Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

gr8 update!!

thr love at first sight....awwwwww😳
do cont soon but first get well soon😃
thnx fr d pm😳

@Nikita....Thank u so much for liking it.....🤗
Ur comments means a lot to me😃
Thanks for ur concern🤗
i ll continue very soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swati05

awesome update maria 🤗

swati🤗...Thank u so much yaar for liking it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

hey maria.. i'm really sorry.. i cudnt read d updates earlier

just read part..4
OMG.. us Adiraj ki toh!😡.. uski itni himmat!😡..
i felt so bad 4 nups...😒
par.. mayu.. hugged her... dey met..😍
aww.. luvd it!😳

Pariiiiii🤗
Thank u so much yaar for ur lovely comment......😃means a lot to me...😛
i ll continue very soon....😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

part 5.. cute!😳
MN got soo excited 2 meet each other...😳
luvd it !😍
luv ya🤗


pariiiii🤗
Thank u so much yaar for liking it😃
u ll see mayur meeting n their cute moments in coming parts...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie12

awwwww jus loved all da parts.......awww nupur is sooo innocent n mayank is soo cute.....wish dey end up happily dnt want any adhiraj interference in deir life......loved it alot

Thank u so much yaar for liking it.....🤗
ur comments means a lot to me....😊
i ll continue very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank u so much for ur precious comments🤗🤗🤗

and thanksss for ur concern.🤗..i m quite well now...

Part 6

Nupur was in her room..she wanted to look good.she opened her cupboard and looked all her dresses...suddenly her eyes stopped on white colour Anarkali suite...she took it out ...she went to washroom to freshenup....and came out of washroom after wearing it...she dried her silky black hair and looked herself in the mirror...she put khol{kajal} in her eyes...she wanted to look beautiful ...first time in her life she applied khol in her eyes...she was looking beautiful..

wah Nupur aj toh tu bohat pyari lag rahi hai...she said to herself...

she went downstair...where Gunjan was waiting for her...she noticed changed in Nupur...and she was happy becaz she knew very well Mayank was the best for Nupur and she deserved the person like Mayank who loved her so much..as Nupur suffered so much in her life...she needed love,respect and Mayank could gave her love ,respect and everything which she wanted.....

Gunjan...Nupur..toh aj bohat pyari lag rahi hai....she kissed her forehead

Nupur..sach bhabhi...hum koobsurat lag rahe hain...she wanted her confirmation

Gunjan nodede her head...bohat khoobsurat

Nupur smiled...but her heart wanted HIS compliments

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They entered in sharma house...it was not new for Nupur...becaz she had visited here many time but today something was special...Today she wanted to meet the person,special person who had changed her life in one meeting...who stole her heart,her sleep,her dream,he every moment,,,,she was little nervous....

when they entered Shilpa aunty welcomed them with open arms...

Shilpa Aunty hugged her....

meri beti Nupur bhi aye hai...she kissed her forehead...

she made them sat on sofa and shilpa sat beside Nupur...

Maa woh Nupur ap se milne ke liye bohat betab thi....she told her mother..Gunjan was teasing Nupur as she knew her feeling that she actually wanted to meet Mayank..

Nupur blushed becaz she knew why gunjan said that

Shilpa...accha toh hamari beti ka hum se milne ka bohat man tha...she gave her side hug...dil toh chahta hai...hamesha ke liye Nupur ko apne pas rakh lon aur kabhi jane hi na don...

she told them her heart desire...actually shilpa aunty was liked Nupur very much and she wanted to made Nupur her daughter-in-law...but Nupur was too young for marriage...she was just passed her Matric exams...

onthe other hand...Mayank was also too impationed to meet Nupur...the girl who stole her heart at first sight...but he wanted to know her feelings....

kya Nupur bhi mere bare main wohi soch rahi hai....jo main us ke bare main soch raha hoon?

mujhe Nupur ki feelings ke bare main pata lagana ho ga..he said to himself and smiled

Nupur eyes were looking here and there for searching Mayank..but he was nowhere

Gunjan who was busy in talking with her mother caught her...She knew she was looking for Mayank...so an idea struck in her mind...

