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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

Rakhi type to tab karogi
jab Muskan ke Magic se bahar niklogi😆


that is million dollar quesion 😆
joking, I'm typing now 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
till 4 .30 I'll complete my update an dpost it here hopefully. by this time I want more comment for last update.
keep commenting.
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Posted: 14 years ago


Part 3:-

Maan just leave the place and still wondering what happen to geet suddenly.

Geet just sat in the bed and close her eyes then slowly call mrs berry to call Anjali here.

Anjali came and sat besides geet, she helped her to doing some drawing. Mrs berry help Anjali in her shower and then try to feed her lunch but she running and said no.

Geet came there and asked what happen?

Mrs Berry:- she refused to eat now and keep playing ,if sir will know then he will scold me, u and Anjali baby also.

Geet smiles and murmur, oh na jane tab bhi shout karenge, then called Anjali and said now come here,I'll feed u and tell u a story.

Anjali agree but said after lunch they will play .Geet said ok. First u sit here .Geet make her sit and feed her first and telling story.

then Nakul serve food to geet also.

Anajli said I'll feed u.

Geet:- beta, u r small now, u cannot feed me.when u'll big like me then u'll feed me ok.

Anjali:-no.

Geet:- pls beta.

Anjali make angry face and said no.

Geet :-ok now feed me, take this spoon and take small portion food first.

Geet help to take the food in the spoon then Anjali feed her. After couple of times Anjali fed geet then geet said now I'll feed myself.

Anjali nodded and sat there.

Here both of them not seen some one is watching them and admire their togetherness. After many years smiles played on his lips, a twinkle on his eyes to see his family like this, yes he always think geet is with his family. But never voiced it in front of geet, he feared to loose her company, he feared the history may be repeat again, he feared to loose his trust again in any one, in humanity.

His chain of thoughts break when Anjali shouts dadaaaa.

Geet look behind and found maan leaning on of the pillar and looking at them but think something.some frowns appear on his face then vanished.

Geet thinks, again iron masked, he will never accepted himself as a human.He will think ,I'm maan Singh khurana I can hide my emotion I can handle all pains. huh.are baba kabhi kabhi dard batne se dard kam hota hain par inhe kaun samjhaye.

Geet's chain of thought broke when maan said stop cursing me.

Geet tremble then said I'm not and get up from the table.

Maan in his mind liar.

Maan take Anjali in his arms and kissed her cheeks and said so how r u beta? Hope u r not disturbing aunty.

Anjali kissed maan and said no dadda, aunty feed me and told me a story.

Maan sat in the couch and said story then let me guess, ur aunty must be told u a prince will come and taking away a princess, that prince saved his princess from all odd, etc etc.

Geet coming with maan's lunch when she heard it but she ignored it and said Anjali beta, tell ur dad to finish the lunch.

Anjali:- dada, ,But maan cut her and I'll take u and ur aunty some where in the evening, be ready , now go with mrs berry,I'll join u soon.

Anjali nodded and kissed again maan and runs from there.

Here in the dining room, geet again shout when maan said I heard it , no need to shouting again and again.

Geet twisted her nose and again murmur something.

Maan sit and start to eat his lunch.

Maan's self thought:-

Kal toh isse jarur kuch hua tha, itna daari thi,shemi thi, ha nihaal se milne ke baad kuhc purane jhakham taja hongaye aur daarbhi, samah sakta hoon but usse pehele kya hua tha, kyuon itni daari hui, shemhe hui thi, akhir kya hua,I know ke mein job hi bolu oh sunti hain par kal jaise , kuch th hua tha, puri duniya mein ko maan Singh khurana ke upar baat nehi kar sakta but geet karti hain, oh mujhe mere galati, sahi sab kuch mere akhon ke saamne dikhati hain par kal kya hua tha, ke mein itna kuch kehe gaya aur oh kehe nehi,I'll tell her sorry. But no,I'll not ,Y should I > but it's my fault ,I'll poured my anger on her instead of sameera. uff sameera that lady again came here to destroy my rest happiness. but this time I'll not leave her.I'll teach her sure. She will never forget who is maan Singh khurana.

His chain of thought broke again now geet said sir, some one call u and will come here at 4.30 p.m

Maan:- who is that person?

Geet:- sameera madam.

Maan shouts kitne baar kaha hain don't call her madam.

Maan just left the table instantly and left the room.

Geet shocked to see this outburst .Whenever any one mentioned sameera's name his outburst is like this.

Geet's self thoughts akhir kya baat hain, I think maan sir loves sameera madam and she left him and their child Anjali.

Here maan goes to wards his work out room and practicing his kick boxing. After hours of practicing he sat in the floor and think about his marriage and then, sameera's pregnancy, dadi's death, his parent's death, sameera left him and Anjali,

Geet came there and gasped to see maan half naked. She closed her eyes and tries to control her breath which is increasing tremendously.

Maan heard some sound and found geet standing there and breathing heavily. He looks at her face which is so beautiful, her eyes which r like almond shape, r closed, and her supple lips trembling now.

Maan came back from his thought and said what r u doing here?

Geet also came back to hard reality and said nothing some one come to meet u.

Geet turn and leave the place instantly.

Maan wear his vest and going to down stair to meet the guest.

Maan look at the guest and shocked to see her there. He shout how dare u to come here with out my permission?then shouts at geet, geet, come here.

