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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

oh damn so the groom is not Maan but uggggghhhhhhhhh Dev...............and Geet darling mistook dear Maan as a plumber????????????? ohho...................the last part seems interesting.....................cont soon.....................

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wonderful start Opti 👏
can't wait to read the rest 😃

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

thanks for update...

hmmm loved Maan's attitude and his meeting with Geet

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Okay I doubted that the would-be of Geet is not Maan as i noticed u not mentioning his name...so its Dev....and I really didn't expected u to make Maan a tapori but it does suit him well in his intro...and on top of that he's smitten by Geet the first time he saw her as a lady....thats good....lets see how Dev turns out to be now...

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

so geet is not marrying maan? n maan is a tapori god seems to b very different n interesting

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

i expected the groom not to be Maan .. but really u made Maan tapori style and Geet mistook him as plumber...no wonder... just a tot of his dress came into ma mind..after u mentioned khaki color... i was like thinking no one sud mistake him..and tat happened....

and so is Maan waiting for loan to start business r is he working for a bank..coz i dnt get that correctly... means Maan is waiting to get loan am i rite

Edited by aarthirajendran - 14 years ago