Nupur...she called her

ji bhabhi...Nupur replied

Gunjan....tu aisa ker uper ja Mayank ke room main us se bula ker la us se bata ke hum sab neeche us ka wait ker rahe hain...mujh se milne kyun nahi abhi tak aya

hum....she said with shocked expressions

Gunjan...toh aur kya tujhe hi keh rahi hoon

Nupur ...theek hai...she said in low voice

Gunjan wanted to give them some time to spend together......to understand eachother

Nupur went to upstairs...she took each step with nervessnous.....she knocked the door of his room but no answer.she waited sometime ..but no responced ..she pushed the door and door opened...she was nerveous ....she entered in his room,,,,she felt strange feelings....she looked here and there ..it was big room..everything was putting on its place...pink colour was painted on wall...there was a study table on one side of his room...where were his books lied down... Two huge pics of Mayank hanged on wall...in one of pic he was smiling....she blushed to see his picture...she loved his smile...his dimples...he was looking very handsome in his pictures.....

he came out of washroom...towel was in his hands and he was drieng his hair...he was wearing blue jeans and purple shirt and was looking handsome as usual...he saw Nupur standing in his room...a smile crept on his face...she was wearing white colour Anarkali suit...she was loooking beautiful ...it was his favourite colour...Nupur u r my Angle....he talked to himself

Room bhi ach hai...choice bhi kafi achi hai...her cheese apni jagah per hai...she observed everything of his room...

she was so much busy in her toughts that she did not realised Mayank stood beside her......

he whispered in her ears......u r looking beautiful

her heart beat increased.....

she blushed at his compliment

Mayank..ap ko hamare room ki her cheese pasand aye...

she said shyly....ji

Mayank...aur hum ap ko kaise lagte hain...

she was blushing hard.she closed her eyes...she wanted to feel his precencs....she knew..he was so closed to her....she turned her face towards him and looked in his eyes...she could clearly see love in his eyes...which she wanted...she lowered her eyes...woh hum ap ko bulane aye the...neeche ap ko shilpa aunty aur gunjan bhabhi bula rahi hain....

Mayank noticed her face which was turned red due to blush....he leaned towards her and tried to look in her eyes..Nupur u look more beautiful when u blush....

She smiled at his compliment.....she loved his compliments

she turned and about to leave the room when Mayank held her wrist and pulled her towards him...she collapesed with his chest..

They were so closed to eachother...Mayank could easily heared her heart beat...she blushed hard...her cheeks turned red...but.she liked his clossness..she felt comfort with him

he whispered in her ears...ap ne hamare sawal ka jawab nahi diya....

Nupur...woh hum....woh

Mayank smiled..he loved her innocence her shyness...he loosned his grip..he did not want to feel her uncomfortable.....

Theek ha agar ap hamare sawal ka jawab nahi dena chahti toh met dain....he was trying to show her that he was angry

she smiled at his action...he behaved like child....Mayank was waiting for her answer...

she walked towards the door .....she stopped at the door and turned back and looked at him....who was waiting for her answer..Ap bhi hamain acche lagte hain...she said with shyness and left the room..a wide smile spread on his face...he was so happy..he was on the top of the world....hum jante hain Nupur tum bhi hum se pyaar kerti ho...

On the other hand....

Nupur was also happy....she loved Mayank...she loved those moments which she spent with him..she wanted to spent her whole life with him..

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Precap...Mayur moments

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here is update....i tried to write more bettter...i hope u all liked it...plzzz do comments and press like button if u liked it

ur comments means a lot to me...

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome part..
aww nupur is so much innocent n shy girl...
loved their 2nd meeting....
lovely..
and nxt update should be long..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

awwwwwwww i really love mayur😳

nupur was so cute.......
awesome update maria!!
get well soon😳
n thnx for d pm!
loved d part!!😳😳😳
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -moona-

its awesome part..

aww nupur is so much innocent n shy girl...
loved their 2nd meeting....
lovely..
and nxt update should be long..😳

@Moona....Thank u so much yaar for ur lovely comment🤗
actually yaar i m not well thats why i write short update...sorry for short updateEmbarrassed
Inshalllah Next time u ll get long update with lots of Mayur moments😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@Moona....Thank u so much yaar for ur lovely comment🤗

actually yaar i m not well thats why i write short update...sorry for short update😳
Inshalllah Next time u ll get long update with lots of Mayur moments😃

O sorry Maria then take ur time..n get well soon Yarr😛

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