maan geet ff

hey everyone........i was jst wondering abt maan n geet...........recently i had seen a documentary film and i really liked d concept....and was wondering abt writing a ff on maan n geet based on it........

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The basic concept of it is..............

Geet Handa is vry beautiful and wants to be a model.Her best friend is Anwesha Khurana.But one day changes her life forever.The day which she thought was a boon became a bane.....She is no longer Geet,the happy go lucky kind of a girl

Any one interested...den i may continue...............
I posted it n geet forums and i will update there only...............

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1617388/heartless-pg-45-part-8

And friends those who like it,plz add m as a buddy,den i can send u d pms.........i dont know why bt whenever i try to add some1 to my buddy list,it displays "an error has occured"................

plz continue, the concept seems to be interesting and plz add me to ur pm list

ok i will write the first part..........plz do tell me if you would like me to continue............i know i m a pathetic writer plz bear with m..........

Geet's monologue

My head was paining very badly.I opened my eyes'.I could not see anything'I tried to move my hands'but I could not'I realized I was tied to a bed''..My whole body was aching'..In still tried to move my hands'but they were tied very tightly by some very sharp rope''..and it seemed as if my hands were bleeding''My whole body was sore''.All I could move were my legs which were not tied''As I moved them my dress moved above my thighs'I tried to put them down but in vain'..I realized I was wearing a very short dress'dress????no!!!!!a lingerie'..only lingerie'..and nothing''.

I tried to remember where and why I was here?????I closed my eyes as realization dawned upon me''

I slowly opened my eyes'.I tried to look around'but it was very dark'..I realized I was in a small dingh room'..with no windows'.but only a door''.The only source of light was the light which penetrated from under the door''.

Suddenly I heard footsteps and heard someone laughing loudly''.and someone entered the room''..I was blinded by the sudden light''..Someone entered and closed the door with a BANG''

I tried to see who it was''.He came towards me and on seeing me looking at him he smiled and threw away his shirt''The whole room was filled with the smell of alcohol''He came towards me and touched my thigh'moving his hands upwards"Hey Geet'you are beautiful'but you will look more beautiful without this '."and smirked'.'I jerked and shouted "Don't you touch me'..you basterd'.."

Man:" Oh.....Den whom do you want to touch you???"(laughs loudly)"Geet,you can do nothing see what I do to you'.and smirked"He ripped off Geet's dress and jumped on her'.his hands moved all over her'..pinching pushing pulling all over her''.tears rolled down her eyes''.

Geet:"Please don't'don't'"she begged''.she could so nothing'..afterall she was tied and the monster was more powerful than her and was on her'..

Man:"This is just the beginning''more is yet to come"'he brought his alcohol smelling mouth towards her and began kissing her roughly'..biting tearing her lips till it started to bleed''.tears rolled down her eyes''..He left her mouth and smiled an evil smile and licked his lips''.

Geet:"You bas***d''.."and she spit on his face and with all her might kicked him in between his legs''.He moarned in pain and fell down the bed''..cluching where it pained the most'''

He slowly got up and said,"Don't be happy so much'..I will come back"''..with that he left her'took his shirt and banged out of the room''..

Geet lied naked on the bed with her hands tied and tears and blood rolled down her eyes and body''She closed her eyes in pain'''.

So frnds how was it......plz tell m.......was it to much violence.....did someone like it?????since its the 1st ff i m trying 2 write so plz tell m frnds should i continue??????

i guess no one is interested........😭.................but its ok...........i think my idea wasnt good............

It seem interesting want to read more, update the next part soon.

Continue soon.

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