MG - Rendezvous with you !

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Rendezvous with you ...

a fanfiction on maneet ...yet not decided how long it will be...
Six o'clock in the morning wipe the sleep from my eyes(yeah)
Felt just like an ordinary day
Just around the corner, such a surprise, a beautiful angel materialised
Time stood still, face to face
I'm sure we'd met in another time and place(met in another time and place)

Our eyes met as you passed me by (passed me by)
Two souls entwined in the blink of an eye(yeah)
And I had to figure out what I'd be missing

As maan pressed the accelerator of the car in the lone road .....the rain started pouring torrentially ..it was drizzling from the very evening ...but now it is freakingly rainstorming ........the windscreen was becoming absolutely foggy inspite of continuous action of the wiper ......he was not even able to see a single thing through it.....

Holy crap ...!!!

the night has definitely some worst plans in it......!!

maan slowed down the car.....he had to cross the over way near malaba....but driving in this snail's pace it will take more than 2 hour to reach home ..and more over the worn bridge on the river ...it wouldn't be wise ....he decided to go by MG road .....Generally at this time the road remains heavily jammed with the traffic........but it might be little less he thought considering the downpour .. ..also as its pretty late at night ..... he can take a chance ......sighing he decided to take that way only ....and turned the car towards it ...

As he crossed the McDonalds he glanced at the ways....almost all of the shops are closed.....everybody must have gone home dropping the shutters of their business...seeping whisky settling in their cozy seating room of their own home ....he sighed....if he had a home.....! someone to wait at the door ...worried by the heavy downpour...arjun is there...but he must be asleep by this time...he thought glancing at his expensive swish wrist watch ...arjun is alone too....but I m helpless ....its either business or arjun ...at this point I cant choice him in between this two ... ...or may be....i don't want to .....he snapped out the idea...

And moreover arjun had to adjust ....maan sighed....but deep inside he wished....he wished feebly if both of them have someone...someone special in their life ......

He glanced at the sideways...the passenger lane is absolutely lone.... nobody is there.......except a woman who was walking sluggishly ...good lord ...!!....how can one wander around in this torrential rain ...shrugging maan drove on straight ......and suddenly a thought crossed his mind..

He stopped the car with the sudden pressure on the break ....

She looked like geet ...!

Maan turned the wheel 180 degree....and drove back to the spot .....am I hallucinating .....or simply delusion !! ....but still he couldn't stop himself to check once again ....

There is no one.......!! may be I have crossed her far behind.....or may there was none......again delusioned ....he sighed...

Suddenly he noticed a chunk of white below the distant lamp post .....looks like ..someone is sitting overthere ....! a gut feeling made him drive near to that ....

That's the woman I saw...!!!

.....he focused the headlight of the car on the woman in the shape of a white lump......she sat draping herself by the white dress..totally muddled in rain and dirt .... the side of her face can only be seen

It was none else than her ................!!!

Geet....!!

He rushed out of the car .....geettttt....!!

what are you doing here geet ....?

he picked her up by her shoulders ....jerking he asked the question again ....

but she didn't respond..neither looked up ....his voice didn't seem to reach her .....

geetttt...he yelled her name again ...... she looked up with blank eyes...

what are you doing here ....??? why ...???..and that too at this hour of time..??...geet what happened ...?????..he bombarded questions at her .....

but there was no answer on her face .....she didn't even seem to recognize him.....and stared vacantly .....her eyes were puffy and dull... face was devoid of blood...!!she stood like a wax doll ...drenched in water from top to bottom ...!

her condition told him blatantly that she was not in her self..he is not going to get any answer .with no thinking he dragged her ....he gave a damn to the idea whether its right or wrong....!!his mind was racing ....

shoving her in the passenger seat of the car maan fastened the seat belt....and drove on furiously ......

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the above part is not the start of the fiction ...u can call it prolgue ...! or catchline ...watever u want ...
from next the real fiction starts from the very begining

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part 1

Another knock on the door....he reluctantly distanced his eyes from the laptop screen ..

And groaned ..come in ...!!

The sudden disturbance irked him.........today is a big day ....or should he say another .......like all other days of his life ...this project will be finalized today !....the success of this project will decide how right or wrong he was....

He knew...actually pretty confident everything will go absolutely fine....but he was giving one last check on the presentation.....he can't afford one single mistake...cause he has to be right as always...

Maan singh khurana ...the entrepreneur of the year ....can never be wrong ... !!

Whattt...? he let out a irritated growl looking at the door...

Sir...the butler mumbled....sorry to bother you sir....!!

But.......he paused fumbling ...as maan again resumed his work and started typing a mail ......

Sir......!! the butler started again ...!

Come to the point Charlie ..!!.....maan barked....

Ohh sir.......Mrs sen is there....!! she is being very adamant about meeting you ..!Charlie informed in one single breath .. ....

Charlie .....!!snap her out or ask her to wait until I finish ...!!! I m working ..!! throwing maan resumed typing in his laptop....!!

Charlie rubbed both his hands to each other ...and bowing down a little he whispered .....it wouldn't be wise sir....!

Maan turned to him ...and looked at his with a slight cock in his brows...

Uhh...sir......its ... he fumbled ...!!

Maan rolled his eyes in frustration .....!!

Arjun ...????

Charlie nodded.....!

now what ...!!!he groaned fiercely .....!!!

Charlie gulped down before informing what happened ..!!

to be continued...

guyz.....done....!! comment if u feel it intersting enough and hit the like button ........it will be entirely differnt from my other fictionz...total opposite ....
will continue slowly ...do comment and lemme know if u want me to continue
as of now m off to my books ..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luved it..
seems intersting..
update soon..
Edited by princess_xaini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserving for the continuation of the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok so another fic............gosh!!! u r hell bent on giving me sleepless night😡😡😡

first I m so addicted to ur both ffs spl ILWTE n now this.............
the prologue is damn interesting gal..............
loved it
keep writing😊
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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hey itz not fair😡...day beforer ystday i startd and finished ur ff-in love with the enemy.....n since then have waitn impatiently for you to update it....and now u have started your another ff which seems very intriguing .......hump!!!!
now should i wait for you to continue this one faster or that one😕

i hope you update both of them shortly....and btw i have sent a frnd request...plz accept it... and add me in ur pm list😳😊

Edited by richiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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speechless!

I so dearly wish to get an update from ur other outstanding, marvelous, splendid and what not FF 2day. please??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: richiiiii

hey itz not fair😡...day beforer ystday i startd and finished ur ff-in love with the enemy.....n since then have waitn impatiently for you to update it....and now u have started your another which seems very intriguing .......hump!!!!

now should i wait you to continue this one faster or that one😕

i hope you update both of them shortly....and btw i have sent a frnd request...plz accept it... and add me in ur pm list😳😊

added darling ..>!!
aww....i m so sorry ...!!
but dear trust me..i hate doing this with you people ...!!
m helpless.....my university is taking a toll on me...
i have to get back to my studies...but will come back soon ...
@ anupam ...thank you dear ...and i m nt from calcutta mc.....bt i had frens there..i m studyin outside bengal
@ others !! stay tuned and send me a fren rqst if u are intersted !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@reet
awww...thnx for adding
and well okay i do understand ur concerns for ur exams....even my boards are also coming up....for which i am shamelessly not concerned....😆
anyways i hope your exams are scheduled after holi.....
and if not then do well in your exams and then treat us with long updates in all your ffz

p.s btw i also started and finished bin tere today itself....and waitn for u to update it..😆
Edited by richiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar loved the concept plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds amazing........continue soon...n add me 2 ur pm list.......

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