TILL ETERNITY [MAANEET FF] PART 10 PG 42 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago


*Sob sob* 😭😭 so sad yaar 😭
What Geet did only a gem of a person could do 😭
Me in cry mode 😭

But Fab update 👍🏼
Thanks for pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...
Geet u r too gud yar...
U proposed a grl for become her bhabhi...too gud dear...lolz

Plz update soon..
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part Roops
Bechaari Geet... I wish she gets all her happiness
Thanks for the PM
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 14 years ago

ur updates r just n ...👏👏👏
u really done a n ...⭐️⭐️⭐️..
i just ...really ...
update of urs dear...😳😃..
4 ur gr8 effort.dear..👍🏼.
4 PM me...😃
tons of ..🤗🤗🤗.
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
rsroopali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 10 updating todayyy
Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
rsroopali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10

Last Part

4 Sept 1998

Today I saw Papa in London.I,Karan,Nandini and Armaan ,yesss Armaan is Karan n Nandini's son n when ever I see him he reinds me of U Maan so i named him Armaan n we had gone to Lotus Mall n I saw Papa but I couldn't have d courage to go n meet him as seeing him made me weak as to wt will I answer Papa's question's of nt calling him after coming to London.I just went away from there.

6 Sept 1998

Today Papa came home with Karan n as he came home I was shocked n surprised I just stopped feeding Armaan n had tears in my eyes n just ran n hugged Papa I wanted to hug him since the time i saw him in the Mall n then Karan smiled at me n I knew he had only brought Papa here n I mouthed a silent thanks to him.
Armaan was looking at me n Papa n Karan n then Papa thought tht it was Mine n Karan's son n I just went with it becoz i didn't want Papa to know the truth.Papa sat for some time n then told me that he was leaving tomorrow n nw he had an urgent metting so he had to leave n tht time Karan got a call n he went to d balcony n Papa left n then Nandini came downstairs after having a bath n I told her Papa had come n she just missed Papa as he just went.
Then Nandini went to the kitchen n came out with the medicines.

Geet "Bhabhi plzzz mein yeh yuck kadvi kadvi goliya nahi khane wali "

Nandini "Geet plzzz lelena yaar plzzz Armaan bhi itne nakre nahi kartha davi khane keliye"

Geet "Bhabhi mein nakre karthi hu??????aap jayiye mujhe nhi baath kari apse"

Nandini "Aree Geet akhrii baar bol rahi hu n agali baar tujhe doodh bhi dungi goli ke saath tho aab chup chap khale"

Geet "Dekha aab aap gussa bhi kar rahe hai mujhe paatha hai ke me bohat jald maarne wali hu tho mein ye davi khavo ya na khavo kya farak padtha hai"

As Geet told this Karan came in after finishing the call n heard Geet talking about dieing.

Karan "Geeettt??????yeh kya bol rahi haiii, tujhe patha hai na ke iss baath se humee kitni takleef hothi hai par phir bhi tu yese bolthi hai"

Geet "Aree nahi Karan aisi koi baath nahi hai.Sorrryyy na vry sorrryyy woh mujhe davi nahi peeni thi iss liyeee mere muuh se nikalgaya such mein galthi se bol diya janbhuch kar nahi boli mein.Sorrryyy na Bhai apni pyaari si behen ko maaf nahi karo gaye"

Then they heard someone telling frm back "Kyaaa?????Bhai?????"

Then when Geet Karan n Nandini turned towards d door they saw Papa standing there in tears n almos ready to fall on the floor but Karan caught him on the right time n made him sit on the sofa n Nandini brought water n Geet made Armaan go upstairs n play with his toys n just came n sat next to Papa.

Papa "Geet wts happening here you called Karan Bhai n then ur like Im going to die?Wts happening Beta ?Wt are you hiding from ur Papa ?Plzzz tell me beta."

Then Geet tells Papa about her disease n hw she got to know abt it thn hw she made Maan n all of then believe that she luved Karan n then after coming to London hw her treatment started n hw she got Karan n Nandini married n then the birth of Armaan.

n listening to it Papa was in tears that his small cute Princess had become sooo big n mature n that for other's hapiness she could do anything when she herself was suffering sooo much.

Papa "Geet your Babaji is sooo unfair 1 moment he gave me gud news of 1 of my child n then in d next moment he gave me a bad news abt my other child"

Geet "Papa i didn't understand wt ur telling?"

