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Posted: 14 years ago
Shila so naughty teasing poor Geet oh my heart goes out for Sameera she cant be mother again the precap sounds naughty cant wait to read fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am Bored anyone fancy the shocking update? idk lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
me too, I might fall asleep but still looking forward to :)
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MUAH me to i'm bored waiting waiting my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
cant wait :) :) :) :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow i am excitd 4 next part!dat brij is bas***d!expecting whole lot of drama next!geet l kiss maan!muahhh!luv ya updte soon"tc!do pm me n ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago



***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 27

part 28

Maan- just hold me tight! Just hold me tight!

Maan woke up round about 5am. It was early morning. Geet was in his arm. He gently stokes her lips which wakes her up instantly... She smiles.
Maan- I love you..... He strokes his lips along her cheek.... Seducing her softly. Loving her... Geet melts with his touch... It was like heaven. She started to get different feeling over all... Maan wanted to kiss her badly... A kiss... A different kiss... Something he always fantasize about. Something he always wanted to do.... He comes on top of her.... Both started to breath hard as maan presses his lips along hers.... He kept it still.... Wasn't sure if this was right. Wasn't sure if this should happen.... She is only 15! But the out brush emotion the desire she always builds up in him was out if control today.... He took her lower lips in his mouth... She was still so delicate & frazzle... He took care not to hurt her.... He took care of not to explore her fully... He just nibbles on her lips. Nothing els... But then maan lost control and forced his tongue in her mouth.... Geets eyes widens. She didn't reply back.... It was him who was exploring her. His emotion... All those years was coming out in that kiss. Her both lips was in his mouth.... She was still growing physically... Maan couldn't stop him self even knowing she is not ready for this! She is not ready at all.... He plaid with her tongue... Geet was getting scared....
Geet started to get ticklish feeling round her curve & her private parts! Was this right? She wanted him.... She wanted him to kiss her like always... Geet could feel something hard was pressing her private part down... He was getting wet. He was still wearing his night dress... He stopped instantly as he could feel geets uncomfortable leg... He relaxes on his back... Quickly gets up & takes his cloths out of geets wardrobe & walks in to the bathroom...
Geet laid there breathless... Bit shaken. She didn't expect this... She was bit scared to. What did he just do... Geet thought... That kiss was something different!
Geet gets up. She was still bit shaken! Maan was cursing him self inside her bathroom! How could he let him self loose like that. She is too young! She is... She can never Handel this much deep intense intimacy! She is still growing. He felt sick. How could he? He punched the wall in anger! Breathing hard. He closed his eyes... Just couldn't bare this. That Brij and top of it this! It's like everything was building up. He cursed him self....
Geet sat outside. Confused. She still couldn't get out of the shock but she was more worried about maan! He was in the loo For 30 minute now. She knocked on the door. No respond. She pushed & it was open. He was standing by the mirror. With no top... Geet walks in & hugs him from the back! Maan instantly opens his eyes... She had no bra on.... He could feel the soft curve hunting him down... His mussel contracts... His body was dying for her touch... ........His body was dying to feel every part of her with geets every gentle kiss on his back... He could feel everything getting wet again.... He snaps... Pushing geet way from him. Geet was shocked & taken back...
Maan- stay way! He snaps! He was angry more at him self then her! He was angry that he couldn't control his dam feeling.... His physical desire... Wasn't that's why dam Brij just ruined a girls life forever! Wasn't that's why sam could never be a mother again! Suddenly it strikes him what if same thing happens to Geet? How could they will ever live like that? How could.... He looked at Geet. Who was scared with his anger. Who was terrified with his sudden anger! Maan was changing. He was leaving his boyhood and changing in to a proper men where geet was still a child... Unaware about any type of physical relationship... Unaware about any type of adults need when they grow up....
Maans angry eyes was only creating fear in her... Nothing els.... She could barely see the pain.... She just began her teenage love where he was thinking deep in to there relationship... Where he was thinking every aspect.... Every needs... Every .... Maan rushes out taking the shirt from the side. Leaving geet all confused.... She stood there shaken. Terrified now.... What she have done wrong? First that unusual kiss & now his anger... But angry about what?

