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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan is completely gone... bechara pagal ho gaya 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
like this ff...............well thy hv become friends waiting for the story to move fwd...........can u pl add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Gr8 part
cont soon
Thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it..........thk had lost it really!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...i guess maan geet se sach bulakar hi rahega...babaji geet ki raksha karna.....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣maan the innocent🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Part 10

GEET GOES TO MEET MAAN AT THE CAFETERIA.

GEET ST: I have to get hold of myself.i don't know whats happening to me.

SHE GOES AND SITS WITH MAAN.

Geet: Yes,tell me.Whats so urgent?

Maan: First promise me you'll agree to what it is.

Geet: First tell me what it is.

Maan: Don't you trust me?

(HE STARED INTO HER EYES DEEPLY,GEET WAS LOST.SHE BROKE AWAY.)

Geet: I do but…

Maan: I thought we were friends.Anyway,leave it.

Geet: Ok,I agree. Now tell me.

(MAAN SMILES)

GEET ST: Oh god,What have I done?

Maan: I was thinking that I should start meeting people more. You know.Girls.

Geet: And where do I fit into this?

(SHE LOOKS DOWN AND STARTS FIDDLING WITH HER TOP.)

Maan: Well…I thought…

GEET ST: I've landed myself in a big problem.How will I say no to him?

Geet: What did u think?

Maan: Well,it was u who said…

Geet: I said what?

Maan: That Annie was interested in me.So I thought I'd try her first.

Geet: U… want to get together with…Annie?

Maan: Yes,who else? Unless you've got a better person in mind?

Geet: N…no.But where do I come into this?

Maan: Well,I thought u could talk to her about it,u know? Im not good at this sort of thing.All the girls come up to me usually.

(HE GRINS COCKILY.)

G: I cant do this.Im sorry.

(SHE GETS UP TO LEAVE,M STOPS HER)

M: Why? Whats wrong?

G: That… I cant play around with annie. If it doesn't work,she'll blame me. And I don't want yo have to go through that.

M: It wont go wrong.I really like her.I think we have a connection.

G: Still.I cant.

M: u cant do this much for me? Great friend you are.

G: Look u need to do this urself.I don't want to interfere.

M: Look,think about it and tell me tomorrow.Just think about how happy annie will be.You sed she liked me,Didn't u? So? Why are u being so selfish?

G: Im not being selfish.You don't know the real..-

M: Real Reason?What is the real reason,then?

G: Nothing.i told u the reason.

M: u were saying something.

(GEET WALKS AWAY FROM HIM SO HE CANT SEE HER FACE)

G:Yes.. you don't know the real Geet.

(SHE CLOSES HER EYES)

G: I'll do it for you.I'll talk to Annie About it.

(A TEAR ROLLS DOWN HER CHEEK)

END

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww.. wicked update!!! really loved it!! keep up d good wrk :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg geet gonna talk to annie for maan................maan satiya gaya hain kya............oh poor geet she shud hv felt pain in her heart................
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was wicked one poor Geet feel sorry for her awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

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