Heartless~~~Pg-45 part-8 - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago

hai,,, i hoped ur exam wil over...

pl update soon ... its vert long...
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART -8

Maan's monologue

What happened to her???She looks so lifeless''her eyes!!!!!!!are no longer the same'..seems like she is in another world''where was she these months??what happened to her during that time???

Geet's monologue

Is it Maan?is he my imagination??Geet raises her hand and had nearly touched him when a female voice broke her revive'.Geet moved away from Maan as if she has been given an electric shock''

Girl:Maan what are u doing here????u know what are we here for'..Maaan

Maan breaks off his thoughts n looks at her and then at Geet,who by now has moved away from Maan'

Maan gets engrossed with her'.

In the meanwhile someone grabs Geets hand and pulls her inside a dark room''

Geet was not shocked becaused she knew why was she pulled''.

The man swich on the light n Geet sees its Dev.

Dev:Geet I told u'I told u'.why don't u listen to me?grabs her by her shoulders and vigorously shakes her'.Geet I told u we have an imp client'they why????u know u can never escape from here then why do u try????Geeet

Geet stood like a statue not responding'

GEEETTT' n Dev slaps her across the face'.n comes out of her revive'.

Go n wash ur face'''.be ready u have a very imp work 2day''

Few mins later Dev accompanies Geet to room 212 .Few men were inside .Geet is forced to enter the room and the room is locked'''..

Maan on the other hand when looks up at Geet n finds her missing'..

Maan:Pari did u see the girl .

Pari:Girl????

Maan:The one who was with me before u came''..

Pari:No'.

Maan,Pari,Adi,Vicky and Arjun are members of CID'They are here to investigate and expose the dirty business child and woman trafficking''

Maan and Pari have come to hotel Ashoka to gather some important clues on it''.

Maan and Pari gets an idea of where an important suspect might be present and they leave the hotel to proceed to that destination'''..


Precap:Maan and Pari go to a nightclub...

PREV: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1617388/heartless-pg-45-part-8?pn=30

Note:I am really sorry for the delay😭I know its been months since the last update'''..but I was really held up with councelling n other stuff''

Few more coming up'''..😊😊😊


Edited by sam1234fly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first
i think now geet would be saved but the things that happened with geet is unimaginable that b****** Dev had mad her a pro******** i want maan to beat the hell out of Dev
Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally U r back ...Welcome back dearšŸ¤—

loved the update

hope she ll get out of this hell soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

welcome bck.

awsome update
hope geet get away from dev.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Finally U r back ...Welcome back dearšŸ¤—


loved the update

hope she ll get out of this hell soon



ya..thanx

ya she will...cuz our super duper hero MSK is here...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😃nice part😃
hope geet gets away from dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update;;
Hope maan gets her out of this torture place
poor geet..feel so sorry for her
cont soon Xx...
thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome back dearšŸ¤—
really nice update!!!
really feeling sad for Geet .
cont soon n thanx 4 pm:)

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