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Sammy

@sammy4u

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

amazing one dear

loved it

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Hi dear thank you for pm ..its awesome sad but great story i love it you write very well and describe all things greatly thank you for pm and this story 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Varsha Agrawal

@KSG-loverrrr

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Oh god..that was so damn emotional!

im feeling myself in tears...ur writing is sooo awsome..

its sad..but full of emotions..its heart-touching!

Very, very well written! 👏 👏

Love,

Varsha.

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

hey nice part... so beautifully written each n every emotion ... i could so relate to it... truly loved it...pls continue writing soon ...n thanks for pm...take care...love aish...

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Very nice story. It's so true that one can only understand the pain if he will go through it.. all the emotions are described here very nicely.
Keep on writing ...

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Palak

@Freakin_girl

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

hey dear..

it ws amazng..

do write mre..

nd cont ur ff..

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Urvi

@-screwed.UP-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

hey dear

really nice

thnx for the pm

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lavanya_armaan

@lavanya_armaan

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

wowowowo suprbbb..

great loved it ya😃

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Rida

@FleetingWishes.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

MAllluuu :D
U my gal r the most amazing writer! yes youre totally out of this world. the way you write, the way you portray feelings, the way you actually decorate your work so beautifully wd your flower-like words. the beauty of your works holds so much power that it mesmerizes everyone. your passion for what you write, and put all your heart into it is something what makes yoou different, and an awesome, perfect writer. whenever i think ive reached the edge you do something and then i fall more,deeper in love wd your writing. i dont even think if theres a limit for me to ever reach. ive actually realised that wd everytime i fall more nd more in love wd what you write. your a magical writer. your every word shines like a diamond, and comes out so damn beautifully. your a gem, very precious. I luvd it, luvd it so so much, to the coreee. and aww maybe your friends rejected it,maybe they had been looking for some other criteria, and something a bit different generalized, and having a different genre. but dude, the pain, the helplessness, that feeling, that irrevocable love, those emotions, and that feeling of losing someone so precious. Yes yu were so damn brilliant wd it, it was flawlessly portrayed. i could live it all over again. the pain was dripping out of your every word. i could feel it all. i could feel my own helplessness, when i lost my grandmom. how i wanted her to be bak, and tell me my favourite stories, caress my hair at nights, save me from everyonees scolding. i miss her so damn much only if i can reverse time and stop that accident. i feel helpless, and the way you showed shilpa/Riddhimas every emotion, every word that depicted her hurt, her sorrow. this was something so so deep malu. there were so many hidden meanings. i could feel what you wrote. it was so hell strong. i luv what you write gal, i luv you so so much, and so do yur friends,and ofcorse everyone knows how much beautiful your writing is!
Luv youuu
Ridu :D

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amaniM

@amaniM

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

that was amazing! the way you have expressed pain and anguish one feels on the loss of a lovd one. wonderful! anyone who says you can't write are not worth listening.