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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

wonderful part princess..⭐️

firstly i am loving the language, it seems it has been so long i read pure urdu, loving it, reading it made me realize the beauty of my own language once again, i must start an urdu novel soon..
😆
next, the story is progressing amazingly, married..lovely!, and rest the family seems in so much tension, even i was feeling jitters..

cont. soon..loving the daily updates.🤗

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

loved the update Sajjal!

it was superb as usual

finally they r married 😳

looking forward to the next update

continue soon but before that plzzzzzzz update Tumhe Haq Hai

thnx for the pm 😊

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Naina

@sumonetolub

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

beautiful update....you left a zain and alisbha and kept hindu last names but thats okay.....waiting to see their interaction now as husband and wife considering the scene you wrote for them was so funny.....i liked the tel maalish scene and also the fact that nupurs mom said that the house will seem empty after nupur leaves.....will wait for the next update 😊.......naina

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amrita vasireddy

@AmritaReddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

awesome part dear cont soon👏

n thanks 4 the pm😊

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Don't know much to say than... A beautiful update Sajjal...I don't really have words... But it was a pleasure to read... I don't think i liked any of ur ffs this much... it's written in Urdu.... there a very few writers who actually write in urdu... some do it in hindi, but then it's somewhere hard do understand some words... U have been one of my fav writers... MY fav is Neela she also writes in urdu but now...Im adoring ur ff.... Agar aage jha kar kuch bhi likha na please urdu mein likhna... But for the update it was beautiful we saw a softer side of Nupur's mom... It was sweet to read...

One blooper but a nice one...😳 Aise bloopers karti rehna....😛😆😳

Nupur hesitantly looked at riddhima and gunjan , 'jee qubul hai, qubul hai, qubul hai''

''is nikka - e - nama pe dastaq khawa kardein'' Alisbha took the pen into her hand and signed on to the paper not once but thrice, she rested the pen on the table once she was done.

I sometimes loose track of reading especially when words lieke Aapi, Ammi Jaan and Baba comes up..😳 On if were so used to "Di" mom, or dad... 😛

I jut love this ff and more the writing...😳

I don't it's necessery to say but ur a brilliant writer... Don't ever stop writing...😡😳

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Another great part!

I have to admit, I'm having a bit of a trouble reading the urdu because I'm not at all familiar with it but still I can't stop reading the story.

I loved how you described Nupur's feelings about her marriage….Marriage changes ur life so much (even if it's for the good)

It was nice to see Nupur's mom saying how the house will be quiet without Nupur…sometimes u don't realize someone's value until they are about to leave ur life.

Nupur's mom is a mystery, curious to find out more about her predicament.

The sisters scene before wedding was cute!

I've never been to a muslim wedding and so it was a new experience for me to read about it. So they are finally married! I guess the real story begins here…Can't wait to read more.

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Hey Sajjal
wow beautiful update
yeeeeeeeeeeeeee mayur got married
wanna c their married life

do update soon

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

beautiful update Sajjal.👏

liking the flow of story.🤗
so Mayur r married..........nows when d actual story started.

i cnt wait for that....it llb worth waitching, how they settle in their new lives with difficulties......how Mayank's past gts revealed...and what happened in his past.....
grt job............
gunjans life was mysterious.......unfold d mysty soon.

nups mother also behave strange...i really wanted to knw d reason.

so much mystery in it..........revealed soon.

u said, u updating it almost daily...........but m inactive upto friday.......so plz dont 4gt to pm me.........m surely comment after friday.

Thank u so much for telling me ths meaning.🤗

m really thankful to u.

thanks for the pm.

n plzzzz update '"tumhe haq hai"