Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

nt in particular...but ahmed faraz..parveen shaker, very few of wasi shah nt lot ....actually i just read randomly..han ahmed faraz i have red more

@Fiza our choice is quit similar😛but i like Faiz ahmed Faiz,s poetry also....parveen shakir,Nasir kazmi,wasi shah,ahmed faraz,amjad islam amjad....their poetry is just amazing....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update Maria!
it was soo romantic 😳😳😳
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

loved the update Maria!

it was soo romantic 😳😳😳
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

Thank u so much for liking it🤗
i ll continue soon😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank u so much for ur precious comments.......🤗🤗🤗

Part 8

Rain stopped but they were in same position...they were in eachother arms....both did not know..how it happened soon,,,,they met,,they fell in love with eachother and now they confessed their love...Nupur who was lost in his dreamland came back to her sences...who sacrificed and lost so much in her life was afraid to loosing her most precious person of life....she was in his arms....she opened her eyes...her head was rested on his chest....Mayank...she said in low voice.....

Mayank who was lost in the moment came back when he heared her beautiful voice...he was lost in her....she was so close to her,her angel whom he loved ...hmm he replied

Mayank ap kabhi hamain chor ke toh nahi jaye ge,,,,,she said

Mayank looked at her.....she said those words in so much pain....she did not wanted to loose him.....

he cupped her face and looked in her eyes.....

Nupur meri ankhon main dekho tumhain kya nazar ata hai....she could clearly see love and only love in his eyes

ap ki ankhon main hamare liye sirf pyaar hi pyaar hai........she confessed.....she knew....he loved her so much

he smiled at her confession

toh phir yeah bhi jaan lo ke jab tak meri saansain hain....tumhain mujh se juda koi nahi ker sakta.....main hamesha tumhare saath rahon ga....hamesha...koi bhi cheeze hum dono ko alag nahi ker sakti...tum meri jaan ho,meri saansain ho Nupur...main tum se bohat pyaar kerta hoon....itna pyaar ke main khud bhi us ka andaza nahi laga sakta.......she smiled some tears flowing in her eyes.....Mayank wiped her tears....she huggged him tightly...she want to feel him..

her parents were died in her childhood....she always missed them ....she always wants love,care,attention of her brothers....but they did not give her love and attention...even they had not some time to talk with her....they were so much busy in thier lives....

and moreover....they were narrow-minded.they never allowed her to go out for picnic with her friend ...they never alllowed her to make friends.....

Mayank hamain ab chalna chahiye bohat der ho gaye hai.,,,,bhabhi intezar ker rahi hoon gi.....she looked at him for his permission

theek hai...chalte hain...he replied her with smiled

they walked toward the car..and sat in the car...

They reached home.....

Nupur came out of the car... Good Night....she said with smile and turned and walked towards the gate when Mayank called her....Nupur

she stopped and turned back and looked towards him...who was standing near his car......

ji...she replied

Mayank.....I love you

she blushed and smiled...I love you too

she said and walked towards the gate

he smiled and was looking her she entered in her house....she again turned back and looked toward him....he was standing there...

she smiled ....and entered in house......

Today she was so happy....

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she was lying in her room she was in her night dress....her hair were opened...she was smiling to remembered their confession...

Gunjan knocked the door......Nupur darvaza khol

Nupur opened the door and huggged her ...Bhabhi. hum aj bohat khush hain.....Gunjan was surprise at his action

kyun aisa kya ho gaya....she replied

Nupur caught her hand and sat her on her bed.....ap phele yahan baithin aur aram se hamari baat sunnain....

Theek hai....she replied

Nupur took her hand in her hands and bent down on floor...hum ap se kuch kehna chahte hain..woh ....bhabhi woh hamain pyaar ho gaya hai....she said with shynes and lowered her eyes

Gunjan smiled....she already had doubt about Mayank and Nupur relation and now she sured about them....she was so happy for her

Accha toh ab us k nam bhi bata de...Gunjan asked with smile

woh...hamain sharm ati hai...she hide her face in her lap....

Gunjan....tujhe mujh se kab se sharam ane lagi....

Nupur raised her head and said.....hamain un ke barain main bata te hue sharam aa rahi hai...she was blushing

oh hoo...un ke...Gunjan was teasing her

Bhabhi...Nupur made face....ap hamain tank toh me karain na

gunjan smiled....acccha ab nam bata bhi de

Nupur blushed and said...Mayank

she again hide her face in her lap

Gunjan smiled....Nupur main bohat khush hoon....

pata hai bhabhi...Mayankk bhi hum se bohat pyaar kerte hain....she told him.....

gunjan cupped her face and kissed her forehead...hamesha tu aise hi muskurati reh...mujhe Mayank pe pora yaqeeen hain woh tujhe bohat khush rakhe ga....Nupur smiled and hugged her

accha main ab apne room main jati hoon...tere bhaiya office ka kuch kam ker rahe hain.keh rahe the ser main dard hai.unhain koffee bana ker deni hai....she stood up and said

theek hai ap jao....Nupur replied

Gunjan stopped at the door and turned back towards her...Raat ko zayada der met jagna..waise toh main janti hoon tu sari raat bhaiya ke khawab hi dekhe gi....

Nupur blushed ...Gunjan was teasing her......

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here is update....i tried to write more bettter...i hope u all liked it...plzzz do comments and press like button if u liked it

ur comments means a lot to me...

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear...loved gunur's relation..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks For Updating 😊

Mayur Were Mindblowing

Rocking Update

Update ASAP !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update Maria!

i hope Mayank keeps his promise
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
suchh a cute confeesion n loved gunur scene😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Maria
it was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice update
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy update
awwwwwwwww mayur scene was so cute
i can understand nups fear
from her childhood she didnt get so much care,attention ,love frm her family
and now maynk unconditionally love her

awwww i loved mayus answer and nups innocence
loved gunur convo
it was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cute update
good going mari
keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago
maria that was so amazing!
mayur were sooooooooooo adorable! i really loved them!
n gunur were cute too!
me waitin fr nxt part! do cont soon
n thnx for d pm😳

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