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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: sarita21992
Maan is getting calmer:) thats nice. Is devs part over in d ff.n would maans ex flame would reappear?

Maan's attitude towards Geet has really changed for the better. No Dev's part is not over. I've still not decided how much of him I will retain in this version of the fic but he will make an appearance much later. You'll have to wait and see if Maan's ex-flame will make an appearance but whatever it is, this fic will not follow the cliched route of a love triangle.

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#872

loved it...

goood one... thanks much for 3 updates in one day..

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: smj1977
today morning while surfing through indiaforums

I saw your ff

I do not usually read ff that have already crossed 10 parts

as it takes too much time to reach till the latest update

but as I was totally free and was bored

not wanting to update any of my own writings

I just started to read the 1st part

then the 2nd then the 3rd

and then can't stop till I reached the 15th part

I was not able to stop myself from enjoying this unique peice

thanks for such a fresh and touchy subject

the second thing I did was send you a buddy request

and to my pure satisfaction I was rewarded with your pm

thank you so much for sending me this absolute perfect peice

you are amazing👏

Shruti

one question is Maan's ex Sameera?

Thanks Shruti. Its flattering to learn that you broke your own rule and read this fic. I'm honoured.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: chubzy
I read part17 n found it too good. M happy tat dhobiwala returnd hs shirt, if i would hv been in maan's place i thnk even i would hv been elatd to get tat piece of memory back.

Thanks chubz. Yes, Maan is happy to have his fav shirt back. It holds a lot of memories.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: kadydeep
Opti....

Just loved it..... The gradual understanding of each other .... almost a glimpse into any newlywed's life....... I am happy Maan is slowly understanding his gem of wife...... His prejudice towards rich people is changing.....

Thanks Deeps. Yes, Maan's prejudice is changing. He is realising that not all rich people are snooty and heartless.

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Aarthi. Yes, Maan taught Geet the basics of budgeting for a household. So you guessed the flashback, did you? Good.

yup

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#877

both parts were beautiful

their relationship is growing

geet is too good,tat she adjust herself nd understand everything

maan was so gentle

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: dia_ditz
both parts were beautiful
their relationship is growing
geet is too good,tat she adjust herself nd understand everything
maan was so gentle

thanks dia. Yes, their relationship is growing and they will get to understand each other well. So this is the upswing phase of their marriage.

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#879

i am sorry, i could not comment previously.....................😛

i from the bottom of my heart congratulate you for writing this wonderful fan fiction.........👏

after reading all the updates so far......... the best thing i felt is that.......... you are taking time to develop maaneet relationship...........😳

the relations that grow slow and steady are the ones that stay forever................☺️

i have a few suggestions...........

# maan encouraging geet either to continue to study or do a job

# maan slowly trying to develop his business

# maaneet becoming friends first

as far as i decipher.................sameera is maan's ex girlfriend ................ will that be an issue in future?😡

waiting eagerly and patiently for the next updates......................😃

love you......................🤗

god bless...........😳

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#880

Hey Opti,

Loving the way the story and the relationship is progressing further....
I'm really liking this story...too close to reality ain't it !

Personal opinion I wouldn't have a problem if I had to live a life the one that Geet is having at the moment...if I have my husband at my side who is caring loving and considerate ......
I guess I would prefer this lifestyle more than the expensive one where people mostly rely on money rather than love and concern.....

Awesome story...continue soon :)

Take Care,
Fatima

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