Papa "Geet i was coming here to tell you tht Meera is 3 months pregnant n Maan was feeling like he was in 7th heaven n then i heard abt ur disease. Karan is there anything tht I can do for my daughter just let me know if u need any help I m always there to help you"

Karan "Aree uncle dnt worry till Geet has her Bhai Bhabhi Armaan n nw she also has her Papa so nothing will happen to your Princess"

Geet "But Papa plzzz promise me that you will not tell this to anyone"

Papa "But Geet they have a right to know "

Geet "No Papa I want them to think tht I hv forgotten them n let them stay happy thinking Im happy. Plzzz Papa Promise this to meee"

Papa "OK Geet that's my promise to you"

Geet "Papa 1 more wish n its like my Last wish plzzz fulfill it for me Papa "

Papa "Yes Geet whatever you tell I will do "

Geet "Papa plzzz name Maan's daughter as Geet plzzz n I just know that its going to be a girl "

Papa "OK Geet so shall it be as you want "

27 Feb 1998

My health was ditorating I had gone sooo pale n i was sooo thin that I could hardly walk with support n then I was admitted in the hospital n I was in my last stages n Karan n Nandini never left my side n Armaan would come to me everyday n show his drawing of me n tell me that today he went to church n prayed for me n i would just see all of this n have tears in my eyes.
It was a feeling that i will miss all of them n my end was nearing.
I also knew that Karan tried to b sooo strong n brave in front of me but as i was sleeping in the night he would hug me n kiss on my foreheaad n cryyy as he was the 1 person who was there with me frm the start to till my end.

Karan My Best Friend My Bro My life's most important part n wt more can i say...

9th March 1998

I was having the feeling that today is my last day on earth n I just got a call frm Papa that Meera's labour pains have started and she may deliver any time bt more than happy Papa had sounded sad becoz he knew he was going to lose his daughter soon.
n then I gave my diary to Karan n told himn to give it to you Maan n told him to give my last remains to you when Armaan finds his luv n tht is the time you get to know the truth.

n Then I gave the bracelet you gave me to Armaan to give it to his Future wife.

Maan after reading the Dairy had tears in his eyes n then he remebered Papa calling someone whn Geet was born n then he just went away crying as if someone really close to us had left us n that was the Day he went picked up the baby n said Welcome back Geet
n i was realllyyy happy that Dad named her as Geet bcoz me n Meera were also going to name her the same.

Epilogue

After some 30 years also I have not forgotten the day when I got to know abt the truth n Im just waiting to go n meet my Geet as I know she is waiting sitting by the clouds seeing me n even today i read her dairy each day miss her like hell n love her even more.

Now life has become slow n I hv grown old
Geet n Armaan are married n have a son named Sid n he is just like Karan the exact same.
Prem is married to Heer n nw are happily married.

n as its evening i sit with Meera on the terrace n read Geet's diary n her letter where she has named all her special friends bcoz of whom even in sadness she was laughing n they would patiently sit n listen to all her stories smtimes get angry with her smtimes wait for her.

"You are my best friend as well as my lover,
and I do not know which side of you
I enjoy the most. I treasure each side,
just as I have treasured our life together."

"You are the answer to every prayer I've offered.
You are a song, a dream, a whisper, and I don't know
how I could have lived without you for as long as I have."

"Poets often describe love as an emotion that we can't control, one that overwhelms logic and common sense.
That's what it was like for me.
I didn't plan on falling in love with you, and
I doubt if you planned on fallin gin love with me.
But once we met, it was clear that neither of us could control what was happening to us.
We fell in love, despite our differences, and
once we did, something rare and beautiful was created.
For me, love like that has happened only once,
and that's why every minute we spent together
has been seared in my memory.
I'll never forget a single moment of it."

"And when I came in with tears in my eyes,
you always knew whether I needed you to hold me
or just let me be. I don't know how you knew,
but you did, and you made it easier for me."

N these were some lines Geet had written to Maan n Maan had always known that Geet n his luv is just not for till they are alive but it is for Till Eternity n no one can forget it or take it away frm him.

The End



thanksss to alll my readersss for bearing with me n as you know im a late latif in updatinggg
so here is the last part of Till Eternity
hope u liked ittt
n dooo commenttt plzzz
i would really like to know whether u liked it or nt

Luv

Roopaliii😊🤗

p.s. its nt only u all bt i cried like hell seeing Geet die
Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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roopali like button is not working dear
but seriously i had goosebumps reading the last part
geet died😭😭😭😭😭😭 but loved the last part of the diary n ys this story of yours clearly reflects the beauty of true love...amazing
loved it
geet was still there with maan maan named his child as geet
hats off
n sorry for editing late
Love -Piya
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That is really heart-wrenching ...rupz U r making me cry ...have beautifully penned down.

cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heys roops...
reading geet's diary just makes us realise how many trials and tribulstions she has faced...
she has been always putting other's happiness on priority even if gives her pain...
she is a fighter who has been selfless and courageous enough to fight back ...and even in the final moments...she manages to make one cry and happy...cry for she wud b no more...and happy for getting to kno her...
this ff has an apt title...and believe me it is one of the best ffs i have ever read...
i personally stay away from sad endings but somehow i managed to hold my curiosity and patience till the end and i am happy that i didnt turn away from this ff for the fear of having to cry...
as i said...this story will always remain special to me and remain ingrained in my memories for a long time...simply beautifulll
a unique way of penning down...and i loved it to the core...
i am already feeling teary eyed...and i am sure after reading the last update...by the time i am done reading the last line...i am going to break down...i just wish my parents dont catch me weeping...😆
but on a serious note...a brave attempt by u of writing this beautiful ff...
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva
P.S will once again comment once u post the final draft of last update
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a marvallous peice of work
sorry Roopali for not commenting often
you know I have been so tied up
Shruti

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