SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

loved the update ....

finally both have fallen madly for each other .. and atleast giving some hints .....

cant wait for the next part...

continue soon

love

Sana

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

oh wowwwwwwwww part 14 was trulyyyyyyyyyyy awesomeeeeeeeeee

luved ittttttttttttttttt

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Very romantic n cute update. Lovd d puppy part.

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

Her parents were ready and waiting for her to come down...but her instruction list to Maan was not completing..."Maan...don't sleep on terrace.. sleep in room...don't work too much.. I will take your update from Pinki...and .....and......"

He was standing and listening to her.... almost half and hr has passed...finally....

"Geet, its getting late......."

"Pata hain mujhain......" and then she came running to him...holding on her tears and hugged him tightly...as if she is being sent forcefully...as if she is not going to see him again......

He brought her down....made her sit in the car.....he gave her new friend PINKS

love this part Geet
doesnt to live Maan so sweet of her
cant wait next part to read

yippe delivery time

wonderful update

pls cont soonnnnn

thanks pm

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

wow Maan so sweet making specialy because she is living they can spend together plus the gift amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm

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Durga

@mrk-1

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

wow thats awsome one yaar

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

tat was a sweet update.........loved it!!!!

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: preethia
very emotional update.................
oh geet hp chali gayi maine socha maan rok lega but he is also right her parents cudnt c their wedding so this will atleast make them happy...............oh god geet loves maan too much if she as to go away from him forever will she b able to manage her self..........though maan also loves her but he is trying to control himself in expressing...............well they really need to talk a lot............

Yes.. very true

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: sindu555
loved the update ....

finally both have fallen madly for each other .. and atleast giving some hints .....

cant wait for the next part...

continue soon

love

Sana

They have fallen in love.. they need to stop doubting...