Mayur ff Life is not a fairytale but.NOTE on pg132 - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

I JUAT HOPE THAT EVERY THING COULD BE FINE BETWEEN.. THE...

I am pretty much expecting that mayank will. bring happiness in nupur's life...

her life... would be like a life ,like thw world of a fairy.....a very beautiful..fairy.... "dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya
jab.. bole..vo.. jab bole....
uski aankh mein .. rab bole.....
jab.. bole..vo.. jab bole....
uski aankh mein .. rab bole.....
aas.. pass hi rehna tum..
ankh ankh. mein kehna .. tum...
dekha tumhe. to aaram aaya.....
dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya..
palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya
roz hi dil.. ki aag uthakr.. haath mein.. le k chalna hai...
tere bina tere..bond bond.. aab..
raat raat bhar.. jalna hai...
tu mile.. na mile...
ye hassen.. silsile.waqt k ...
sakth.. hai.. ab ye mitte nahi....
tere bina ssans bhi chalti hu...
tere bina dil bhi dhadakta.. hai...
yaad nahi tha yaad aaya...
dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya
din ki tarh tum sir pe.. aana..
shaam k jaise dhalna tum..
khawab bucha rakhe hai..raah mein.. soch samajh kr chalna tum...
neend ki cchaaon mein...
tum dabe .. paun se..yu.. gaye..
vo nishaan ab to mitte nahi...
tere liye chand bhi rukta hai,......
tere liye ooss.. thereti hai....
yaad nahi.. tha yaad.. aaya...
dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya...................



thnx dear.........😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely ff Ridi
i feel verry bad my nupur
plzzz do pme next time ur update thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

lovely ff Ridi

i feel verry bad my nupur
plzzz do pme next time ur update thanks



thnx dear.........😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello frnds....i'm sorry...... i couldn't able to update for a long time.....actually i had my final xam......now xam is over nd i'm here to update my ff. here is chapter six. i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes......









Chapter Six

Next day sun was rising with a new hope. Nupur woke up in the morning. Sujata was in the kitchen…..

Sujata: good morning….

Nupur: good morning……

Sujata: uth gayi……ab ja jaldi se fresh ho ja. Bahut sare kam hey.

Nupur: kya kam?

Sujata: maha rani Nupur kya ap bhool gayi hey ki Abhi aur Mayank bhai aj yaha lunch karne a rahe hey.

Nupur: oops……bhool gayi.

Sujata: pata tha…..ye toh teri purani adat hey na…. bhool jana…ja ab jake tayar ho ja. Hume lunch bhi banana hey.

Nupur: okay mam….mein yu gayi aur yu ayi.

Nupur went for freshening up herself. After half an hour Nupur returned. Sujata and Nupur were making lunch together. During this time they talked like old days. Nupur felt so that her pain was gone. She was smiling and laughing. About 12 p.m. the lunch was ready. Then they both went to take bath. First Nupur went to take bath. After thaking shower she was wearing a white top with black jeans. Her hair was wet so she decided to let it open. After Nupur, Sujata went to take shower. While Sujata taking shower the bell rang. Nupur opened the door……There were Abhijeet and Mayank…

Abhijeet: hello sweetheart………

Nupur: hello…..apki dharmpatni ji naha rahe hey.

Abhijeet: assa par meine toh pucha hi nehi….mein toh yaha apke liye aya hoon na.

Nupur: assa….wow. How sweet.

Abhijeet: haye…kya ada hey. aur iss ada k liye ye hey.

Abhijeet gave a chocolate box to Nupur.

Nupur: wow…chocolate.

Nupur was smiling while Abhijeet was giving her chocolate. Mayank was astonished. He never witnessed such a beautiful smile in his entire life. Mayank was lost in Nupur's smile. Suddenly Abhijeet called him….

Abhijeet: Bhai ap bahar kyun khare hey….andar ayiye na.

Mayank entered Nupur's home. It was so simple but so beautiful. Actually Sujata cleared all the mess….

Mayank: beautiful home.

Nupur: thanks.

Meanwhile Sujata came. Sujata and Abhi hugeed each other…….

Nupur: tum dono ka pyar khatam hoye toh khane chale mujhe bahut bhook lagi hey.

Abhijeet: ha chalo na. meine kab man kiya.

All of them went to dining table and took their seat. Mayank was observing Nupur silently. He couldn't believe his own eyes that this was the same girl whom he had been known for previous three months. While Mayank was thinking Nupur was continuously chatting with Sujata and Abhijeet. Suddenly they felt that Mayank was so silent….may be he felt left out…

Abhijeet: arre bhai ….ap itne chup kyun hey? aur kya soch rahe hey?

Mayank: kuch nehi……khana bahut assa bana.

Abhijeet: wo toh assa hona hi tha……after all Nups ne banaya…She is the best cook in the world.

Nupur: Abhi tub hi na……thanks Mayank…par khana meine akele nehi banaya….Su bhi help ki….mein toh khana banana bhul hi gayi thi…..

Sujata: Nups tu itna polite kab se ho gayi……..pata hey bhaiya Nups hum sab ko kabhi kisi cheese k liye thanks nehi kehte the…..jab hum uski koyi madat karte the toh kehte the yaar tum log mere friends ho aur ye toh tum logo ki duty hey….toh mein thanks kyun kahu…..

Nupur: aur tujhe yaad hey Anu kaise mang mang k thanks leta tha….

Sujata: ha yaar….wo bhi kya din the…….

Nupur: ha…hum kitne masti karte the…

Mayank noticed the sparkle in Nupur's eyes which he never saw since they met………

Mayank POV

Mein jitni iss ladki ko dekh raha hoon utna confused ho rahi hoon…….. jis ladki se mein teen mahine pehle mila tha wo toh koyi aur thi……aur ab mein jis ladki ko dekh rahi hoon wo kitna sweet hey…kitna assa hey……kitna lively hey…..agar wo aisi hey toh waise ban k kyun rehti thi jaise sab use nafrat are…..kyun…..koyi jaan buj k apne apko bura kyun dikhana chehegi jab ki wo itni assi hey…….kuch toh hey jo iss ko pereshan kar rahi hey….par wo kya hey……jo bhi hey mujhe janna hey…..

Mayank Couldn't understand why he wanted to know about Nupur . Only one thing he could understand that he wanted to see her smiling face……


Love

ridi


** sry frnds it was quite short but next time i'll definitely update a longer one.....




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Posted: 14 years ago
Wah Ridi very nice part..
and i am loving this sweet Nupur..
and Mayank's feeling is now good sign..
very nice part
and update soon
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ridi👏
good to see Nups happy😊

thnx for the pm
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update ridhi luved it it was mindblowing....specialy mayu...😳...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ridi but short one🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm after a long time u updated....
nice part ridi aur next time jaldi update karna samjhi??????/
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy 2 c Nupz in Jolly Mood.....
hmmm so mayank is having interest in knowing more about nupur....okkk.....dekhna padega ki aage kya kya hota hai....
lovely update Ridi...
thanks 4 the pm...

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