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Posted: 14 years ago
what beautiful update...
thanks soooo much for it.... just love this FF for the twists n turns it gives... you are such a fabulous writer...
i read the update on the phone the same day it got updated, but login thru the phone is difficult.. am unable to do so.. i checkd at least 6-7 times daily for the updates.. and was sooo relieved wen i finally saw one.. read it the same day.. but dint get a chance to sit on pc to come online.. finally got the chance today, so logged in n commenting..
ur FF is the most imp thing i look forward to, on this forum..
now that i know u r nt gonna update till 29th at least, i ll nt be as impatient as b4.. i can wait.. but pls pls pls promise a ling update sooooon...
tk care.. happy holidays.. bye
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: loveindair

another awesome update.....u shud get it published .....its a best seeller in d making .....keep writing .....ltons of love ......Disha ?.........wud u plz tel me ur real name ....


Thank you so much, sweetie. Are you a Dan-Blair fan?😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

uh huh kabir a vampire slayer oh no now what happens between anuska and kabir no chance at all also this abheer is coming.

hey abhay hugs piya oh ho now major confusion for him as his heart says one thing and heart another also zeenia will be fun
abhay is surely going to kill zeenia if she messes up anu's life.

hehhe going great dear
do continue
bye sumi


Thank you.Abhay hugs Piya knowing that she is Piya ( her hair are different from Metz') . Zeenia is gonna be ado😊red by Abhay and Kabir will have a tough time handling his new identity.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

Yay, Poco! It didn't take that long!

I hate Maithli! I mean, how can she do this? I'm glad to see that ChandEena hate her too. 😊 Aww... Abhay sounds like Edward! Except Edward doesn't sleep... But that is soo sweet! Other than the fact that he is talking to Maithli. I hate Maithli. If she wanted Abhay back, she shouldn't have been so evil. If she was actually nice and kind, Abhay would probably have picked her over Piya, because he loved her first. But if she was nice and kind, the story wouldn't be exciting... So, now I;m conflicted. I love that Sam and Misha have forgotten their rivalry and come together to help Piya. So Abheer is someone very dangerous. Hopefully Piya can get herself together before she goes to the Raichand's house. Aww! Daksh is being so sweet too! I just wish that Daksh was a little different, and they'd make the perfect couple.

Metz is just PLAIN OBSESSED with Abhay and is combative as well. She refuses to accept that Abhay could love someone else. Piya will be okay but am not sure how she is going to compose herself in front of Abhay.....Sam and Misha will be on ceasefire now and their relationship will progress. Daksh is just playing with Panchhi and yet he is her true love,


For the precap:
Kabir is a vampire slayer? I did not see that coming! It's a good thing that Daksh helped Kabir, but I didn't want Danish to die. I think that this part will help Pancchi see the real Daksh, and bring her to reality, not get carried away by her fantasies of fairy tales. Why does Majesty hate Abhay so much that he is sending his own brother after him? I think that Piya will be shocked by Abhay's greeting, and will get her hopes up, and then they will be crushed. Is he thinking that she is Maithli, or that she is a girl who he is very close friends with?

Poco! You need to update soon so that I will have the answers to my questions!

Pancchi is in for a shock but i just had to acquaint her with the supernatural around her. You shall have rest of the answers very soon.😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
😊OMG!! HOW DID I MISS UR UPDATE!! was just reading it and all ur comments!...im really hating the sad state piya is in...really wish she would stop crying...makes me sad😔....and and daksh's portrayal is amazing, may i add.......awesome as always poco!
o...and also...i read somewhere..u mentioned that daksh is playing with panchi right now but he will be her true love?!! wow! i mean seriously...WOW!!👏....hopefully my wish for a sid -panchi type relationship, which isnt really progressing in pkyek, will be fulfilled by an amazing daksh-panchi relattiomhip in the future!!
and kabir and daksh are vampire slayers!! o god!!!😲
shock after shock!!
still processing....😲
do update soon poco!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
when are you updating poco?want to know more what will hapen next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,

I am posting a detailed first part of the update so that a lot of questions and confusions regarding the supernatural arc are answered. Don't worry , the rest of it will be up tomorrow itself.❤️


Haseena's Study, Raichand Mansion

Piya , Sambhav and Misha were sitting all tensed up in the Brit styled study of Haseena Raichand. John was quietly making coffee for everyone , stirring sugar in the delicate porcelain painted mugs. Haseena was standing at the large window , looking out at the beautiful meadows and flower beds of the Raichand estate, lit up in lamps. Chaand was rocking slowly in the antique grandfather's chair , tapping his ringed fingers on the arms of the chair. The only other sound that could be heard in the room besides the sugar-stirring and finger-tapping was the ticking of the huge time piece with a carved brass pendulum.

