SS: (AN UNCONDITIONAL LOVE )PG 35 prt 11 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi i was very happy that maan realised his real love.................. but sad to see that geet seems pregent ................... dev is ko goli maar do😡..............................

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Nice update!!!!!!!!!
Nice SS too...........
Loved the concept...........its very different.............
i very first episode was not less a shock.............
Hmmm Dev is such a cruel being..........
he used Geet and married some other gal................
Maan is such a sweetheart...............
hmmm who is this Pratham.,........................
waiting for mopre updates...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
note: some one asked me before about pratham mehra. pratham mehra is our maan... i 'll explan later how became maan to pratham..thanx alot guys to supporting me.. ur comments inspire me all the time.. do comments...
part 6
past
maan hold geet in his arms. he was so shocked to see her in that state. he pulled her around his arms & went to his bedroom. vicky followed him.
he laid her on the bed & asked vicky to call the doctor.
maans was restless, yes she was fainted before but this is difference. vicky notice his caring. he also surprised.dadi was busy to welcome new married couple. she was so happy now. on the other hand dev looks tense not for geet for his sin. coz if family member know their relationship they will punish him. specially maan. dev is now dead scared about himself.
maan hold hand & rubbing. he cupped her face & said: geet, wake up. what happen to u. pls geet don't do this to me. maan thought she must be week thats why she fainted.
maan: keya karo iss ladki ka.. apna khayal nahi rakh sakhta abhi tak. bata nahi kab khayal rakhege khud ka. agar khud ka khayal nahi rakh sakta to humari bache ka khayal kaise rakhege? maan smile : bacha, maan to bohut dor tak soch leya, pehle iss ko samal le fer bache ki bare main soch.
then he sudden remember about doctor.
maan yelled : vicky, doctor ko phone kia. kitna der tu lga rahi hain?
vicky came in & said: bro, maine call kia. doctor aa rahi hain.
but maan not satisfied. he trough water drops on her face. then geet slowly open her eyes. her eyes pale. there was no emotion in her eyes. she looked celling & remember about dev & her romance.
maan touch her hand & said: geet, keya hoa tujhe. tu behosh kue ho gayi thi. keya hoa tujhe.
geet silent, seems like hies word not reached her ears. she lost her own world. maan shaking her. she did not response. then she stood up & went to her room & locked her door behind. maan stood there num. he did not understand whats was bothering her. but he understood something is serious. but what?
geet sat on the floor whole day. not come out or not spoke with others. vicky came with doctor but he failed coz she did not open the door. there was no tears in her eyes but her heart barged with pain. it hurt her to come out, but she stopped it.
maan in his room. he whole day restless, thinking about her. he wanted to talk her.. but no way! she gave him no chance.
after finished all ritual dev enter his room with his new bride. dev room was beside geet room. there was one internal door i n those roooms but only can locked it from geet room.. maans room was geet left side & a belcony for both rooms. everything could hear from devs room by internal door in geet rooms. some times they were share their romantic fellings by this door. geet remember how she sat there & other side of the door dev also sat & they were talking untill mid night. dev made every pormise to her . but today all r shattered. today geet sat there but dev with his wife in bed. geet could heared their gigiles, their talk. after that geet heared their moanof their non stop love. geet could not tolarate this anymore. she ran to the balcony she wanted to jump from there , but some one hold her arms. geet turned & looked maan. maan drag her in his room throgh her on bed.
maan: what the hell u were doing? have lost ur mind? why u did this?
geet looked at him but still silent.
maan furious now: geet, pls tell for god sake. why r u doing this. why ? whats the problem tell me, i 'll help u to sort out.
geet thought: how can i tell him, what his brother done with me. if i tell him, he 'll not believe may be. coz dev his brother. maan shaking her, pls geet tell pls. now geet tears burst out she hugged him tight & cried loud. maan also hold her tight. but confused. geet crying & maan tried to console her. but her tears seems not stop. after long time geet stopped. she stood in balcony & looked out side & try to find out her answer. & maan observ her from behind. her silent just killing him inside.
maan to geet

Kahin to.. kahin to
Hogi wo,
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..

Jahan mein, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,
Hogi jahan subah teri,
Palko ki, kirano mein,
Lori jahan chand ki,
Sune teri baahoin mein..

Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi..

to geet
Saasein kho gayi hai kiski aahon mein,
Mein kho gayi hu jaane kiski baahon mein,
Manzilon se raahein doodhti chali,
Kho gayi hai manzil kahin rahon mein..

Kahin to, kahin to,
Hai nasha..
Teri meri har mulaqaat mein,
Hoton se, hoton ko,
Chumti, o rehte hai hum har baat pe,
Kehti hai fiza jahan,
Teri zamin aasmaan..

Jahan hai tu, meri hassi,
Meri khushi, meri jaan…

Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi

pls comments..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome....continue soon....what is geet going to tell maan now?????
stupid dev😡😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superbbbbbbbbb!!!
Loveeee the part.
I hate dev😡.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...............feeling bad for geet but bad for maan too as he is not able to c her pain and wants to know abt it...............so pratham is our maan.............so u did end up splitting them for long................very sad sad...........................😭
Edited by preethia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update, but we deserve longer part sweetheart, please continue soon.

Sejal
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the update
i love the song too
it goes with the part ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update..

poor Geet 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update


Dev is such a jerk!!

continue soon hun!

love
Sana

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