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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Mana Hello di !

Update was just brilliant.👏👏 thankkksss !
So finally Rajveer lost his temper with Naina but in the end it was she who was dominating the scene.😆😆 Captain can never win against his protege.😉😉 And we like it that way...isn't it?

Naina told him the truth abt that caller and Raj was relieved to know that she was avoiding him coz she cares for him a lot.
I hope Keerti hi ab kuchh kare taki aptain Naina se apne dil ki baat keh sake warna jaisi unki speed hai usse dekh ke to lagta hai agle paanch saal aur wait karna padega😆😆 yup!! wahi plan hai...wanna make hatke luv story...budhape waali ! 😛😆
Special thanks to Priya for updating this on your behalf.😊 and priya says WELCOME !
Pls continue soon
Bye

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Congrats for completing 100pgs of this fiction Mana👏👏


Thanks di...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hi Mana 😃 hi ayushi !

How are you now? Hope your exams goes well..😊 am good n thanks!

Hmmm sahi kiya Rajveer ne Naina ko jab tak apne paas bitha kar dara kar dhamka kar nahi pucho kambhakt mooh hi nahi kholti dekha Rajveer ke kehne se kaise totey ki tarah sara sach ugal diya.. he he he😆

Aur yeh Rajveer apne aap ko kitni takleef pahuchata hain. Hmmm shalini aur Kirti ka plan bada hi jhakkas hai Rajveer aur Naina ko check-up ke bahane se sath mein bula liya wah..!!! ab docs aisehi mast hote hai ! 😛😉

Rajveer ki ekdaam bindass side dekh kar Naina kitna hairaan hui na mei bhi hui.😆

Ab jaldi se update karna kyunki mein yeh jaldi se dekhna chahti hoon ki Rajveer Naina se apne Pyaar ka izhaar kaisey karta hai. Are you so damn sure ki woh Naina se apne pyaar ka izhaar karne waala hai? 😛

Cont'soon
Ayushi.😃
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Congrats for completing 100 pages... 👏👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

hey mana...how u? after a long time u updated...must say a lovely part, finally kuch acha ho rha hai 😊😊😊 ...like the convo b/w raj n naina in the office, raj cares for her too much, he's very worried about the caller whom naina is talking n naina being so stubborn didn't tell him any thing...n in thie while process he hurt hmself, oh poor raj he's feeling so helpless n nanina on the other hand trying hard not to get emotional n ask major to not to involve in naveen's matter furthur...like the line said by raj "Kash tum samjh pati "...and after tht he hurt his shoulder too, which naina can't tolertae n strt puttng her anger on him Gud Naina u scolded him...so finally naina ko apne mentor k agai har mani hi pari hai n she told him everything about the phone call...

Nice plan by shalu n keerti...so they r going to Chandigarh, so next part illl be an interesting one, so only raj n naina throughout the journey, naina was pleased to see the bonding b/w shubahankar n raj n yes Raj k aane ki khabar se Keerti is so happy k us ne kisi ko daata bhi nahi...so one more day at chandigarh...

Cont soon

Take care


Hi dear...
thank you so much for commenting !
i'm glad that you liked the update..
Yes...this was after a looong time...will try to update sooner this time...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


Hey gud and lenghty update Mana 👏 👏 Thanks Vertika!
Just love it.
Mujhe lagta hai ki agar Raj Naina pe gussa nahi karta to vo sochne pe majboor na hoti aur batane ko sochti bhi nahi. 😛 😛 bilkul sahi !
Raj was rlly angry and he must b akhir Naina ne itne badi baat jo chupai hai us se varna Raj k saath vo aisa behave nahi karti.
That scene between Raj and Naina was very emotional, Raj was deeply hurt by her behavior when she said him to quit Naveen's case investigation.😲 😲
Raj was shocked to see Naina's concern when he hurt his hand and i'm sure he was enjoying it.😉 😉 kuch kuch khatta...kuch kuch meetha !
Naina is rlly bandit queen, when she showed her anger Raj was speechless and he didn't want to loose her care. 😳 😳 he he he 😆
Raj kehte kehte ruk gaya jo kehna chahta tha vo Naina se aur Naina bhi ye baat janti thi aur chahti bhi nahi thi abhi.😔 😔
Wow how handsome he looks when he is in anger 😳 😳 but apna gussa bahar nikalne ka ye kaun sa new method hai ki apni health k baare me bina soche itne heavy coil ki riffle uthaya jaye?😕 😕 arey woh sab bhool gaya tha gusse mein...
Gud Naina u scolded him and it was rlly needed that time, he did mistake second time in a day without thinking about his health.
Raj is very naughty he was ignoring Naina showing his fake anger but Naina ko manana mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai.😆 😆
Shalini ne bhi acchi class li hai Raj ki aur aaj kal bahut privacy de rhi hai ye dono ko, aur ab to Kirti se milne jaane k liye bhi dono ki saath setting kar di ek lame excuse se.😉 😉 hmm...
Raj is happy ki Naina ko us k saath jaane se pblm nhi hai bus BC k order se confusion hai aur ye to koi bhi kar dega un dono k liye.😉 😉
Abhi to nahi rhega time pe kabhi.😆 😆
wow too persons r going who r in luv and vo bhi without talking in whole journey.😲 😲
Raj k aane ki khabar se Keerti kitne khush hue ki us ne kisi ko daata bhi nahi.😊 😊
Raj is rlly possessive abt Naina and loved the bonding of Shubhankar.😃 😃
Naina ne jo shikayat ki hai ki Raj bhi shock ho gaya.😲 😲
Kitna jhagda karte hain ye dono bacchon ki tarah? 😆 😆 bachche!! Jhagde se hi toh pyaar badhta hai ! 😛
I am sure ab Raj and Naina k liye Keerti koi na koi setting kar degi dinner date pe.😉 😉 lets see!
Try to update fast yep...will surely try...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hi Mana Hi nisha...