Sambhav ( breaking the silence ) – We can't undo what Anushka has done. Nobody can , without sacrificing her life. Zeenia is a Keeper and the best that she can do is defend and protect. Abhay in the clutches of Maithli means Abhay in the clutches of Natasha , the Bolshvas and consequently the Majesty…( throws up his hands) ….I think am going to have a nervous breakdown.

Chaand ( stands up and shakes his head )- This was so unexpected! So unexpected. And if all these troubles were not enough, Abheer is on his way. For what? To get hands on Abhay and hand him over to Majesty.

Haseena ( taking the cup of coffee that John is offering her with a sullen face) – And the onset of Vampire Slayers . The coming of Abhay's father……..We cannot counter anything if Abhay is taken aay from us. ….( sits down fuming)…I could have sucked every single drop of blood out of that Maithli when she walked into my house , holding Abhay's hand!

Piya( sadly)- What are we going to do now? I only see problems , problems and more problems.

Misha ( thinking )- Hmm….we all may not be friends with each-other but right now, we have to get together to save Abhay.

Chaand, Haseena and Piya look at Sambhav. He nods.

Sambhav ( seriousness in his grey eyes)- I know what you all are thinking. I am a werewolf who has been hunting down Abhay for centuries. I am not saying that am your friend….I am not. Like Majesty, even I seek Abhay for the sacrifice that will immune the entire bloodline of werewolves against deaths at the hands of vampires . I am just waiting for a particular planetary shift of the nine planets and I will attack Abhay…..sounds evil? Well, its my duty and am not defending myself. But as Misha just said, we are TOGETHER in the situation right now. It is in my interest to save Abhay and I will do whatever I can.

Misha looks at Sambhav horrified and Sambhav can see that she is seeing him as an enemy again but he had to be honest.

Sambhav ( continuing )- Don't have blind faith in me. But trust me on this account.

Haseena ( looks at Piya)- Piya…..you are our trumpcard. And I have no qualms in saying it on your face. You know that I do like you even though I never have and I never will support your relationship with Abhay as I have told you before. But if there is someone I can trust to break through Abhay inspite of Anushka's spell, its you.

Chaand ( keeping a fatherly hand on Piya's shoulder)- Abhay may have forgotten his love for you, child. But he remembers you. That is what the spell says. That is our only hope.

Sambhav ( concerned)- Its going to be a tough job, Piya. We need you to keep an eye on Abhay. His life with Maithli and what she and Natasha are going to do.

Misha ( gets worried )- But that will put Piya in danger! We are endangering her to supernatural villains!

Piya ( holds down Misha's hand)- AM READY. ….(tears of strength shining in her eyes)…..its about Abhay. End of matter. He may not love me but I do and I always will.

Just then, the door is thrown open and a whistling Anushka walks in , her eyes sparkling and her mischievous smile bigger than her face. Everybody looks at her in shock . Hair cut short into a sexy bob with flecks, heavily kohled eyes , bright red lipshade on her rose-bud mouth ,a diamond stud glittering on her pretty nose , a hideous vest teamed with denim hot pants and velvet brown boots climbing up her long fair legs. Uh,oh. Wait that's Zeenia.

Sambhav ( blinking his eyes)- What the Beep Beep Beep did you do to Annie!

Piya ( shocked )- You cut Anushka's brown curls?????????????? Are you MAD? She is gonna kill you?

Misha ( her mouth falling open )- RED? Anushka would need a master cleanse !

Haseena ( looking at her in disgust )- Zeenia, as far as I know , you are supposed to KEEP Anushka's body and not turn it into a gothic disaster.

Zeenia rolls her eyes , makes a face at the coffee that John offers her , checks out Sam making him conscious , climbs on Chaand's study desk , dangling her legs and looks at all of them.

Zeenia ( puckers her rose bud mouth )- Tut,tut, tut. You guys need to stop behaving like unpaid bodyguards and get back to business. I need to protect this curly haired chick from some witches and vampires while you all need to find a way to protect your precious Abhay. …..(rolls her eyes)…stop gawking at me , will you? John, a martini please. Coffee is for smug intellectuals, not for hotties like me!

John shakes his head and goes out , closing the door behind him quietly. Zeenia winks at Sam and Sam is just not able to handle this version of Anushka . Misha notices the look-exchange between the two and her jaw tightens. Great! Now, we have spirits flirting with Sam as well.

Chaand ( seriously)- Zeenia, all I care about is that you do your job of protecting Piya without fail. Natasha , Maithli , Bolshvas and now, Abheer will attack Piya if she is seen within 500 yards of Abhay.

Sambhav- You have to be her shadow. You are Anushka in her life now and I hope you understand the meaning of that.

