Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Scene 34

Geet's all life came down..she was hurting from the slap he was a man after all..it hurt but more than the physical pain it was the fact Maan was paraya to her. It seemed Shania had won..Maan did not love her and left her. She was imagining the worst of what they were up to..😒

It was night time and she sat on their bed with his photo..reminicsing of what had happened all their good times and what has become of their marriage in a space of a week.🥺

Some lady was singing outside and Geet started crying uncontrollably😭

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EA9p3WHqEoI[/YOUTUBE]

Geet was holding Maan picture and crying

Aaaa sajna sajnaaa ve...aaaa sajna ral kith ah baiye te vichoriya nu agg lai
manzoor miya gham dila vich vasde ne
haan kite vichre na marjaiye

Mere chan pardesi mere chan pardesi
ghar lort ke aana tuje vaasta wafa ka
muje bhool na jana
mere chan pardesi mere cham pardesi


Geet felt emotional how Maan could leave her knowing she was stopping her and how could he slap her. She came near his tai chi photo and touched him and cried leaning on it.

Roka nai keh tuje dil ne tere
khushiya kareedi beche ansoo mere😭
ooo bedardi balam tu mera dard na jaana👎🏼
tuje vaasta wafa ka muje bhool na jaana
mere chan pardesi


Geet was feeling Maan was leaving her for Shania...she felt he was bewafa for forgetting her love for him.

Rakhna o sajna tu laaj mere pyar ki
ghar main na lana koi cheez bazzar ki
meete ganga ke jal main madra na tu milana
tuje vaasta wafa ka muje na bhool na jana
mere chan pardesi


Geet was crying till her eyes were swollen that he will leave her for Shania

Satho sumandaro se lambhi ye dooriya
toot na jai mere hatho ki churiya
main hoon dulhan muje tho birhan na banana
tuje vasta wafa muje bhool na jana
mere chan pardesi, mere chan pardesi
ghar lort ke aana tuje vaasta wafa ka
muje bhool na jana
mere chan pardesi


Geet cried herself to sleep.😭




Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
Hinal.94 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet i hate to see her like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaar it's really sad plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon next ...................................... plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭 but like it ...........................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz soon it's very sad ................
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet ...feel so bad 4 her😭..........that shania so deserves few slaps frm geet as means of compensation...🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
nadiyaaaaa teri to ! ... acha khaasa romance mein ye high voltage drama kahan say tapak gaya ... agay update keroooooooo

update fast and give us a good one ... otherwise am coming behind you with a danda in my hand .. samjhi tum! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

nadiyaaaaa teri to ! ... acha khaasa romance mein ye high voltage drama kahan say tapak gaya ... agay update keroooooooo


update fast and give us a good one ... otherwise am coming behind you with a danda in my hand .. samjhi tum! 😆



lol@ your post🤪🤣....don't worry guys...I'm cooking a sizzling epi..you know me!😆🤣...patience guys patience...drama ke baad romance😛😳
Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh nadiya, are you accompanying CV's , yeh drama kahan se layi ???
Cv's se toh umeed nhn kam se kam tum toh romance mein twist nhn dikhao.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Scene 35

Maan was unable to concentrate on his trip..Shania got fed up with his indifferent mood..Maan did not ring Geet he was so ashamed he hit Geet. He first thought of ringing her but he thought it was best he made up with when he went back home. The time was like it was on stand still.

Dadima rang Maan.."Maan beta aap ne phone nahin kiya itne busy ho gai hai aap?"
"Nahin dadima main phone karne wala tha..main wapas ah raha hoon aaj hum ne nai client Miss Shania keliye party rakhi hai...Dadima sab teek hai?"
"Sab teek hai beta"
"Geet aapke paas hai?"
"Haan main phone deti hoon"
Geet reluctanly took the phone but she could not make a scene infront of Dadima that she wasn't talking to him.
"Hello"
"Geet mujse naraaz ho?" he was awkward, she stayed silent
"Acha Geet zara Dadima se dhoor jana"..she moved away
"Boliye"
"Geet main ah raha hoon tho hum bath kare ge, teek hai...aur party main zaroor aana, main tume waha miloo ga"
"acha bye"
She cut him off..he knew he had to pacify her now.

Maan got ready..he was wearing a black shirt with pinstripes...he wore a white waistcoat..he looked sizzlingly dashing. He showered himself with Chanel Bleur..he smelled good..he had little stubble the way Geet liked it.

