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still waiting 4 ur next update

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I was busy with my job,

will update soon!

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Hey Mina,

thanks!

will update very soon! I was really busy with my job!


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Part 27

Maaneet came to their Cabana room around 12.30am and Geet was on his arms. Both were so lost in each other that they didn't even had their dinner.

There was a rising desire on both hearts. Both were feeling they should move but, none expressed.

As soon they came to the room, Geet went to the Kitchen..

Maan: Geet?

Geet: Han, kyun?

Maan: Where are you going?

Geet: Oh! To the jungle… Maan, this is the way to kitchen, you know it and still….

Maan: Are you planning to cook @ this time..

Geet knew, she was teasing him, but loved to see him like that..

Geet: Han, I am really hungry..

Maan murmured: I am here, said I love you to her and she, just thinks about her dinner, yeh ladki toh sachmuch pagal hai..

Maan: I am going to take a shower..

Geet: Ok..

Maan: I said I am going to take a shower.. may be a long bath…

Geet: Yes, I heard you, go ahead

Maan, yeh ladki bhi nah, mai clues se clues deta hoon aur yeh,,, a powerful tube light..

Maan went to the wash room and Geet quickly went to the spare wash room attached to the kitchen and had a quick shower.

She wore a light night dress, with small straps..


The dress she wore


Then she went to their room and waited for Maan, she knew he was gonna distract by her sight and she wanted that to happen.

Maan who was fuming with anger hit his head on the door. Yeh Geet bhi nah,


I arranged a romantic confession night specially for her,

I said her how much I love her

She also loved me back and now,

She is concerned only about the dinner, ajeebh ladki hai.

Maine kya kya nahi soch aur abh yeh …

Maan had a long shower and came out wearing his towel as he didn't know Geet was there,

Geet too didn't expect him in that way…

Both got stunned after seeing each other…

It was Maan who couldn't get his eyes off from his Geet, who was standing right in front of him wearing a exposed nigh dress. He could see every lines of her body, his desire began to come out and

Yes, in Geet also. It was the first time she saw his bare body and she got blank. Sneha was correct, Maan is such a DD, only seeing him in his formals girls get crazy, if they saw him like this.. yes.. Maan will probably be blamed for murdering thousands of Girls…

Geet smiled on her own thoughts.

Maan, couldn't stop him self any more headed towards her.

Geet started to move backwards and then she hit the bed line fall off...

Maan also lost his balance and fall on to her.

Now Maan, top of Geet and both were looking @ each other and having their famous eye lock!

Maan then slowly moved his hands towards her night ware,

Geet: Maan............

Maan: Nahi Geet, aaj muje koi nahi rock sak te hai

Geet: Mmmmmm

Maan: Geet, we no longer are strangers or just a couple,

You admitted that you love me and I love you too..

So no need to be shy anymore..

Geet: Plz Maan, switch off the lights, I am feeling shy...

Maan: No Geet, I want you to see me, I want you to look in to my eyes,

Then he slowly undo her back zipper. Geet felt a strong current running trough her body.

Maan: You are feeling like a rose geet, so soft...

Then her undo her night wear, but this time Geet couldn't feel it as she was very busy with the towel...

First she was shy and then she quickly switched off the light and removed his towel.

Geet saw the slight smile Maan had on his lips...

Lips, yes.. the main object in our story...

He started his work, his lips followed his orders..

He began with a gentle forehead kiss and then he started his real game...

While his lips showering Geet's naked body, his hands explored her whole body...

Geet felt the warmth of his naked body against her's.

His lips met her's and started to explore her mouth... His tongue began to search it's partner and without any difficulty it was able to find it.

Geet responded to the kiss and their tongues began to play while both were very busy with exploring their bodies with their bare hands....

Then without any notice, Maan switched on the lights..

Geet: In a dreamy voice.. Maan...

Maan: Still busy with his experiments, Mmmmmmm

Geet: Maan, lights..

Maan: I told you Geet... I want you to see me when I get in to you,

I want you to see my eyes,

I want to see your eyes...

Yes Geet... this very first time we make love...

I want we both to feel it with eyes....

Then he had his major move.....

There bodies became one,

Geet felt a sudden pain but as soon she saw his eyes, she wanted more of it...

Then Maan tightened his touch and this time a tear of joy fell off from her eyes,

Finally, the Man she loved, the man she adored, the man she wanted to give her everything is in her body making love....

For Maan, it was like heaven, the only girl he loved, the only girl he wanted, the only one for whom he would do anything is inside him.

He began to kiss her more passionately, possessively, aggressively and in a demanding way...

Supply was far better than he thought.

Supply for his demand was marvelous.

Then he took his eyes off from her eyes and for the first time he saw a naked girl...

He was memorized with her body posture.

He LOVED her more!

She also began to love him more and more!!!!
The couldn't speak,

Actually no words were needed for them, what they wanted to say was said from their eyes!

The no longer were two people...

Suddenly they heard a scream....


Precap: Geet, are you alright???

Ma...aa...n....


Hope you loved this part

I know everyone will gonna be like, "what the hell" for the precap,

But thought to give a twist in to this story....

Romance after the confession will be bit bored to see every time nah,

So this twist will turn the story a bit!!


Plz plz plz leave a comment after you read this

and my lovely silent readers,

plz hit the like button..


Sorry for the mistakes and sorry for taking so long to update!

I was really busy with my job...


Love,

Pini...



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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d update..
so hawt...
precap...seems intersting nd shocking too..
update soon..

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