Unforgivable (ArSh): Epilogue - Pg. 35

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KaSh_luv

@KaSh_luv

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

omg..i jus feel lyk giving Shilpa a hug..u wrote it amazingly..how she feels n everything... da update was awesome..but sad... i aint Armaan... omg.. is it?

update soon..i cnt wait :)

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hiiii

awesome update

loved it

poor ridzy

i feel bad 4 armaan

i dont think its him

im think its aditya

he seems weird

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

amazing update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now i think it was not Arman.................but that Aditya seems suspicious.......................didnt like him....................OMG it was getting hell confusing...................................😕
i m feeling very sad for Shilpa..........................her reaction was heart wrenching...............
loved Myskan's care for her......................
cont soon..................
thanx for the pm.................
Afrin

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

woahhh great part!! INTENSE!

im so confused on who did it now..ahhah..

if shilpa's "heart" says he's innocent then he probably is LOL..but then again the blue eyes...and now creppy aditya...CHAOS! hhah..

great job!

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

U've depicted Shilpa's pain nicely. I have serious doubts abt this Aditya. I don't think it would b Armaan. D person could b using lens.

Pls continue soon

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Samosa

@s4mosa

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

@rising_angel: it could be either... or someone completely different... hehe guess you'll have to wait and see 😉

@KaSh_luv: Thanks!! maybe it is, maybe its not! keep reading to find out! 😉

@ARMAANKSHFAN: Thank you! Lol 'he seems weird' haha. it could armaan, aditya or someone else! you never know. 😆

@_Afrin_: Thanks! Lol sorry to confuse you! 😆 will continue soon as i can!

@angullgrl91: Haha.. confusion is good right now! keeps you interested in the story so you keep coming back! 😛

@wilddevil2010: Thank you! will try to continue soon. 😊

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drkhoobsoorat

@drkhoobsoorat

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

OMG!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS ADITYA ISN"T IT. SCREW THAT bas***d. HE DID IT I JUST KNOW IT.

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anjali

@katsmeow

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hey amazing part yaar im sre its nt armaan plzzz cnt sooon

luv u

anjali

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

damn..i can bet its not armaan...the other guy did it..poor arsh..bt i guess thts wt the story is all abt.....make get me a scene whr armaan consoleds shilpa ...wd love reading it...n plz clear the confusion...i m too much in lovw W*H ths ff...update supersoon..