On the other side Geet had a shower and got a white sari..it had white pearls and diamontes..her choli had cris cross design at the back..her arms were sleeveless. Her hair was open...she wore white long chandelier earring with a matching small necklace..it was diamond bought by Maan as a wedding present.😳 She put on Deep Red by Hugo boss...it was a really sensual perfume. She wore silver killer heels. She was looking divine.👏

Maan reached the party early..his eyes searched for Geet...she wasn't there...Maan asked Adi and he said she was on her way. Shania was boring Maan. The setting of the party was really romantic...the dancefloor was well with bad dancers😆

Shania was planning on spiking Maan's drink to take him back home to create further rift. But Maan was refusing drinks he wanted to be sober for tonight👍🏼⭐️

The atmosphere seemed different and Maan sensed Geet presence. All the party cam into a standstill..Maan looked and it was Geet HIS geet. Everyone was mesmerised by her sheer beauty..the Men were awestruck and the women were🤬

Maan felt like running up to her and giving her a big🤗 She looks Gorgeous he thought...Shania's Company partner exclaimed "what a beautiful young lady"
"Thats my wife and secretary" beamed Maan.
"What a lucky man Mr Khurana she's so pretty, Mr Khurana having her as your wife and secretary must make it fun to be at work"😉😛
😛Maan stayed quiet just staring at Geet, Shania was annoyed that Maan was looking at his sari clad wife then her skimpy outfit. Well Shania didn't know Maan had a thing for sari.😳

Geet walked up to Maan and stood next to him..he smiled at her professionalism she was not talking to him but still not letting it on.

Maan somehow took her away from everyone "Geet you look gorgeous...I know your angry with me and I'm sorry..aise pir kabhi nahi hoga I promise...I missed you"
Geet looked down whilst fighting back her tears..Maan knew the more he will talk the more she will get get upset. He gestured Romeo to put his favourite romantic number...the lights went dim..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fr5-VGx0hkw[/YOUTUBE]

Maan hugged Geet from behind and she was melting...she scrunched her hand on her sari..Maan close danced with her

Hold my hand, feel the touch of your body cling to mine
You and me, makin' love all the way through another night
I remember you and I walking though the park at night
Kiss and touch, nothing much, let it blow just touch and go


He turned around and kissed her hand..she looked at him...with questions in her eyes why did you slap me...Maan pulled her close and touched her cheek gently..as if to ease her pain..she was going to run off but Maan grabbed her arm and walked up to her...dancing again😳

Love me more, never leave me alone by house of love
People talk, people say what we have is just a game
Oh, I'll never let you go, come here girl
Just got to make sweet love 'til the break of dawn


He handlocked with her and twirled her around...and suddenly dipped her

I don't want the sun to shine I wanna make love
Just this magic in your eyes and in my heart
I don't know what I'm gonna do I can't stop lovin' you
I won't stop 'til break of dawn makin' love


He bought their chests closer and so near as if they were about to kiss☺️

Hold my hand, feel the sweat, yes you've got me nervous yet
Let me groove, let me soothe, let me take you on a cruise
There's imagination I bet you've never been there before
Have you ever wanted to dream about those places you've never known


Maan grabbed her by her shoulder and intensely looked at her with bedroom eyes..she was lost in his gaze...
Break of dawn, there's no sun up in the sky
Break of dawn, I can see it in your eyes
Break of dawn, girl you got to understand
It's the way that I love you, let me show you I'm your man
Break of dawn


Then suddenly he picked up and he wass looking at her and she was lost in another space..the song was leading up to their reunion☺️

Let's not wait, the sun is out, let's get up and let's get out
It's the day, a brand new day, let's both go outside and play
Let us walk down the park, makin' love 'til it's dark
Let me move, let me soothe, 'til the break of dawn and you know it's true, oh
I don't want the sun to shine I wanna make love
Just this magic in your eyes and in my heart
I don't know what I'm gonna do I can't stop lovin' you
I won't stop 'til break of dawn makin' love


Geet anger melted away with his touch..she was feeling so hottt being so close to him...her heart was beating, she was breathless..the song had conveyed what was in Maan's mind.☺️

The music stopped and everyone started clapping 👏 Geet was still holding Maan's hand..he led her out they were going to have an early night till the finish of break of dawn😉.😳
☺️

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet this feels good?"
"Haan"
"how good?" whispered Maan in her ear
"As good as it feels to you"
"Geet being married to you is so good...I can be naughty with you every day"☺️

wow it feel damn good ha ha ha oh God need to take a shower wright now 🤣🤣 awesome pls cont soonnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
hug..he whispered "Geet tumari na main bhi haan hai"☺️

so sweet of Maan brilliant scene without asking i'm gonner hit the like button pls cont soonnnnnn mahi ur scene make me crave for it cant stay without reading

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