AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Poco this was a truly heart wrenching update......feeling sorry for Danish,Kabir,Panchi...........Danish becoz his life had such a tragic end...Kabir becoz he has to come to terms with his new identity and also had to face his brothers death...panchi bcoz she lost someone who really did love her and is now going to be Daksh's puppet.......Natasha just makes my blood boil...urrrrgggh what a b***h.............Convo at RM was good...........you potrayed abhays confusion so beautifully..........loved it Pocs....do update soon

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Nitica di,
wat an awesm updt. I felt so bad fr abhay. He's been tricked and he remains confused evrytym Pia's near him. I feel more bad for him dan Pia. Atleast she knows the truth of their love bt poor Abhay is conditioned.
As 4 Danish, I'm sort of contented dat his painful lyf hs ended and nw he's got peace.

As 4 da precap, lemme guess IS DAT LETTER WRITTEN BY ABHAY??Can't wait for the next part. Luv u so much....

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

hey poco...

awesome update...👏

feeling bad for danish n panchi..she really loved him...😔

can't believe..kabir a vampire slayer...is he going to be against abhay?😕

zeenia was sooo funny🤣...i'm just loving her...

hope...abhay n pia get back together soon....😊

update soon...

🤗

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Ritika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Poco, sorry that I didn't reply for your earlier updates, but in school, we have an important history project, so I didn't have much time.

For page 58:

Poor Danish. He didn't do anything that bad, and all he did had good reason. He broke up with Pancchi because if he didn't, he would be killed. He attacked Kabir because he had no other choice. He was forced to. At least he will be going to a better place after Daksh kills him, somewhere where people/supernaturals are not trying to farce him against his will. I HATE Daksh's attitude. Who does he think he is? 😡

For page 60:

Abhay must be so confused. He is fighting against his family to bring Maithli home, and then Piya comes in and make him feel guilty for no reason that is apparent to him. He doesn't know that he loves Piya, and the fact that she affects him so strongly must be unnerving. I still love Zeenia! She was funny when she was talking about cleansing Abhay's brain and locking them in a closet. 😆 How did Abhay not hear her say that? Poor Danish...again. It is awful to be hurt because of your own brother, and even worse that this is to escape his awful life. It was sweet that he died in the arms of the woman he loves/loved. 😳

For the precap:

Like I said before, it must be unnerving to see that Piya can affect him so strongly, when he was dead set on his decision. Wait, was it a love letter for Piya written by Abhay? Or was it a love letter to Abhay that Piya had written? I wish there was some way that Abhay could unlock his full powers without becoming double-faced. Daksh is finally doing some good, showing Pancchi and Kabir the reality of the world. Why is T being tortured? Just because they feel like it, for their own sadistic enjoyment? I wonder what Arnab's reaction is going to be when he finds out that Piya is his daughter... Finally! Some sign of the mysterious Abheer. Abhay needs some proof that Anushka was right!

I'm waiting for the next part, Poco!

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: N_NS
OMG this was too too beautiful!! I could almost picturize all this as if it was happening in front of my eyes.... I feel really bad for Abhay, even more than I feel for Piya, he is so confused with his mind nd his heart leading him in different directions!! Atleast Piya knows what exactly is happening but we can't say the same for him....

Danish, poor soul, well atleast he was forgiven for his mistakes before dying.... Whats gonna happen next?? I can't wait to know, plz update asap...
Um, a personal ques now, well, can I call you di?? It'll be easier for me that way, you know... but only if you don't mind...
Loads of love,
Nidhi.

Hi Nidhi,

Of course you can call me Di. I am actually loving making bharta out of Abhay's brain.😆.....Piya is suffering but she is not a loser and she will stand through this. Danish is released....finally.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Ritzie
awesome update Poco.

Abhay Pia are still so beautiful and Zenia hilarious. I loved it when she whispered about cleaning Abhay's brain and putting him with Pia into the cupboard till they have kids🤣.

Danish episode was nail-biting and his death was heart -wrenching. Especially, where he asks for forgiveness from Panchi. Will she remember? Or will Daksh will maker her forget?

So, Kabir and Abhay are on opposite sides? Oh no. Pia getting teared again - choosing between the friends?

Waiting eagerly for Abhiya...😃

Thank you, Ritzie. Zeenia is a BLAST and wait till she meets Kabir and drives Abhay's patience up the wall. 😆.....Pancchi will not forget anything. Daksh will expose the reality to both of them as Kabir is a vampire slayer.

Kabir will not do anything against Abhay.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: ilove99
poor pia!her heart is almost broken..
and danish's end is very bad...but he deserves it...
update soon...

Thank you. 😳.....Pia will be okay, don't worry. Am happy that Danish is released.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: prayasbanetta10
Heart wrenching Pocahontas . Just shows what a terrific writer you are.I Can't even tell ,so many emotions gushing out incessantly.My heart really went out for Danish but ultimately he found his eternal solace in Panchi's arms.

Thank you so much, sweetz. I am glad you liked the culmination of Daksh's track. 😊

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: sonu.p
omg poco!! for the first time i didnt care about the piya abhay exchange...i was sooo moved by the last moments of panchi and danish...it was soo touching...awesome yaar,,...u really made me feel bad for danish's death...the scene was picturesque...very very sad...and very very touching...keep it up! update soon!😊

Thank you, Sonu.😊.....Danish's end was tragic and i did feel bad writing it. But i just had to release him from this misery. Too much damage had happened to him.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
lovely description bad and sad ending
hated danish yet don't want this ending for anyone
abhay u should be ashamed but yet he is at no fault as he don't remember anything.
do continue
bye
sumi

Thank you. Abhay is helpless and Danish just found his peace. At last, Panchhi forgave him.