Geet who is patting Anjali for sleep heard maan's voice and said this man will never change , she take the spread and tuck it on Anjali and kissed her forehead and leave the room.

She saw sameera coming with two pair of suitcase and sit in the sofa casually.

Geet want to greet her but remember maan's word. She looks at maan and saw, maan looking at some legal paper.

Maan fuming in anger and throw the paper and said miss khanna , don't u dare to take my daughter. U have no right , she is mine only mine daughter . u loss whole right that day when u want to kill her for ur lust,

Geet gasped to heard it and look at maan then to sameera .

Maan:- get lost from my house.

Sameera:-I have legal notice to stay here with u , my ex hubby and my daughter. If any one will leave from this house ,then this lady who is taking care of my hubby oopps my ex hubby and my daughter.

Geet feel sad but thinks she is right and try to move but feels maan's hand on her waist and pull her closely and said u better don't utter a single word against geet , she will stay here till I'll live in this world and even after my death she will stay here, do u get it. Now for anjali's custody then try hard, u'll get nothing, and about me , then forget it, u'll never achieve it, I know y r u coming here back and y r u want to claim ur rights on me? Just wait for tomorrow and see ur result.

Maan turns and said u'll stay to night, but not here there is out house there, don't u think to come here.

Sameera calmly heard everything and said but darling , do u think if u keep geet like this then.

Maan clutched geet's waist tightly and said don't u try to cross ur limit and get out from this house.just one night stay that out house then I'll teach u .

Maan just left the place and enter his room.

He released geet and said sorry. Then look at Anjali and just sat besides her and caressed her head lovingly. A tear escape from his eyes.

Geet noticed it and said pls forgive sameera ma. I mean sameera jee. She loves u and she is mother of ur but before she can complete her sentence, maan pull her and take her in the dadi's room and said Last time, I warned u for last, don't' cross the limit,

Geet feared to see the anger in maan's eyes.

Geet whispered I'm sorry,.I for got about my status here.

Maan close his eyes and said Look geet, U don't know anything, so pls stay out of this matter, I'll take care of this matter, now from today, u'll stay here.

Geet:-I'll not,I'm leaving this home now.

Maan:-For God sake , geet, don't start it again. Now get ready, we will leave within 30mins,

Geet:-I'm not going any where with u.

Maan:- ok, mat chalo mere ,sath but Anjali ke sath toh chalogi, now , don't play with my temper , be ready within 20min.

Maan left the room.

After 30 mins, maan reached at hospital and geet said hum iha kya kar rehe hain?

Maan :- kuch kaam hain,chalo.

Both enter the hospital and maan said this hospital belongs to my mom's friend, dr suman.

Geet excited and said the famous gynecologist.

Maan:- yes, she open this hospital for poor women whose family cannot bear their pregnancy expenses, this hospital has lots of new equipments.Dr. suman want to open a child ward but not now.

Both enter the cabin of dr suman and greeted her.

Dr suman also greeted them and Anjali also.

Precap:- Geet slipped but some one hold her right in time.

Maan massaged geet's leg and sameera saw it.

Sameera feel jealous.She wants maan back for her desire, lust.

Maan teach geet about some business tactics.

maan slapped sameera and warned her for something.

Maan:-I feel disgusted ,I never seen a women like u.

MAan angrily hold geet's waist and said do u know, past of mine, do u know who is sameera and what she did ? what is her crime.U don't know anything.

Geet slowly whisper I know everything sir.

Maan shocked and said no u don't know , u don't know the actual truth, no one will be know it.

Geet:- y r u giving urself too much pain.

Maan evily smiles and said cause I love pain and want to give others also pain.

Sameera came and scold geet for stay in the khurana mansion.

Geet want to leave the mansion.




note:- see the poem in page 81 by sharmake11

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1608306&TPN=81

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all
how r u all?
Note:-
sorry for any mis take.hope gynecologist confusion clear now😆,
kya kya sab soch rehe the😆.
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated the next part.
pls read it and comment.

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome part 👏👏
not only maan mee too admire the togetherness of geet and anjali. and i want anjali to call geet as mom in front of sam
y does maan think history may be repeat again, geet is very very good na, hope he admits his feelings for geet soon
i think if sam keeps on torturing him like this he will soon confess his feelings for geet
and this sam she is getting on my nervs😡, poor geet supporting her
she will stay here till I'll live in this world-loved it
precap is very good
do continue
Edited by mallu.crowe20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😛
OH MY GOD
Love it So much
i Love that lines

Anajli said I'll feed u

Geet beta, u r small now, u cannot feed me.when u'll big like me then u'll feed me ok.

Anja lino

Geet pls beta

Anjali make angry face and said no.😆

Angry face 😆

i Love all Maan lines

End was Too good

Both enter the cabin 😆of dr suman and greeted her.

Dr suman also greeted them and Anjali also😊

Love the Precap
i love that line Too
Geet say - y r u giving urself too much pain
n Maan Reply I love pain and want to give others also pain OHHHHhh
i really want To see Maan face that Time 😳

OH MY GOD
Geet want to leave the mansion.😲
cant waittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt for next one
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update 😊
Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

di... anjali is soooooooooooooooooooooo chweet... i would have been scared after reading the precap but since you've already told us that not more than two three sad parts i am happy...😆 btw update the other FF plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Updates...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
tx for the lovely update...

waiting for the next one...ahhhh hate that Sameera😡

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