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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-16

(Meera crossed Shlok)

(she felt something strange so she stood there)

(Shlok also felt that but he didn't took that seriously………………he left)

(Meera turned back to him,in that time Daksh came out from class room,he saw that Meera staring at Shlok)

Daksh:"vo hai Shlok"

Meera:"Shlok??"

Daksh:"han……2 din pahele hi aya hai or pata nahi ussne Asmin pe kya jadoo kar dia hai k Asmin har waqt usske piche piche ghumti hai"

(Meera still looking at Shlok strangly)

Meera:"tum usske bareme kuch jante ho?"

Daksh:"noway…….or janna bhi nahi chahta hoon……..i mean vo kitna weird hai,sab se door raheta hai,kisi se baat nahi karta hai"

Meera:"hmmm……

(Suddenly Meera remember one thing)

Meera:"one sec……………tum mujhese baat kyu kar rahe ho?maine kaha tha na k kuch mat bolna par tum fir bole…………..hah"

(she angrily left)

(Daksh was very confused)

Daksh:"bhanji toh bhanji massi toh usse bhi zyada………..uff"

(he also left)

(in Dobriyal's house…………..Meera came back with Arjun)

Madhu:"Arjun……..tum kaha the?"(fearfully)

Arjun:"I'm fine mom…………vo actually kal rat library ka door lock ho gaya that oh main or Anchal waha fass gaye the"(when he said Anchal then he smiled)

Madhu:"kya Anchal?vo toh thik hai na?"

Arjun:"ha mom vo thik hai"

(Meera entered in house………….she was looking something strange like she was thinking about something)

(Madhu noticed that)

Madhu:"arre Meera………….kya baat hai?itni parishan kyu lag rahi ho?"

Meera:"nothing didi……………..vo main toh bass yuhi…………

(Madhu smiled)

Madhu:"tum or tumhari soch……jaao apne room me jaao"

(Meera went for her room)

(in Meera's bed room………….she was thinking about Shlok)

Meera:"mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai k vo ladka insanm nahi kuch or hai but main sure bhi toh nahi hoon…………kya karu kya karu…………..han…….main Aish se baat karke dekhti hoon"

(in Arjun's room…………….thinking about library scene & smiling)

Arjun:"oh god….yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai………….main Anchal k bareme soch raha hoon…………….or kal rat"

(he smiled again)

(in Aish's bed room………….she was trying to call Shlok but the network was every time failed…………..after sometime finally the network caught the line)

(Shlok received the call)

Shlok:"hello"

Aish:"hey Shlok…………maine kaha than a k mujhe tumse baat karni hai fir tum mujhse milne kyu nahi aye?"

Shlok:"actually ghar me kuch kaam aagaya that oh……..

Aish:"accha choro….kal college aarahe ho na?wahi pe baat kar lungi"

(Aish didn't noticed that Meera was stood in door side)

Meera:"choco"

(Aish looked at her)

Shlok:"oh Shlok massi bula rahi hai………….main tumse kal milti hoon okey"

Shlok:"ok……bye or apna khayal rakhna"

Aish:"yup"

(she cut the fone………….Meera came & sat on bed)

Aish:"yah massi bolo"

Meera:"mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai"

Aish:"plz massi……..agar aap Daksh k bareme kuch kahene ayi hai to mat kahena"

Meera:"no main usske bareme nahi Shlok k bareme baat karna chahti hoon"

Aish:"oh Shlok?.............pata hai massi vo wahi Shlok hai………..remember my childhood frnd?"

Meera:"mujhe yaad hai but mujhe vo kuch thik nahi laga"

Aish:"kahi apko uss looser Daksh ki bimari toh nahi ho gayi?"

Meera:"no……….listen………ye thora ajib lage ga but……..

Aish:"but what??"

Meera:"main itne din London me thi toh waha main jaha raheti thi waha ek Swami ji rahete the…………maine bhi unse kuch sikha hai"

Aish:"matlab???"
Meera:"matlab ye ki main sari supernatural chizo ko feel kar sakti hoon or mujhe Shlok k karib aney par ajib sa feel hua"
Aish:"massi ap na pagal ho gayi hai I mean bhoot-pret n all………….main in sab me believe nahi karti hoon toh mere samne ye sab mat kahiye plz"

Meera:"but mum mum……….

Aish:"good night"

(Meera left the room & she was very disappointed)

(next day in college………….Meera came there for talk to Daksh about Shlok)

(Daksh was talking with his frnds……….then Meera came to him)

Meera:"Daksh……..mujhe tumse baat karni hai"
Daksh:"han boliye"

Meera:"yaha nahi……akele me"

Daksh:"fine…………ayiye"

(They went to a empty class)

Angad:"dude……….vo unty Daksh ko akele me kya kahegi?"

Rohan:"job hi kahe tumjhe kya?"

