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Posted: 14 years ago
***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 24

HAY YOU ALL' :D hope u all r alright' :D sorry been to busy lately.
thanks for all the love & support
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& NO LEAP 😆

Geet- umm..... I.... I ..... She couldn't even speak as maans whole body weight was crashing on her. She took a deep breath. A shy relive... Maan could feel her leg started to curl round his.... He somehow was getting a bit out of control.... Maan gently strokes her cheek.... She smiles... Then slowly hugs him tight....

Geet- I missed you.... Maan smiles....
Maan- me to....

Maan quickly brushes his teeth ad puts his knee length shorts on & leaves with Geet with his surfing board. Both walks along the beach holding hand. It's early morning. Waves wasn't that high. But everything looked so calm & beautiful. Life guards started arrive... While some ice-cream stole started to get everything ready....

Maan & Geet makes there way to the breakfast. It was crowded. Whole Handa & khurana family along with maans all cousin was present. Brij hugged maan.
Brij- sorry dude we left you!
Maan- you all could have told me at least!
Shila- we try bro! But you never home!
Maan- yea! Yea!
Geet frees her hand & joins Dev and others to the breakfast table! Whole restaurant was basically full of khuranas & handas!
There was some girls at the corner eyeing Brij & maan! Giggling. Both had no top on! There 6 pack was making all the girls drool over them..... & of course the look... (maan billions of time better! Lol)

After breakfast Geet quickly changes along with Shila.....
Shila- we still haven't measured your boob! She speaks while staring at them.... Giggling knowing how much Geet will hate this.
Geet- you are sick. Stop staring at me. She gives her annoying expression.
Maan who was patiently waiting outside started to get annoyed! Does it take this long to get ready? Then suddenly shila was pushed out and landed on the floor! Maan was surprised and taken back but before he could react she ran with her towel and bag!
Maan wasn't sure what's really going on he walks in... Only to find Geet half naked.... His eyes widens. Mouth fell right open.
Maan- WHAt ARE YOU WEARING?????? He shouts. Geet jumps with his sudden presence. Was she hearing right?
Geet- umm.... My swimming costume! She gave him a strange look. Was he alright? Did he expect me to wear winter cloths in this hot boiling weather? Imagine me... Everyone would laugh!
Maan hurriedly ran across the room and covers her with a towel! Geet gave him another weird look!
Maan- you are not going out like this!
Geet- what do you mean? I want to surf!
Maan- were you out like this for the rest of this week? He asked suspiciously. Dying to here the answer no. But out of his shame she said yes... Maan started to fume in anger... Geet takes the towel off and places it on the bed..... With her hand across. Which pushed her boobs higher. She tapped her feet and expecting a apologies....
Maan couldn't think! God knows how many boys have looked at her specially with her big curve! Maan closed his eyes.... Not that I am complaining but no one looks at them except me!
Maan takes the towel again and covers her.... Frustrated now....
Geet- what type of behavior is this? She asked annoyingly...
Maan- have you realized how many boys have looked at you?
Geet- just look na... They didn't touch!
Maan was shocked- touching.... Touching! TOUCHING! How could you even think like that? He speaks in a shocking voice while holds the towel right & taking her in his embrace....
Geet- you are just over reacting.
Maan- yes! Why I wouldn't be? If you have this big curve where every boy would drool over!.... Geets eyes widens. Her mouth feel right open! Maan froze just realizing what he just spit out!
Maan- oh... Ehh.... Me..... He was so embarrassed. He couldn't think. Words seems to left his mouth.
After few minute Geet broke out of her shock- get out! ...
Maan was petrified now- me... Oh.... Eh... I.... He started to fumble....
Geet- GET OUT! GET OUT....
She screams and before maan knew he found the door bang shut on his face!

Maan- Geet.... He tried to act normal. It was pointless. How could he be so stupid? This is wrong! Wrong! Wrong! How could he....
Maan- jaan.... He tried Again.... Hunny.... Sweet heart.... Misti.... Nothing was working. Then suddenly something smacked the door.
Maan- jaan.... I am sorry na! I didn't mean it!
Geet- you are sick like shila! You both brother & sister r sick! Sick! Sick! & sick!
Geet opens the door & walks out in anger. She managed to find a short... But still with bikini top!
Maan surprisingly looks at her again- what are you wearing?
Geet- go to hell! I am done with you. You are to much... She snaps. She stops by her hut before leaving and spines round. She had enough of him. She was lictuly dying to see him. Her day & night wasn't the same. Her life wasn't the same! She dying to enjoy this holiday with him! And all he could say.... Hold on... I am going to shot at him....
Geet snaps- yea! What?
Maan- you can't go out like this! No! No way! He hugs her tight! Geet loved his strong arm but now! He really have to stop being a control freak...
Geet- what's your problem? Geet dint do this! Geet don't do that! Geet font go there! Geet don't were that!... Geet stay there!... Geet don't talk to them!....
She spoke in pure anger! Her life was fully controlled by him!
Maan looks at her with blank expression- owo! Do I really sound like that?
Geet- yes! Yes you do! She snaps.... Maan smirks and holds her tight in his embrace.... While slowly taking step back to the room....
He gently strokes his lips along her shoulder line... Tickling her sense....
Maan- that's because your are my..... Only my.... He whispers.... Geet smiles.... Blushing...... His warm breath was killing her.... It tickled. Geet started to breath hard. His hand gently strokes his back... Geet spins round instantly. The Tickling sensation was doing something to her...
Maan hugs her from the back- I am sorry! But I can't.... Geet didn't wait any longer. She spines round & hugs him tight...
Maan was shivering with her touch. Her bare fleas was tempting. He wanted to touch! Wanted feel them. The effect she had on him was out of reach. He close his eyes hugging her tight. She hardly could breath. That's probably far as he was allowed to go! His fantasying was going Beyond his imagination. He wanted to block it. It will only make him wild and later hurt both or go Beyond like Sammera! Maan opens his eyes instantly! He forgot about her! She is pregnant with Brij child! He need to talk to him!
Maan- don't go out like this! I will see you any minute! He ran out!
Geet- what els I suppose to wear? She shouts! Maan disappears.


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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

I know this sounds like Ekta, but take a leap and show them as bit grown up now 😆😉☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago

yeppy managed the second spot😃😃😃

loved it... geet is so cuty cuty...bacha
ummah
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: temorocks

I know this sounds like Ekta, but take a leap and show them as bit grown up now 😆😉☺️


nop no leaps. it will ruin my story. 😳
u have to control ur ahem ahem thought😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update my dear pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE


nop no leaps. it will ruin my story. 😳
u have to control ur ahem ahem thought😆

U know my eheem eheem code? 😲😆Blushing
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Posted: 14 years ago

U know my eheem eheem code? 😲😆☺️

😆
do i have to mention?
😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Don't u think now its tym 4r leap...... Really maan is such a control freak....... Poor geet...lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE


😆
do i have to mention?
😆

I didn't know ke I am so popular 😆
Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Don't u think now its tym 4r leap...... Really maan is such a control freak....... Poor geet...lol...

As much as Maan and Geet r torturing us in the serial for the full on SR, Keyama is doing the same 😆😭😆☺️

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