Zeenia ( raises an eyebrow ) – I am older than you Sam or anyone else in this room. I have kept more than a 700 bodies in my life span of 1900 years. Don't take me on face value . I know the promise and deal that I made with Anushka. Piya is PROTECTED.

John brings in the Martini and Zeenia picks it up. Sipping it , she hops off the table, and goes to check out the books in the huge book cases. Haseena gives her a look that screams 'I-DON'T-LIKE-YOU'.

Piya ( clearing her throat )- I trust her. Anushka chose her and I trust her choice.

Haseena – Still, be careful around her. Except for Anushka's body and her powers, Zeenia is nothing like Anushka.

Piya nods.

Piya ( innocently )- I need to ask something. Regarding Abhay. Can I ?

Chaand, Haseena and Sambhav exchange looks and then, nod at Piya as a puzzled Misha looks on.

Piya ( looks quite broken )- I understand Maithli wanting Abhay. She is desperate. But why everyone? Sambhav …( looks at him in disappointment )…., the Bolshvas, somebody called Majesty and now….Abheer…WHY ABHAY?

Sambhav looks guilty all over again, no matter how hard he tries to hide it. Chaand and Haseena look stricken while Zeenia smirks at the supernatural trio as she runs her fingers over the book rows.

Zeenia ( ridiculing )- Tell, tell, tell the secrets pussy cats. I am sure the chick deserves to know just why you all 'LURVE' Abhay so much. Hmmm? Or should I tell her….Chaand Uncle?

Chaand( raising his hand )- Zeenia. Shut up…..(turns to Piya)…..I don't know why am I telling you all this, Piya. Maybe because you are someone who is guaranteed not to backstab Abhay or us. I know it sounds wickedly unbelievable that why would anyone want Abhay. ……( looks at her searchingly )….you know what is a solar eclipse?

Misha ( rolling her eyes)- Uncle, what has Solar Eclipse got to do with Abhay?

Sambhav – Everything.

Piya ( puzzled)- Yes….i do understand what a solar eclipse is. Moon passing between earth and sun and eclipsing the sun totally. But what is the point?

Chaand – The point is that Abhay is not just a vampire. He is a powerhouse of energy. Me and Haseena turned him into a vampire to save him from an ugly death sacrifice at the hands of his sorcerer father…..more than 350 years ago. But the catch is that the completion of the ritual of turning him into a vampire happened right at the time of a total solar eclipse. Something that has never happened in the history of vampires on this earth.

Piya ( shocked and confused )- H-How does that make Abhay different?

Haseena – Abhay is the most powerful vampire on this earth, Piya….yes, more powerful than even the majesty. He combines the power of both the moon and the sun. He is a walking superpower who cannot be killed by any human-being or any supernatural force. The only way to finish Abhay is to kill him during a particular hour on a particular solar eclipse that comes only once every hundred years. The werewolves want Abhay so that they can sacrifice him and release themselves from the curse of turning into a werewolf by force every full moon.

Zeenia ( finishing her martini )- Majesty and Bolshvas want Abhay because drinking Abhay's blood will immortalize and immunize Majesty forever. Majesty is cursed to be devoured by his own race every 500 years on a full day. But he has escaped always. Those killer 24 hours , he has escaped them. Trying to find a solution, he came to know that Abhay was a powerhouse. Infact…..Chaand Uncle and Haseena Aunty themselves told him….(flutters her eyelashes at them)…right?

Misha ( horrified )- What????????....Both of you?

Piya ( in disbelief )- Abhay is your son……you exposed him to Majesty?

Sambhav ( defensively )- They had no option.

Chaand ( nods)- Yes. Abhay was unconscious and we were attacked by Bolshvas in their area, with Majesty, disguised as a teenager , heading the attack. Me and Haseena could not fight them. I had to bait Majesty. I promised him Abhay if he spared our lives.

Haseena – He agreed and obviously, we betrayed him. We promised Abhay to the Bolshvas and we went back on our word. Now, Majesty has to get Abhay by playing political. Abhay can't be taken away against his will. Majesty can't come to Abhay . Abhay has to go to him on his own will.

Sambhav ( going behind Misha to escape Zeenia's eye games )- Abheer is Abhay's vampire brother who was activated by Bolshvas. Separated at birth , found by Majesty and yeah, Bolshva Breeding. Abheer can even compete with Majesty in 'who is more evil' competition. I still can't believe that he is coming back.

Piya ( her head reeling )- A-And vampire slayers?

Chaand – We don't know who they are. But they are coming. To finish Abhay. They know Abhay's secret. They want to kill evil before it flourishes.

Piya ( stunned)- Evil? Abhay?

Misha ( raises a doubt ) – Wait a sec! If Abhay is such a HE-MAN, then, how come the likes of Natasha and ….( throws Sam a look )…. Tanushree attack him? He was near death sometime ago if am not mistaken.