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Posted: 14 years ago

(in class)

Meera:"dekho mujhe tumse Shlok k bareme kuch baat karni hai"

(Daksh was looking at her)

Meera:"tum kuch bolte kyu nahi?"

Daksh:"apne hi toh kal kaha tha chup rahene k liye"

Meera:"oh god………..vo kal kaha tha,ab bolo"

Daksh:"okey……..Shlok k bareme kya?"

Meera:"I think k Shlok human nahi hai"

Daksh:"what??"

(he was shocked)

Meera:"han……….main in sab chizo ko mahesus kar sakti hoon or jab kal main usske pass se gayi toh mujhe ajib sa feel hua"

Daksh:"how is it possible?"

Meera:"possible hai………..humare beech me kaise log hote hao…jo mare hue hote hai par firbhi zinda hai"

Daksh:"toh apko lagta hai Shlok………

Meera:"han……….or mujhe tumhari help chahiye…………dekho main janti hoon k tum Asmin ko pasand karte ho"

Daksh:"main Asmin ko?no no"

Meera:"jhut mat bolo,tumhari akho main dikhta hai…………so main chati hoon k tum Shlok pe nazar rakkho or mujhe batate raho"

Daksh:"but apko kaise pata k main ye kar sakta hoon"

Meera:"I know k tum Asmin k liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho,so r u in?"

Daksh:"yah….i'm in"

(he smiled)

(but Aish suddenly came there)

Aish:"massi?????"

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Posted: 14 years ago
hei trish,
nice update..so maasi can feel supernaturals..tats gr8..i hav a doubt now..if shlok n aish were childhood frnds then when did he became supernatural..and is it not that supernaturals r frozen in the age they r?bahut intelligent ques hai na?😉hope u understood my ques..

maasi is in mission "have an eye on shlok" with daksh..so maasi n daksh r in same team now..waiting for ur next update..continue soon..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hei trish,
nice update..so maasi can feel supernaturals..tats gr8..i hav a doubt now..if shlok n aish were childhood frnds then when did he became supernatural..and is it not that supernaturals r frozen in the age they r?bahut intelligent ques hai na?😉hope u understood my ques..

maasi is in mission "have an eye on shlok" with daksh..so maasi n daksh r in same team now..waiting for ur next update..continue soon..

they were childhood frnds but in that time Shlok was a normal human
when did he became supernatural this is a mistry now for u guys
look forword u'll know every thing
thanx u😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res!

-EDITED-

Double dhamaaka! :D

I read both of the updates twice.. LOVED ITTT. :D So, Meera can FEEL supernaturals!? Nicey! I was hoping that she'd be a witch ..I wanted to see Asmin with witchy genes in her. :P 😆Oooh, how lucky Daksh will be to have a witch girlfriend! 😆

I like how Meera went to warn Asmin, and she didn't believe any of it..but when she went to Daksh, he agreed that he'd do anything for her! How Sonia-Yuviish ... after Adi had betrayed the band. :D

Ahaha, Asmin came there..I can imagine Sonia fidgeting about, now, and saying something to Yuvi.. and running away, and Ashi standing there with a confused frown. 😆 Update SOOOOOOOON. =)


Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Nice Part.. Seems Massi is well educated abt d Supernaturals.. Must hav done Phd in it.. ;-) Daksh-Massi talk was Gr8 n also bit funny.. So they r gonna keep watch on Shlok.. Waiting 2 know wat 'll happen further.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Res!


-EDITED-

Double dhamaaka! :D

I read both of the updates twice.. LOVED ITTT. :D So, Meera can FEEL supernaturals!? Nicey! I was hoping that she'd be a witch ..I wanted to see Asmin with witchy genes in her. :P 😆Oooh, how lucky Daksh will be to have a witch girlfriend! 😆

I like how Meera went to warn Asmin, and she didn't believe any of it..but when she went to Daksh, he agreed that he'd do anything for her! How Sonia-Yuviish ... after Adi had betrayed the band. :D

Ahaha, Asmin came there..I can imagine Sonia fidgeting about, now, and saying something to Yuvi.. and running away, and Ashi standing there with a confused frown. 😆 Update SOOOOOOOON. =)


thank u sooooo much🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gals1110

Hey Dear Nice Part.. Seems Massi is well educated abt d Supernaturals.. Must hav done Phd in it.. ;-) Daksh-Massi talk was Gr8 n also bit funny.. So they r gonna keep watch on Shlok.. Waiting 2 know wat 'll happen further.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

oye agar agli bar pm k liye thanx bola na............
u don't need to thank me
thanx alot😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
woah trish
finally we hav twists in ur story
i m amzed yr
u r doin superb job
yr now meera massi bani pyaar ki dushman

gr8 jon and well done

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjna4

woah trish

finally we hav twists in ur story
i m amzed yr
u r doin superb job
yr now meera massi bani pyaar ki dushman

gr8 jon and well done

thanx😃
but not dusman exactly
she just want to know about him

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