~innocent~ maaneet ff- UPDATED PG 75 10/25

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puth

@puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

awesome update richii...

the car ride was the best ...geet's innocent questions🤣🤣🤣
tomm when she wakes up and remembers what she did and asked maan she willl be embarassed😳😳😳😳😳

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Hey strated reading your story yesterday and finished all parts together...

Loving the story and the twists and the characters... the last two parts were awesome and so is ur writing style..

Good going😃

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

this was really good...the innocent charm of geet, wow! i admire ur sense of humour👏

since the dance is happening...will that lead to more...?

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

impotent heheheheheee he is vergin that's a nice thing...heheheheee

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

this was amazing...😛

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

superb!

poor maan!...he had to answer geet's senseless questions!😆

loved the last part!...😳

continue soon!

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

part 10
nice part...
oh poor Maan got so embarrassed...
lovely last scene...
cont soon...

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

😆

Originally posted by: drashsree100
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🤣 The car ride was the Best 🤣
The questions Geet literally threw @ Maan about , sex , impotency & general idea she & Pinky had about men was 👏 superb.

She asked Maan to carry her in his arms like in movies 😆
Poor guy 😆 ... good , I liked it 😈
The bedroom scene was Beautiful ❤️ 👏
Esp. the part where in Maan's monologue he mentions he's entitled to few moments of stolen bliss 👏 ... lovely lines

Loved the update
My wait begins again for the next 😛
Oops ! forgot am 1st to comment

me ji vei happy you enjoyed the update😳😆

you never know what maan may ask her to do in future😉

i will try to update...soon

if my mood permits...

Edited by richiiiii - 14 years ago

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: anisharoy1
wow...beautiful update ...after long time
thanks for pm...
count soon

thanks for liking and commenting😃

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: ninand
that was fun..😆... Geet and alcohol-- sure! they go like a house on fire🤣.. atleast for Maan🤣..

aww.. love the sweet pull he feels towards her😳... do update soon.

hmmm...yea i know...sometimes when i write the update i start feeling jealous of geet since maan is attracted to her and all...weird of me i know...😆