New Mayur FF: Just Business Updated Pg.84

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Jiska darr thaa wohi hua................but as u say it will be fun so lets see....................hope everthing falls in place................nice update..........thnx for pm................!!!

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Yaeeeeeeeeee me second to cmnt...
And this update ws painful yet interesting...
Truly speaking i dnt want this patch up part so soon...There shud me more twists...They shud understand each other...Specially mayank have to be nice to nupur..He is alwaz sooo rude...A jerk i can say....😡
But seriously nupur ws in great pain and that ws unbearable...😭
Now the story is taking an interesting turn so im excited and curious...
Cont soon...

Edited by Auroni.92 - 14 years ago

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Amazing update but i feel verry bad my nups u right we can get allways happy so plzz update soon n thanks for the pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Hey Ria
It was a painful update
feel sad for NUpur
Maynk was so rude to nups and he made her cry....
i just hope everything will be fine soon
waiitng for next part
try to update asap

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

feeling bad 4 nupsiii😔

bt ur work is gr8...

cont soon...

thnx 4 pm..

payal_

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Omg...im speechless..i read in one take it was really intresting one...but feeling bad 4 nupz...😭..hw he can hurt her anyway i guess it will more intresting wen mayyu will cam 2 noe da truth...itt's really amizng story....i must..say...u r mindblowing writer...👏