:"I yhink Arjun or Anchal ek doosre se pyaar karte hai"

Arnab:"hmmm……….Arjun bhi kuch din pahele yehi baat kar raha tha"

Madhu:"hume un dono ke bareme koi faisla karma chahiye"

(Meera entered)

Meera:"bilkul karma chahiye……….akhir unki puri life ka sawal hai"

Arnab:"Madhu tum Anchal se baat karke dekho…………….main Arjun se baat karta hoon"

Meera:"or agar koi problem ho mere paas ana"(smiled)

Madhu:"ha ha thik hai"

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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful but small update. give a long one next time
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update...hoping to see arjun anchal married...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei trish,
so aish accepted to daksh's proposal..now they r gf-bf..nice..
kruti must be taken care of..hope she doesn't hurt aish..
arjun-anchal faisla hone wali hai..yeh tho good news hai..
continue soon trish..
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww, awesome update! :D daksh & aish are so cute. they're like.. aww. <3 i want him to be a wolf..can you PLEASE make him a werewolf? 😳 i love the whole cake cutting part & the hug from behind. (: oh, oh, oh, what's kruti up to now? does she like daksh ...does she want to attack daksh? continue soon.. is baar zyaada mat tadpaana. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww trishu,,,, it was suchhh a cutttee part! loved ash and daksh,,
plz cont soon😳

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