A Meeting With The Grim Reaper [Ch1|Pg2] - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyya...well totally loved the concept...waitingg to read further...continue soon and please add me to ur pm list! 😊
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nice start!
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Awesome start continue soon and do PM me....
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||A Meeting With The Grim Reaper||
Chapter 1


Happy V-day fellas!
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A V-day gift to all of you from myside. 😃 Hope you enjoy reading it!!

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The blood covered body gave him so much pleasure. He couldn't help himself but just go on look at the eternal beauty laying half-dead in front of him.

The fine looking lady lay on the ground, with her body drenched in blood. The crushed mere metallic pieces floating in the river nearby right now was her car minutes ago.

The gorgeous face smiled as if receiving immense satisfaction with the scene. He just couldn't get more of pleasure than this right now! Slowly he knelt down right in front of the body.

Gently he stroked through her hair and brushed her cheeks yesterday. Not only her face, but also her limbs and dress was covered with blood.

"Gosh, aren't you cold?" He spoke to the non-conscious body in front him.

"Don't worry it won't take much of time, sweetheart." He brushed his palms against her cheeks.

The fact that their location was on the outskirts of Mumbai was known to him. Darkness was setting in. A new morning seemed far away now. The dusky sky seemed so bloody, at the same time so heavenly right now. Perhaps, this was indicative of a new night.

There was not a single car visible on the road. He knew she would lay near till the next morning, hence would be undoubtedly dead.

"If you hurt me, you're ought to be dead." The pain was very much evident in his tone, as he spoke to her.

"Why did you do that to me, huh?" He shook her body frantically.

"Tell me!" He shook her lifeless body harder this time. This made the wounds on the body grow deeper.

"I've tried making your death less painful." He stopped midway and informed the almost corpse.

"I love you." He smiled and kissed on her forehead. His eyes lay on her beautiful lips. Though lifeless but still so beautiful. Unable to resist himself, he leaned and kissed her. Gently at first, soon turned frivolous. It felt as if he was never going to stop. Each kiss he took seemed to take away her breathe a little more. He planted kisses all over her face, taking away her life a little more, until he stopped.

"Happy Birthday, Riddhima." He took a brief pause. He held her hands and pressed it gently. Her flood was now all over his face.

"Now I've to go honey." He spoke again after a brief pause.

"I'll miss you."

"Its getting dark. I'm getting late for your birthday party." He looked at the watch. He could see her lips turning slight blue. Her body was so calm right now, as if it had no soul in it.

He bend down again to kiss her for one last time.

"Love you." He sighed.

Soon he left the half dead body on the roadside of a forlorn place and drove away towards the city. He is her friend, a well wished. He can never ever cause her harm. He loves her more than anybody does.

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Thats it for the first chapter 😃 How was it? Coldblooded? 😃 So did you like it?

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Edited by jeflkjfkljfkj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what the hell was that!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept
the part was scratching my brain :P
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interestng ff
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part!!!!!!!!!!!!! but very short................
cont soon..........................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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uh uhhh nthing much jus pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow the first part was wow
i dont know what to say......it was good yet strange.......that guy is leaving her there to die........W*H
cant wait to read the next part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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