Sorry haven't been able to reply earlier. Its okay yaar...no issues !😊
Seeing that you will be updating the next part. so thought that i should hurry up and reply..ha ha ha...😆
Raj finally lost his temper😡 and gave a peice of his mind to Naina for hidding the truth from him. But naina being his protegee was not going to give in so easily.😉 But she had to give in and tell Raj the truth. Raj tries to assure her that nothing will happen to him and that they should not give up their mission because of such threats. Ab in the end RAJ is her mentor...he knows how to get things outta her very well !
Raj apna gussa khud par hi utarta hai and ends up hurting his shoulder, jiss ke liye usse naina, shalini aur kirti ki daant khani padi hmmm...yeh teen deviyan uss bechare ko har waqt daant hi lagati rehti hai...

shalini's trick of sending naina with raj to chandigarh was a brilliant idea😉. She knows that only Kirti will be able to convince Raj to confess his love to naina.😳😆
waiting eagerly for your update...please continue soon. will be doing soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...thanks hun...i'll try to update soon.,,
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Hi Mana hope you are fit and fine now and finished your exams well😊 😊 😊 coming to the update well it was a very nice and good long update😛 😉 😊 Thanks a ton for liking the update shreya...


finally Naina madam Rajveer sir ke sawalon ki hotseat per baith hi gayin lekin tab bhi thik se kuch nahi bataya usne ulta Rajveer ko aur chot lag gayi ye naina bhi na pata nahi kyon itni pagal hai ulte seedhe kaam to karti hi rehti hai😉 😔 😆 lekin iss pagal ko shayad rajveer ki daant aur uss ke kandhe per phir se chot lagne ka asar ho hi gaya aur sab sach keh diya usse 😊 😊 😊 jaane de yaar...aakhir uss PAGAL naina ne sach keh diya...yahi kafi nahi hai kya? 😛😆

raj to ye ab tak samajh nahi pa raha hai ki kab kya chalta hai naina ke dimaag me kabhi khud kehti hai koi baat nahi hai aur kabhi sabkuch sach sach bata deti hai...bechara aage kya hoga uska😆 😆 😆 waise dr.shalini ne accha chakkar chalaya aur raj ko naina ke saath bhej diya 😉 😉 😊 Aage toh Ram hi raakhe usko ! 😛 😆

waise naina aise kisiki taang kheench sakti hai kisi ke saamne ye dekhkar rajveer sach mein shocked reh gaya ho ga jaise naina thi jab wo keerti aur shubhankar ke beech mein jhagdwane ki koshish kar raha tha😲 😆 😆 dono bhi ek number ke namune hai re !

chalo ab kuch der ke liye ye dono biku akele ek saath hone waale hain to dekhna ye hai ki raj kya kehta aur naina kya samajhti hai😊 😛 😛 jaroor dekhna...bass mujhe maarna mat !😛

continue soon😊
shreya😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Awesome update
loved it
continue soon

thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

ohk...pahle socha...teri dhulai karu ki peetai karu...!!! In mein se kuch bhi tu kar nahi sakti kyunki usske liye tumhe yaha aana padega...😛

kyoun ke first part me jaise Naina behave karr rahi thi na raj ke ke sath...mujhe tere pe gussa aa raha tha...!!! phir wo wall wala scene na mast tha...mujhe raj aise hi pasand hai...jahan wo naina par apna haq jamata hai...😃 hmmm...samajh rahi hu main bhi...😉

phir raj ko chot laga diya tune...doc hai na...ek bhi chance nahi chodti...!!!😆 ab maarne ke liye hath matt utha...tujhe toh pata hai main docs ko kitna pasand karrti hoon...ha ha ha...😆exa khud ko hi le le...matlab ki 'an apple a day keeps tha doc away'...isiliye jab se tujh se dosti hui hai maine apples khana chod diya hai...😆 he he he...luv u dear !😆

phir raj ka thoda pressure pada nahi ke...Naina...Maina hogayi...aur sara sach ugal diya...aur rajveer bhi thoda relax ho gaya..!!! chalo aage wo... apne plan ke hisab se sab handel toh karr hi payega na...tu jo uss se karrwayegi...!!!😛 wahi toh...ab jaake tune akalmandi ki baat ki!

dont worry raj ke rifle practice scene se update ke end tak padhte hue na...tu mujhe duniya ki sab se achhi ladki lagi...😆 reaalllyyy??😆

phir Shal aur Kirti ne kya achha sa plan banaya...matlab ki tune dikha hi diya ke...docs chahe toh kya nahi ho sakta...!!! 😆 chup ! Ab buttering mat kar !😆

chalo abhi toh dono bahar hai...aur sayad tu kuch achhi si khichdi bhi bana chuki hai unn dono ke liye...mujhe uss ki khushbu aa rahi hai yaar... toh der kis baat ki...jaldi se serve karr na...bhuk ke maare mera haal-behal ho raha hai...😛😉 Bass ek request hai ! Khane ke baad ulti karke mujhe peetna mat !! pata nahi khichdi tumhe tasty lagegi ya nahi...aur hazam hogi bhi ya nahi !

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