ff maneet (LOVE WAR)thread 2 part 60 page 46 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part.
cant wait fo the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
wow what a great ff ..
can u pm me if u upload the next part ?
woud b very thankfull :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
congrats for new thread..Nice part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
that was really nice
and congo on new thread
cont soon
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
congratz on new thread
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread
superb
cont soon
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part 47
maan looked at her blankly, then looked at the outside by the window. geet sat on coach.
geet: a girl who never know what was sadness, she always keep a smile on her face a lovely charming girl. always tried to remove others sad. she was like that coz her dadima & her big brother. they loved her very much, always keep her happy. whetever she wished always they gave her. she lived in like heaven. maan looked at her back surprisingly.
maan: whom u r talking about?
geet indicate him to stop.
geet: maan, let me finished. the girl always wanted to keep her family happily. her dadi & her brother everything for her. her parents left when she was only two. she did not how fell parents love.. but it was not bothering her coz her brother. her brother always treat her as a daughter more than sister. he loved her much more than himself. the girls dadima loved her as her life.they gave her everything but return she did not gave anything to them. nothing. she started to cry. maan comes to close to her. she suddenly held his coller & said, an accident ruined their happy life. snached everything from them. when the girl thought did something for them. destiny played a cruel game with them. her brother injured in an accident. the accident snached her brother happy life. he is alive now, but without soul. he is in coma. maans eyes widen now. now he understand something.
maan : geet, don't say those girl is u, & that man is ur brother he shaking her. geet jerk his hand & stay back. yes maan, he is my brother. the story is mine. i m that unfortunate girl.
maan through his fingers in his head. no, it can't be. no.
geet saw him blankly & said: its true maan. its true. i m that girl who worked ur office to save her family. i m that girl who still strugling to back her brothers life. i m that girl who still try to back her family business which is closed by that accident.
maan looked at her shocked. his eyes mois.
geet yelled: i m that unlucky girl, who did nothing for her family. a useless girl, a usel ess sister or
or may be an unsuccessful wif.... she stopped.
maan : stop it stop it.. its not true.. u r not failure. u can't be. no..
geet: yes maan, i m a failure. i have no right to stand by u. nothing.. thats why i wanted to stayed away from u. i dont want u r covered by my sad puzzle. but there also destiny played a game. he always stand me in front of u.but no more. i don't let him win. i m going after this she ran away.
maan: geet, stop.. pls lisen to me. but geet is gone.
he stand in front of mirrior see his image. he asked himself: maan, uah! u don;t deserve this name. actually u deserve nothing. u r the most cruel person in the world u know that. ur pride destroy u, ur so called ego snached from u every happiness. u lost everything. maan barged.
u lost everything maan.. everything. u doubt a pure relation like brother & sister relation. chi! shame on u maan. how do u know the purity in this relation? coz u have no brother or sister. u r alone & u will be. u doubt ur own love. he correct: love aah! what type of love is this. that u can doubt ur own love with her brother. so shame of u. how ur heart allow this? no no u r heartless. u cann't love any one. u r heartless.
maan break the mirrior . his hand bleeding.. very badly. he reapeat: u don't deserve anything anything maan..
after that, he tought, but i can't leave geet alone. she need me. no i need her. how can i face her.
he suddenly remember last night which maan force geet & kissed. but he took it wrong way.
maan eyes widen: oh ! god what i had done last night i forced geet & i kissed her. he close his mouth by his palm. oh no! how could i go so low. how. i forced her. no i forced my own love.
after that he laughed evil style. wow maan great, now u have nothing to do. u create ur bad image in her heart. bravo maan! now what u 'll do now. u asked forg iveness. why she 'll give u?
dadima is right ur past will kill ur future. now see it 'll happen. u always compare every girl with her.. even u r not spare ur lover. lover no, u don't deserve her love.. no.. just go away maan go away from her..
precap: what will maan do now?
pls give ur comments and suggetion..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it i hope now maan will go to the building where preet is n finds geet there n tries to talk to her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my god !!! i dont want maan to run away !!!! pls continue soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
awesome part but wat will maan do now?a million dolar q's😕

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