Geet came out after 2 hours... She walked down the stair. Slowly.... It was 8am! Everyone was in the hall along with Sammera Di. Geet sat by the stair wondering what happen. Maan looks at her. She was still shaken. Maan stood there with his crossed arm while Brij & Sammera was in tears. Geet looked confused.
Darji looked out of control. Darji was angry. Unable to think talk. Geet was scared now. She have never seem Darji this angry... Never seem Darji this much out of control. He slapped Brij. Again and again!... Sammera felt in maans arm... Crying her eyes out... Geet didn't like that but she was more worried about sam. Why she was crying like this? Why Darji was hitting Brij? Geet decided to ask... Tears rolled down seeing her bro cry like that!
Geet- muum.... She asked in a shaky voice..... Everyone looks at her instantly... Of course she is to young to understand anything like this....
Rano- go to your room beta!
Geet- mum... Why Darji ...... That's when maan snaps- GEET GO TO YOUR ROOM! He shouts... Geet jumps with his sudden anger & shout.... She was shaking more now.... Geet started to breath hard.... Maan closes his eyes knowing how petrified she must be with this new side.... She runs from there and hides her self in the room... She was scared. What was going on! She was confused....

Sammera downstair wasn't sure what to do now at all. Who will merry her knowing she could never be a mother. Who would spend....
Darji calls Sammeras parents. They walked in soon as geet left... Sams were full of pain & anger. Knowing there only daughter could never have kids now + that to for this idiot who tried to ignore the whole situation. Sams mother slapped her nonstop when maan came in-between and stopped her!! Sam was scared! The guilt was killing her. She wanted to end this life. She was dying of embarrassment. Of shame. The pain of she could never look back at her patents eyes was killing her. The pain the anger to her self that how could she fall in love with this b****.... How could she.... She cried more in pain. Holding maan tight. Maans parents arrives along with shila. She ran in to geets room.... He called her knowing how scared Geet might be...
Sams mum came to hit her again when she hides behind Avantika.
Avantika- enough! Mistake have been done! Now think about solution. Not making the situation wars.... She shouts. Rano came and sat next to sam. Sam couldn't stop sobbing...
Sams dad- what solution? He snaps! What solution we could possibly find in this? What solution we could posibly seek? My daughter could never be a mother again! Never! Tell me mr Handa what if something like this happens to Geet? What would you have done? ... He shouts in pain & anger. Maan looks up instantly. Who was watching the whole situation silently until now... He became angry. He clenches his fist.... Holding sams dads Collar- HOW Dare You talk about Geet like this? HOW DARE YOU? He shouts. Maan had no control. He didn't care if he was older or not. He didn't care if he was his dads age... No one gave any right to talk about his Geet like that. No one.
Arjun quickly comes across & stops him.
Maan- HOW DARE YOU? He still went over his dad to punch him... But Arjun pushes him against the wall...
Arjun- CALM DOWN MAAN! CALM DOWN! He shouts!



next- Avantika- shila is perfectly fine. But it seems like something els also effected Geet.

Maan looks at her in shock & guilt' he closes his eyes knowing that kiss went to far'




hay you all' from here on story will change a bit' now i want your BIG LONG COMMENTS :D BIG BIG BIG ONE.😲

i need to know what you think is going on? what should happen' pls pls pls analyise' Pls do take some time for poor paradox😳

& give me some feed back' its really nesesary'. :D

i will see u all bc on thursday. really looking foward to your long comments

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
FIRST TO COMMENT:- 🥳 🥳

BIG NOOOOOOOOOOO FOR SAM-MANN MARRIAGE 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

DO U HEAR ME KEYA ......... I SAID "NOOOOOOOOOO" SAM-MAAN MARRIAGE 😭 😭 😭

im still in shock about thinking sam-maan marriage😭........will edit comment later once im normal to think
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Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
do continue
it was amazing
i hope dey decided dat brij and sam get married
i feel so sad for geet
Edited by sweet cherry - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
There are a lot of things going inside maans head right now that kiss was something that he always wanted to do so he let his guard down and kissed her but realised he broke his limits thinking about his age and hers and knowing she is too young and still developing maturity and doesn't understand his intense love but the things that made him more angry was brij and sameera and the fact that she can't be a mother again mad him realise that if he breaks his boundaries it may happen to geet and all these thoughts of guilt and frustration built up and he vented his anger out on geet who is terrified at this new side and awe the Sam part well I kind of think the solution maybe to make maan get married to her by reading the whole thing that is the only conclusion I come up with as they talk about Sam being ruined and who will marry her but also family reputation plays a big part and brij is a coward to face all this and geets reaction to all this happening is to much foe her to take in so I think it may cause some mental stress to geet anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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