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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continue Continue Continue Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting.......continue 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
intresting please continue...and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
love it another FF with fear & a lot of suspense


pls pls pls cont soon




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting looking forward for it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
oohhhhhh...i am really liking the vibes i was getting while reading the prologue. can't wait till u update! do continue. i am 100% positive that this FF will be just as great as your other FF's.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Hey guys! Thank you so much for your encouragement..hehehe Well here goes....
Enjoy!
Chapter 1
She woke up in the morning and made her way to the shower...she stood under the shower remembering her past...she could still feel his touces on her body....she stays under the shower silently crying...after a while she comes out of the shower to get ready...

Shimla was where she resided for the past four years...she loved everything about Shimla the climate, people, food, things to see everything..at first this was her refuge than it became her home her everything especially the people. She comes out of the house and was instantly greeted by her wonderful neighbor..the neighbor was an old lady who she just adored...she quickly said hi to her neighbor and started walking to her work...

Her work wasn't that far away from where she lived..she walked into the company and was instantly told to meet her boss in his cabin...She worked in a clothing company that mostly deals with export and imports of products...she went to his cabin and knocked on the door before entering...Intilialy she worked as a Secretary under his boss Suraj Chopra but being impressed by her capabilities she now became a manager at his company. He was a nice person always there to help her anytime when needed...she knew if it wasn't for him than she wouldn't be standing here in front of him or be independent..she had immense respect for him...

Suraj: Come in

"May I come in Sir"

Suraj looked up: Mahi yeah please come in

Mahi: Sir you messaged me to come in

Suraj: Yeah I wanted to ask you about what happened with our delivery?

Mahi: Sir I had called the people and they said that they will deliver the merchandise by tonight

Suraj: Alright

Mahi: Anything else sir

Suraj: Yeah I wanted to know what was your answer to my question that I had asked you earlier (looks at Mahi)

Mahi: umm I have to go I have a lot of work to do

Suraj: Mahi ever since you have joined this company I have noticed that there is something that constantly bothers you...what is it?

Mahi: When I am ready I will tell you...May I go now?

Suraj sighed: yeah you may go (Mahi turns up to leave but Suraj stops her half way) Mahi I will be waiting when you are ready to tell me what is bothering you (she smiles at him before leaving to his cabin)

She went to her cabin and closes her eyes in pain....

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Flashback:
History:
She was born as Geet Handa, innocent and full of life. While growing up the only thing that was closest to her was her father. Her mother died while giving birth to her. Her father was the only family she had and loved. Ranjit Handa was more than a father to her but also her mother, sister, cousins and most of all a great friend. Ranjit had a very successful company..he was liked by everyone. Always there to help anyone in need...He always followed his principals and his beliefs in every situations.
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(Four years ago)
Ranjit: Geet utho beta you are getting late for college

Geet: Papa please let me sleep for some more

Ranjit: I would beta but you are going to miss your classes if you don't get up soon..Get up in five minutes

Geet: Please papa

Ranjit: Now get ready and meet downstairs for breakfast

Geet: Alright papa

Ranjit mumbled to himself: 18 saal ki hogayi ho aur abhi tak bacchi ki tara behave karti hai

Geet got up from bed and came down for her breakfast...the servants already had placed all the food on the table...

Geet: Good morning papa..

Ranjit: hmm finally you came...

Geet quickly ate her breakfast and headed out for her college.. "alright papa I am going now"

Ranjit: When are you coming home?

Geet: I will be little late I am going to hang out with my friends after college as usual

Ranjit: Alright tell the driver to pick you up

Geet: Alright papa..love you

Ranjit: Love you too beta

End Flashback!
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Maahhhiii....Maaahhhiiiii open your eyes...Geet suddenly opened her eyes to see Suraj standing next to her

Mahi: ohh am sorry I must've dossed off

Suraj: Mahi why don't you go home and take rest...

Mahi: No Suraj I am fine...the delivery should be coming any minute

Suraj: Are you sure?

Mahi: Yeah I am sure

Suraj: Tell me if you need anything..you can always go home early if you don't feel good later

Mahi smiled at Suraj: Thank you Suraj I know

Suraj: Mahi you know I care about you

Mahi felt uncomfortable: Yeah I know..thank you

Suraj: No need to say thank you but simply the answer to my question

Mahi: woh actually

Suraj: Mahi you can give me the answer whenever you are ready...I am not pushing you..I will be waiting

Mahi: I know

Recap: Flashback! + Suraj and Mahi (Geet)
umm so what do you guys think???? 😆 I wil going going back and forth from past to present..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Very intriguing :-) Update chap 2 soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
its interesting.. please continue 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
wow nice introduction and chapter...
let's see what happens later
update soon

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