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Posted: 14 years ago
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***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 30




Maan- I will go late....
Geet cups his face and starts to kiss him back.....

It was 11 when maan drops Geet home. Her lips were solon a bit. She was flashed. Pink. Mark of his kiss was still there....
Maan- I will see you twomoro. Love you jane. He kissed her forehead... Geet smiles and gives him another kiss on his lips and runs off... Maan smirks. He is making her naughty...

Maan walks back to the KM! Avantika was standing there with his suit & everything...
Avantika- an hour late. Your dad & Darji will just kill us all. What made you so late & what's wrong with your lips? It was bright red. Geet bit him 3 times. & it was still bleeding. He kept licking it. Shila giggled at the background. While sam understood someone may have kissed him!
Avantika holds his both cheek & trying to stop the bleeding with her saris Palu.
Maan- mum stop it! I am fine.
Avantika- look at this boy! 20 sal ki ho tum! Har waqt koi na koi fighting kar to ho!
Maan gives her a weird look- mom you understand me just this much? He teased! While Avantika still not understanding why his lips maybe bleeding.
Sam & shila just laughed there head off. Avantika looks at them. Confused.
Avantika- hurry. Go & get changed. Sam will be going with you. She hardly goes out now.
Maan- umm....
Avantika- I have managed to force her to say yes! Now please don't say no.
Maan- ok....

Maan & sam makes there way in to the party. It was crowded. Soon as they entered press started to take photos.
Repoter1- how are you progressing?
Realifed 2- how is everything? Do you think this advertisement will work?
Reputed 3- how much money are you investing?

One after another reporter started to ask maan question. All his uncle & Arjun came round maan and took him to the conference room. Everyone was very proud. His first project and already huge publicity. Darji was the happiest... After all it's maan who will be taking over the whole Khurana PLC! Because others are too young or pointless!
One by one maan start to answer the question... As the party finished round about 1am! He was dreading to go home. But Arjun wouldn't leave him. He started to introduce him to one person to another... To there daughters specially. Maan looked at him confused. He wondered if his dad cheated on his mother.... If he ever done that maan surly will kill him!
It was 2am when maan finally managed to come out. All he wanted to sleep & dream about his & geets kiss.

Geet on the other hand couldn't sleep. She suffered from one place to another. Rolling on her bed. Non stop. Still in the moment. The kiss. The special kiss.... She sighed....

Next day in school.... Geet was falling sleep in the classroom. Shila had to hurl her up. They were in year 10 now. Exam was soon. Geet haven't revised anything. Just her usal maan revision & specially after there kiss that's all she could think about.
Shila- oh I am 100% sure you will fail this year.
Geet half sleep- I don't care.
Shila- What do you mean?
Geet- what is the point of study? I mean it's not like I will work for someone. I have maans card if I need money.
Shila- Uff!
Geet- & dads card & my personal card. So I see no point of studying.
Shila- we don't study for money!
Geet- what is the point? I have to be maans house wife at the end of the day. He is cleaver enough. He can do everything.
Shila- you are so selfish! Basically my brother will do everything while you enjoy.
Geet- exactly! I am just there to comfort & entertain him. She smirks.
Shila bursts out in laugh... And started to draw circle again.

As the day finished Yash came to Geet.
Yash- I hard your brother is going to UK!
Geet looks at him surprise along with shila!
Shila- you never have told me that Geet!
Geet- what? Don't you think I would have known If my brother was to go to UK! Stop being a trouble maker.
Geet left bit annoyed... Maan picked Geet up & went for a long drive.... It was 6pm when they broke out there kiss... Both were breathless... She stroked his cheek with a shy smile.... & hugs him tight. Maan completely forgot she had exam & he was only distracting her... Geet didn't utter a single word as knowing maan he will be hell angry....
Geet- umm...
Maan- bolo....
Geet- is bro going to UK! Is he moving there? She asked him questingly...
Maan looks at her in confusion. Not sure what to say. He possibly can't tell about what he have done...
Maan- yes... Umm... He needs to. Maan smiles... Geet hugs him tighter...
Geet- promise you will never leave me ever.
Maan smiles- I will die....
Geet smirks and brings his lips to met her again... It was just a passionate kiss for her while maans whole body wanted to feel her... He wasn't fast like there first kiss! He kept control... And slowly made space between her leg to make her feel comfortable with his unexpected pressure.... Lucky there were wearing cloths! Maan took a shy breath!
Geet- maan....
Maan- ha...
Geet- I need to go home early today...
Maan smirks- ku? Have you beaten me enough for today?
Geet nodes miscibiously....
Maan moves and frees her....

Geet sat on her table with big fat book. She haven't learned a single words... To be honest she haven't even seen the first page. She looked down & miserable. She hated study. It wasn't just in her list. Rano walks in with a glass of milk.
Geet- I don't want to study anymore. It's boring.
Rano- you have exam 2moro! Don't talk like that.
Geet- it's frustrating. I just don't like it! I want to do something els. Something different. I just hate every subject.
Rano looked worried. Obiously you can't force anyone to study unless they learn it from within them self...
Rano- just finish the exam let's see how well you do!


next- geets street dance with Edward cullen☺️

maan definatly not approving this😡


thanks for all the love & support' i am off' :D will PM u all later

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

THANKS FOR QUICK UPDATE............... BUT MAAN SHOULD COME TO KNOW ABOUT HER STUDY................ AND MADE HER AS SMART AS HE IS................... HOPE SHE WILL CLEAR HER CLASS THIS YEAR WITH THE HELP OF MAAN

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
congrats on the new thread 🥳
loved maaneet 😳
ohh dance...now maan wont be too happy 😆


Edited by MsMovielover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
want to learn & pass exam why handa kids a fool or poor in study not fair atleast let Geet be a bright student oh Maan was supose to help her with the study
fabulous update pls cont
soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update............wat will b maan's reaction if she fails...................
street dance hellllllllll no maan waill b comp pissed off
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome one yaar!!! geet again streat dancing ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah wat ahot update...........................................😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me not hoping good results from Geet's board exam...Maan keeping her tots away from studies... awesome update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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are yr atleast geet ko paas to kara do.............yr maan ki wife ki kuch to izzat hogi na😆...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Thanks Keyama,

Nice update .The story has moved a bit for Maan and Geet.Waiting for the next update.

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