Sambhav ( looks at Chaand and Haseena )- That is something that I didn't understand either. Abhay is a powerhouse, an endless energy center. Then…..

Chaand ( interrupting )- He doesn't know.

Sambhav ( taken aback )- Excuse me?

Misha – He doesn't know?

Piya – How can he not know that why everyone is after his blood?

Haseena ( sits down and locks-unlocks her fingers in tension )- Abhay knows he is special but he has no idea why. We….we have just told him a bunch of lies.

Piya ( sits down in shock )- You've lied to Abhay? Lied?

Sambhav ( puzzled)- Why would you do that?

Zeenia throws the books aside and joins the meeting .

Zeenia ( giving a bored look to Chaand and Haseena )- Too scared to spill the soyabeans, oldies? C'mon, the kids need to know or else I can already see a fossilized Abhay!...( pointedly)….Abhay has no idea of who he is and what he is capable of. His exceptional powers are latent because these two oversmart oldies …have EXORCISED his powers in his unconscious state into a gold ring which Anushka has been guarding forever. Right , Uncle? Aunty?

Misha, Piya and Sambhav look at the two vampires in horror as they nod.

Chaand – Don't look at us like that, the three of you. We had to do it. For Abhay's good and the world's good.

Piya ( feeling betrayed on Abhay's behalf )- Lying to him. Telling him a bunch of lies. Exorcising his powers without his knowledge. That is Abhay's good?

Sambhav ( still in shock )- You are Abhay's family. You saved his life from his biological father. How could you….

Haseena ( angrily )- WE HAD TO! WHAT DO YOU ALL KNOW ABOUT ABHAY? TELL ME!.....(Chaand puts his hand on Haseena's shoulder to calm her )…..No Chaand! Zeenia is right. These kids need to know the truth! Listen now. Abhay's powers are deactivated because once those powers and that strength is unleashed in him, he will be CORRUPTED. The sun and the moon – the good and the bad – they all combine in him. If Abhay finds out what he is – he and all of us will have to live with TWO ABHAYS.

Piya ( struck )- Two Abhays?

Chaand ( as though forewarning )- Good Abhay. Bad Abhay. Or maybe….evil Abhay……

Zeenia ( seriously for a change )- Abhay is Abhay only as long as he is a latent superpower……if that ring ever reaches his finger……

Misha ( her breath indrawn in shock )- It's doom…….

Piya and Sambhav look at each-other in shock as Zeenia nods at Misha who can't believe that she is already beginning to understand the supernatural….

TO BE CONTINUED…………………



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Posted: 14 years ago
poco u r alws amazing ...........

dis was d one of the best updates...cz u cleared up so many facts about supernatural .... d deepest and dark secrets are out........ i was waiting for this part from very long....... u made this part too awesome...... i loved this update.......now i gues m nt goin to die out of suspense

i love pia here finally she made herself strong and being normal human she is ready to fight wid supernatural people..... and moreover m happy haseena and chaand are suppoting her...

one thing why are they trusting misha so much.... she is normal human and no connection wid dese things goin on???

and i love zenia... d way u represented d character i can actually picturise it........ and i loved d lil bonding developing between pia nd her..... and she is abrupt bt clear by heart,............ she is naughty bt she is best and m in love wid dis character

very awesome update..........👏
Edited by sanjna4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
holy shit!!
ok...finally clears up a lot of stuff..this update of urs....
thanks!
so now we have a whole lot of other crap including werewolves, vampires, slayers, and now a ring?
awesome update!
P.S- just LOOOVEEE zeenia...very cute!
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb and amazing update👏👏👏. i can't imagine the whole story of abhay😃😃😳😳.bt its fab,superb👏.its not only good job but fabs👏.so many hatts off u👏.i truly saying i was waiting this chapter since begining😳😳. abhay's power r amazing😛.i reallly love to know that he is most powerfull vampire😊.bt a little bit scared of his evil or bad side😲.what will happen when its come out😕.yes piya has all right to know all this 😊and we also😳. now what will she do😲?bt whatever now we know once abhay will get this power ,he can handle all enemies😃😉 bt how can he fight to his evil side than😲,i hope piya will help in this case😛,b'coz piya is a light of abhay's life,and his soul😳. does piya has any hidden power 😲b'cz she is also an fake experiment of his warlock grandpa and she is also a decendend of maithili😕.has she any power or only face copy of metz😕. and yes one more reason,in this ff every imp. character belong to supernatural world in any way like love hate fight fear atteraction etc😆😆.i hope u got my view😉. whatever ,i love this ff 😛,and union of samisha,piya,chandeena and zeenia with faithfulness😳. awesome update😊,bt i miss abhay even its all discussion of him😆😳. zeenia is really cool keeper😆.i like it😉.poor anu's heir😆😉. update soon.😃

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