FF-PARADOX- THREAD 4~MANN & GEET-updated on thre 5 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
i just hope that geet will do well in her studies!
lol!...street dance!....maan definitely will not approve this!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
how cum i didnt get a pm
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago

hiiiiii

congrats 0n da 4th thread
awesome update
loved it
love maaneet
soooooo adorable
plz plz dont separate them
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lool avantika not understanding why maan's lips are red when sameera and shila knew the reason.😆😆😆😆

Aww maan and geet both thinking about the kiss. Lool they are having trouble keeping there hands off each other.😆😆😆😆

Lool maan jealous of Edwards, lets see who wins😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for all the love & support… saturday updates on its way
xxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

Thanks for all the love & support' saturday updates on its way

xxxxxx

i am waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting
waiting waiting my dear yippe le me read in advance all tomorrow i'll not IF
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Keyama: Are u updating remorse as well? 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago


***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 31
Happy V-dAY




Exam went well... Still seeing maan everyday. She hated everything to the core about the exam. Darji sat there bit worried. Because after Brij it's Geet who they have to look forward to help with family business. Geet had no intention. She just wanted to be maans house wife....
Geets dad brought in the result. Maan stood There with arm crossed. Shila jumping with her result as she topped again.
Maan- Geet! When did you start revising? He was angry. She basically seen him everyday. & distracted! He knew well Geet haven't done any study at all.
Geet- umm... I don't know! In class!
Darji looks at her in angry- so you have failed.
Geet nodes- most likely. Maan gets fed up & leaves. Was there any point of pushing this girl to study? If she her self have no determination!

After maan left shila opens her result. Geet sat there looking at the exit. Sad for man.
Shilas eyes widens- this is completely Unfair! What! Why? Everyone looks at her. You hardly do any study.
Geet- umm...
Shila- you came 7th in the class! Urg. Good but fluke! You just... Aww.... I do so much study & only come 1st in class! & you.., no study 7th! This is ridiculous. Shila walks off in strop. Maan looked at her confused!
Shila- that stupid Geet! Doesn't do any study.. In fact sleeping in most of the class comes 7th! Shila walks of in frustration. Maan smiles. Geet runs out and hugs maan- I didn't fail. I passed. I passed. She smiles.
Maan- next year I want you to study tinny bit at least.
Geet smiles..... And kisses him tight.... No study.... I hate study... I just want to be with you..... Only you.....

4 months have passed. Maan finished his university along with sam. To be precise they started to become good friends. Sam always attends parties with maan... He can't take Geet yet so he takes sam instead... + Geet usually lost In her street dance! She rather do that then go parties with maan. She was still absence about sam & Brij truth... She does see sam time to time round maans... But not all the time as she have joined khurana.

Geet is 16 while maan 21..............


Geet was pushing maan in to the house.
Maan- I am not going. Samje Tum & so are you. I don't like you to do anymore street dancing.
Geet snaps- chup! I will do street dance & you are coming. Everyone is coming today. Even Darji. I am not hearing any excuse. Geet pushed him along the stair while shila laughed her head off.
Shila- get in there girl. Both Geet & maan gave her a look...
Sam walked in to ask something to Geet when without realizing she locked maans door on her face!
Sam- ouch!
Shila laughed louder- it will take them hour to come out.
Sam- just give her this gift. I have to go back to the office. Shila nodes.

Geet made maan sit on the bed. He took his phone out to tex! Geet snatched it off.
Maan- Geet!
Geet- you are getting ready. So no distraction.
Maan- I am ready.
Geet- no! Geet takes one cloths out after another. Maan hugs her from the back & started to kiss her cheek.... Geet started to get ticklish feeling.
Geet- jaan! Stop it...
Maan- no.... If you lock the door... Of course I will get the wrong intention. He smirks...
Geet blushes & looks down. She was shivering with his touch. Breathing hard. Maan could see her curve moving up and down with his touch... While her leg starts to tangle round his....
He strokes his cheek along her exposes shoulder. Unable to control the urdge he was waking inside her.... She looked down.
Geet- jaan......
Geet twistes her self round and hugs him tight while there lips met....
Geet- I... Oh.... I.....
Maan- shhh...... He picks her up and both walks towards the couch... Maan undoes her string and kiss her bare back.... Geet moaned.... And snakes her arm round his neck.... Some of her curved exposed.... Maan looked at them with desired eyes..... Geet shield and hides her self...
Geet- au... Me.....
Maan- hmm....
Geet- shila was saying.....
Maan smirks- yes.... Geet comes near his ear.... that.....
Maan- bolo....
Geet- that.....
Maan was already getting inpatient....
Geet- we are late! She jumps up & ties her string back and pulls him up.
Geet- get ready & I will see you at my dance. She smiles. & rushes out.

Geet had to partner up with a stranger in the competition. They have to make moves up as they go along. Stage was huge. Handa & khurana were in a VIP seat. Looking down to the stage. Geet wore a baggy trouser and a vest with her street dancing shoe. Her hair was up in pony tail. Looking beautiful out of all the competitors. Boys was whistling. Maan didn't approve that at all. He rather see her playing football then dance now. He hated it... & it made it wars when her partner was a guy called Edward cullen. He is 17. Girls were owing over him while boys drooling over geet. Maan walked out of the VIP and stood really close by with a angry glare. Arm crossed his chest.

Geet & edward took there position. He stood behind her. Both facing same way. Towards maan.
Edward- who is that?
Geet- my Man. It wasn't hard to notice maan. Everyone was screaming while he stood there with grumpy face.
Edward- not very happy dude.
Geet- he is over possessive.
Edward- someone about to have a rough night tonight. He will crash you in bed today.
Geet bursts out in laugh....
Maan clenches his teeth further. Why she is laughing? & that to with that boy!
Geet- umm...
Edward- owo! I have seen your man before! Somewhere!
Geet- we are khuranas & handas!
Edward- very possessive! Seems like he will eat me.
Geet- more like me..... once this dance finished. Both laughed....

And there it hit the music..... Every move involved physical contact & with every move maan started to loose patient. He could kill the whole crowd. That's why he never comes to her dance class. He just can't see her with anyone. No one!


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPYCFqUByEQ[/YOUTUBE]



As the dance finished geet was in edawards arm. Her one leg round his waist.... Another on the floor.... While his one hand on her bum and another on her back... To hold the position.... Edward stroked her back & bum to add extra chill to maan & a kiss on her cheek as they disappeared. Maans mouth fell right open. No one kisses his geet. No one. No one except him. How dare he!
Geet came and hugged maan. He was angry and walked out instantly... Geet roles her eyes and flowed.



next- maan on its way to london😲 


hay you all thanks for all the love & support' see u all on sunday'

pls do leav eme comments & like button xxx






Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG
OMG

I AM FIRST 1st 1st

HAHA to all......HA !!!!!

anyway oh and i was the first one to 'like' to....
keyama its an honour

anyway
awesomeeeeeeeee............................
so sweeet
london....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Edited by Ilovemsk - 14 years ago

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