SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: premspadhu
fantastic update
maan kyun nahi roka geet ko

Maan feels responsibilty towards her parents... he is not thinking about himself only

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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

very emotional update.................

oh geet hp chali gayi maine socha maan rok lega but he is also right her parents cudnt c their wedding so this will atleast make them happy...............oh god geet loves maan too much if she as to go away from him forever will she b able to manage her self..........though maan also loves her but he is trying to control himself in expressing...............well they really need to talk a lot............

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#513

oh wowwwwwwwww part 14 was trulyyyyyyyyyyy awesomeeeeeeeeee

luved ittttttttttttttttt

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: preethia
very emotional update.................
oh geet hp chali gayi maine socha maan rok lega but he is also right her parents cudnt c their wedding so this will atleast make them happy...............oh god geet loves maan too much if she as to go away from him forever will she b able to manage her self..........though maan also loves her but he is trying to control himself in expressing...............well they really need to talk a lot............

Yes.. very true

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: sindu555
loved the update ....

finally both have fallen madly for each other .. and atleast giving some hints .....

cant wait for the next part...

continue soon

love

Sana

They have fallen in love.. they need to stop doubting...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: rsroopali
oh wowwwwwwwww part 14 was trulyyyyyyyyyyy awesomeeeeeeeeee
luved ittttttttttttttttt

Thanks...yes.. it was cute... and actually very near to Maan/Geet characters.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: sharmake11
Her parents were ready and waiting for her to come down...but her instruction list to Maan was not completing..."Maan...don't sleep on terrace.. sleep in room...don't work too much.. I will take your update from Pinki...and .....and......"

He was standing and listening to her.... almost half and hr has passed...finally....

"Geet, its getting late......."

"Pata hain mujhain......" and then she came running to him...holding on her tears and hugged him tightly...as if she is being sent forcefully...as if she is not going to see him again......

He brought her down....made her sit in the car.....he gave her new friend PINKS

love this part Geet
doesnt to live Maan so sweet of her
cant wait next part to read

yippe delivery time

wonderful update

pls cont soonnnnn

thanks pm

Thanks for liking it... in this scene actually I could visualize GC/DD very much...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: misschulbuli
eagerly waiting for the next update.....it should be a baby boy this tym bcoz in every other FF or OS they always have a baby gal 😆

Yes..... i take your input.