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Arshifan007 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: doosheeka

can't wait for more.............continue soon.....................

hahaha!!!! will update very soon and thanks!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divareena

lool loved this dialogue Han, toh mai suhagraath todina jarahi hoon

me like how maan is so possessive about geet and thashe she is only his. 😳😳😳
love how they both cannot wait to express their love to each other. lool they should stop fighting for the blanket and just share it instead.
looking forward to the next romantic update
. 👏👏👏


Thanks yaar,


hiks, they will share it very soon 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25


Maan, top of Geet.... Under the blanky which landed on them and covered automatically.

Their eyes met each other and they lost control.

Maan slowly touched her face. Geet was melting by his soft touch...

Both knew something might happen tonight... But waited for it...

Suddenly they heard a noisy thundering and lightning,

From her childhood, Geet was scared of these two. Thundering and Lightning...

So as soon she heard it, she hugged Maan as hard as she can...

Yes, he was waiting for that.. he was waiting for her invitation, he was waiting for her respond and no more waiting, he got the clue.....

Maan knew, ever god came there and ask him, he will not move back,,,, he was sooo attached to her eyes, her soft lips, taste of her lips and softness in her skin...

As it was night, Geet was wearing only her silk night gown, so easily Maan could feel her warmth and her bare body.


Maan: You look so pretty in this night gown

Geet was lost, his voice was so romantic and soft than she even couldn't breath..

Geet: Mhhhh....

Maan: Are you feeling alright?

Geet: Please Maan, muje math chordo.. I am afraid of thundering and lightning, plz muje chorkar math ja, mere pass raho... hamesha...

And tightened her hug..

Maan was so touched with her confession.

Maan: Dar Mar Geet, I will always be there for you, i will not leave you for any cost, actually I can't leave you.... Don't be afraid.. I am here...

Geet: When I was a little kid, by brother used to scare me, so since then, i am so afraid of the dark also...

Maan: Was so happy that she shared her feelings with him..he hugged her very tight.

Maan: I will not let anything to come across you, no one can harm for you or your shadow,,,

Now please calm down Geet. We have a big journey tomorrow.

Geet: Are you really happy with the trip? I mean you are not angry with me nah?

She asked in a babyish tone....

Maan was super attached to her voice and yes, he couldn't bare his feelings anymore...

Both were looking @ each other and Maan slowly lowered his head. Geet closed her eyes and moved near to him.


He closed the gap between them by catching her soft and trembling Lips...

As soon his lips touched hers, Geet felt an electricity moved through her spine.

At fist it was a gentle kiss by his side, but as soon Geet started to respond to his kiss by moving her tongue, Maan captured it...

He deepened the kiss... It was a seductive, passionate, demanding kiss...


Both their desires began to start and they no longer able to think anything.

They knew what they were doing, but wasn't sure whether it was right or wrong.

They were not in a position to decide the right or wrong.....

Maan took the next step..

He slowly played with her tongue and she was also helping him in that Game..

Then Maan's lips were running through her back.. he kissed her step by step...

Geet's hands around his neck and Maan was holing her bu her waist.

His hands slowly undo her zip... then he began to pull off her night dress while Geet was very busy with unbuttoning his shirt...

Now Maan was kissing her bare chest,,, a current ran alone her body..

She was trembling... Maan knew she was excited and to look @ her face he stopped his kiss.

As soon he stopped it and looked @ her, she slowly put her lips on his bare chest...

It made him out of the world.. She kissed him back... for the first time in his life, a girl kissed him back..

And for Geet, it was cloud nine, in her entire life, this was the fist kiss she has given to a guy and the first passionate kiss she has even given...

Maan was about to explore her body by removing her nigh gown when they heard a noise..

"Treeeeeeeeeeeeeeingggggggggggggggggg"

Suddenly they came back to scenes and Geet was blushing like a small school girl and when she was her half naked,

actually almost full naked in front of Maan, she couldn't help her self and ran to the bathroom and closed the door.

Maan: What the h*** was that and looked @ the dressing table..

Maan: OMG! it's already 5 in the morning. We have a flight @ 7, and he looked @ him self.

Maan, what was just about to happen? The great MSK is half naked in front of a girl and he is shying? MSK and Shy?

Maan, you have changed completely, she has changed you... Now you are not that old MSK who used to be time conscious, self conscious.

I used to ignore girls and now, i am desperate to explore a girl... this is so not me...

THEN he heard his inner identity speak to him..

"Maan, woh MSK had no heart, had no emotions, he was a stubborn guy.. But now.. it had changed. You are in love, completely, madly in love with Geet..

Geet, she is your wife, you have complete authority to explore her, love her, so don't be hesitate..

This alarm stopped you from your next step. But it's oki, you are going to Hawaii and you can move in to the next step their..

But first express your feelings, that'll make things easier.."

Then he heard someone opened a door..

Geet: M...m....mmm..

Maan: Geet, are you ok?

Geet, how can he be so cool... what just happened between us was not so cool..

and then, it hit her..

I am so in love with him and that's why i am excited. But for him, i am just his wife, Mrs. MSK...

I am a complete fool... I thought he loved me back and that's why, these things....

She had to stop crying... she knew this from the beginning. For him, this was like a business contract, after the profit, no more use, after the daadi, no more Geet....

Geet was broken in to pieces.

On their way to the air port, Geet didn't speak much..

Maan knew, something has gone wrong and he told him self,

"I will be very quick , otherwise it'll be too late"

The plain took off and now they are on their way to Hawaii..

To a destination which will change their lives... change their relationship, which will change everything...

But they didn't know something exciting in awaiting them .....


Precap: Solving the misunderstanding..


Hope you loved this part!

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Love,


Pini..

P.s. Sorry for the mistakes!!


annie.shona thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

u didn't send pms 😔


but nysh updates.... hope maan geet will have nice time in hawaii .. 😊

update soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyyyy awesome update👏
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy hotttt and romantic😳

y is geet misundrstanding maan, hope maan solves evrything and they hav a great time in hawaii

do continue😊
Edited by mallu.crowe20 - 14 years ago
Arshifan007 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shonababx

u didn't send pms 😔


but nysh updates.... hope maan geet will have nice time in hawaii .. 😊

update soon :)


Sorry yaar,

I was in a hurry... So couldn't send u guys PM's.

But now I have sent.. Sorry 😭

thanks for the comment!

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Posted: 14 years ago
great part..
i hope they both confess they love to each other..
do continue plz
thx.
doosheeka thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.................loved it.....................hope they are able to clear the misunderstandings and take their relationship to the next level.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwww didnt want tht alarm 2 ring bt no probsss
hope maan confesses fast n d misunderstanding is cleared sooooonnnnnnn
Radhi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the pM...

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