ff maneet (LOVE WAR)thread 2 part 60 page 46 - Page 13

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wowwwwwww atlast both maan ngeet are back as onee i ml ovingg it :):):):):):):)::

note: maan & geet did not confess their love. but they r now together. they know each other very well. most twist & turn will come. & don't worry they confess their love very soon. after all payer lakh chupane se chupta nahi...be with me. & thanx a lot for ur comments & support... love u all..

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Part 52

They hug each other so passionately fell strange felling between them. Both hold each other very tightly. Geet close her eyes & dug her nail in his shoulder. Maan also squeezing her back sensually. They never felt it before. They lost in their world. Both fell the unknown felling in each other arms. Actually they know the felling quite, but they just fell it now. Don't know why they will not fell it later. They don't know how long they hug but they don't want to break it. Maneet close their eyes, then they hear a knock in the door. Slowly the knock hard they back their sense & break their hug. Maneet hesitate geet bend her head down then she realize she still wore maans shirt. She more embarrassed. Maan look away, don't know what to say. Then they hear again the knock. Maan annoyed.

Maan : geet, go to our room I'll see this.

Geet nodded she go to their room. Maan open the door see munshiji stand with a man who carry lots of bags.

Munjhiji: dekheyena, maan beta, main inko kabse bol raha ho ki yeha koi kapde ki order nahi diya, par ye sonta nahi. He rolled his eyes on him.

Man: arey bhai kitni bar kaho, mujhe yehe address de gayi hain. Maan stop their argue & said: its ok, maine bolaya onhe. Munshi ji eyes pop out , he can't believe his eyes.

Munjhisi ji: beta apne bolaya, ov ladkiyo ki kapde. Maan rolled his eyes, kue koi problem hain?

Munjhiji drink his salvia, & said : nahi koi problem nahi hain. Maan paid the salesman & both leave. Munjhiji wonder for maan s strange behavior he decide to talk with dadi.

Maan take all bags & go to their room.

Maan: ye dekho ye sab tumhari leye. He notice geet who already wear her old suit, but no dupatta.

Maan put all bags on bed, & said: geet, tumhe ye kue pehna? Main tumhari leye naya suit le aayi. Geet happy to see his concern.

Geet: nahi maan sir, its ok main thik ho.

Maan hate this word "sir", maan : geet, main janta ho tumhe ye jarorat nahi . par agar tum ye pehnogi to mujhe acha lagege. Then he leave wit heartbroken.

Geet : check all bags, there r some suits with various colors. And a red saree. Geet love it very much.

Maan waiting for her in break fast table. When geet come down with a green suits. Maan mesmerized with her beauty. Both smile.

Geet: thank u, thanx for she stopped. Maan make a innocent face & ask: why u thanks me? U should be thank to the salesman, after all its his choice. He tease her.

Geet: well, I thank him later, but I should thank those person who buy it for me.

Maan smile: its nothing with ur favors. Whatever u did for me.

Geet put her finger on his lip & said: its not favors, don't tell this again. Maan hold her fingers & ask: then what was that? With his seducing voice.

Geet eyes pop out, she think what to say. She noted her dupatta

Geet Oh, u know. She stop. Maan: yes geet, I m listening he narrow his eye brow.

Geet : oh main, I mean hum. Maan towards her & up her chin, ha bolo geet keya hain.?

Geet fell her body cold she look at his eyes, then his lips. Its so tempting. Both look their lips & so close with each other to kiss. Geet close her eyes. Maan goes more close to her.

Maan: hello,

Dadi: ha, maan beta aap to hume vhol gayi, aap ko yaad v hain ki aap ko ek dadi hain.

Maan: nahi dadi, aisa nahi hain.

Dadi: acha, maine sona ki aap ek mehne tak bahar thi, kaha thi aap.

Maan shocked , what to say.. oh dadi ma , main bahar gaya tha kaam ki wajase. Geet look at him. She take the phone, & said: salam dadi ma, kaise hain aap.

Dadi geet, aap yeha, humari ghar main.

Geet: ji dadima, main maan ki, I mean maan sir ki assistant ho.

Dadi thought: wah, maan, man gayi aap ko. Ek muka nahi chora geet ko apni kareeb rakhne ko. Dadi asked: jada pereshan to nahi karti hain maan aap ko?

Geet: pereshan, nahi dadima, par jinki gussa nak pe rehte ho, onko extra taklif thori karni parti hain logo ko pereshan karne main. Maan rolled his eyes.

Maan: geet, tum kitna juthi ho, main tumhe pershan karte ho.

Geet: or nahi to keya. Maan snach the phone & said: dadima, iski baat bilkul rishwas mat kije. Osne mujhe bohut pereshan karti hain. Bata hain jab main hospital main tha tab geet.

Dadi : keya, aap hospital main thi, aur apne mujhe bataya nahi. Both realize now what they said. Maan look at geet for help, geet also don't know what to say.

Dadi: maan, main apse bohut naraz ho, main next week aa rahi ho. Aap dono ki to kher nahi. She cut the call. Maan nahi dadima soneye.

Geet: ab keya hogi?

Maan: hoga keya, dadi ma ka gussa jhelne ki leye tayer ho jao.

Geet : maine aap ko kaha tha. Par apne nahi sona. Aap vokto.oh god keya kaho dadima ko. Kuch socheye na.

Maan: ha, jab dadima ayege, tab onse mafi manglonga. Simple.

Geet narrow her eyes: oh , kitna janti hain aap dadi ma ko . main janti hodadi ma ko, onhe manana itna asan nahi hogi.

Maan: tum mujshe jada mere dadima ko janti ho? Kaise.

Geet: sirf dadi ma nahi, main aap ko v apse jada janti ho. Kuki aap

Maan: main keya, geet, bolo. She stay back deep in her breath: aap mere dost hain.

Maan surprised. Geet run out with her all bags.

Maan: arey, geet rooko, nasta to kar jao. Geet turn & said, mujhe nasta nahi apki sathdinner karni hain. She wink him & leave. Maan smile. & thought: chalo, kuch to naam hoa iss ristey ka. But I will convert it to love very soon.

Then he notice news paper checking headline & he shocked.

nice update...... hey babaji maneet ko aise hi khush khush rakhna