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Posted: 14 years ago
i have kind of stop commentin
as it hurts wht im readin in the
updates.
deewangi started like madhoshi
where love was so pure and the story
st.away touched our hearts and made
readin it beautiful but
then half way thr it was full of so much pain that
i couldnt even read the update so till now
im not clear abt wht happened actually
in madhoshi except in the end maneet
were together.
same way i lovedddddddddddddd dewangi
but u separated maneet for 3yrs and every
thing changed.maan didint come in front of
geet for all those yrs and left her alone.
she lived and breathed for him but he kept
her away frm him totally so yes she have
grown up and grown with that hurt in her heart
for those yrs.
people tend 2 develop a cocoon around them
to protect themselves frm heartaches if they have
suffered one and become indifferent to alot of
things in their life.thats reality
but i always said i have enough of realities of
my own and so do others.ur ff is my way of leavin
reality behind and to engulf myself in this magical
land of love love and love
im not sayin u shouldnt write sad part as it cant happen
im just sayin u really do break our hearts with sooooo
much hurt and just takin away all the love that there is
intially depicted.u show us the doom b4 u start showin us the
light again which can b very hard to take or to digest
i lov ur ffs theres no doubt abt it but can u b just a little
kind on ur poor hearts.thats all im requestin
lov ya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

hi Muski now that the thread has ended

i will like to narrate what will happen in the party
back stage Geet is getting ready
Maan comes to see her as he does not want her to read his indifference
she smiles at him and he wishes her luck
one of the models who has been with Maan
tried her every tack ticks on him sees this
and goes to Geet (i will address her as M for model)
M: hi, you are new
G: yes my first assignment
M: nice, that Man I mean Maan you know him
G: (annoyed she has seen his pics with so many girls lately that she
already feels insecure that is why she just fled to India a year early): yes I know him
M: you better be cautious, he mayu break your heart
G (does not want to imagine how): pardon
M: see he is very arrogant, if you even walked naked in front of him he will not see
G:what????????
M: ya, I have been with him, not that he invitesd me, I read about him being a platboy so thought ... but he never ever looked at me, I think he does not even know i were there
G: but he never stopped you
M: yes he did not stop me but neither did he call me, I went on my own and came back on my own
G: and what was he doing all that time
M: just drinking
G: drinking
M: yes and you know he was so drunk than also he did not look at me
G: why?
M: may be he is Gay
G: gay!!!!
M: yes I asked the models who were previously with him they also had the same experience
G: they never told you
M: yes they tried o stop me but I thought they were being jealous, but they were correct I were wrong, you also have a choice listen to me or experince on your own
Geet immediately stands and goes to the man incharge saying she will not be able to go on stage, she is nervous.
and goes to take her bag
moves to the washroom
pulls out a salwaar suit exactly the way she wore earlier
ties her hair in a pigtail and comes out and calls Maan
G: Janoo, I am waiting for you in the car park
Maan was taken aback by her voice it had the same sweetness,
it was his Geet, he immediately goes out and looks for her
he was surprised to see her dressed up exactly the way he liked
he called her GEET!!!
she ran to him hugged him and said I love u I love u I love u
and kissed him like she usd to do
once her insecurities fled she was back to normal with him
she cursed herself as to how she even suspected him to be chi chi chi... jhali hoan main
he hugged her tight and kissed her
hey DONT MIND😉

Hey Hi,
That was a wonderful thought.........
enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

hi Muski now that the thread has ended

i will like to narrate what will happen in the party
back stage Geet is getting ready
Maan comes to see her as he does not want her to read his indifference
she smiles at him and he wishes her luck
one of the models who has been with Maan
tried her every tack ticks on him sees this
and goes to Geet (i will address her as M for model)
M: hi, you are new
G: yes my first assignment
M: nice, that Man I mean Maan you know him
G: (annoyed she has seen his pics with so many girls lately that she
already feels insecure that is why she just fled to India a year early): yes I know him
M: you better be cautious, he mayu break your heart
G (does not want to imagine how): pardon
M: see he is very arrogant, if you even walked naked in front of him he will not see
G:what????????
M: ya, I have been with him, not that he invitesd me, I read about him being a platboy so thought ... but he never ever looked at me, I think he does not even know i were there
G: but he never stopped you
M: yes he did not stop me but neither did he call me, I went on my own and came back on my own
G: and what was he doing all that time
M: just drinking
G: drinking
M: yes and you know he was so drunk than also he did not look at me
G: why?
M: may be he is Gay
G: gay!!!!
M: yes I asked the models who were previously with him they also had the same experience
G: they never told you
M: yes they tried o stop me but I thought they were being jealous, but they were correct I were wrong, you also have a choice listen to me or experince on your own
Geet immediately stands and goes to the man incharge saying she will not be able to go on stage, she is nervous.
and goes to take her bag
moves to the washroom
pulls out a salwaar suit exactly the way she wore earlier
ties her hair in a pigtail and comes out and calls Maan
G: Janoo, I am waiting for you in the car park
Maan was taken aback by her voice it had the same sweetness,
it was his Geet, he immediately goes out and looks for her
he was surprised to see her dressed up exactly the way he liked
he called her GEET!!!
she ran to him hugged him and said I love u I love u I love u
and kissed him like she usd to do
once her insecurities fled she was back to normal with him
she cursed herself as to how she even suspected him to be chi chi chi... jhali hoan main
he hugged her tight and kissed her
hey DONT MIND😉



wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww beautiful end is awesome loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago

hay master..... whts wrong.... why they both r living their own world.....

where is our maneet......... mising missing missing...........😭
pl kuch karo😭....... i want to se old maneet.........loving........charming😛.....cuty. pie.....
love...............286pearl..............
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Posted: 14 years ago

missing little geet so much..... feel so sad abt maan......

maan is geet ko accept nahi kar pa raha....
why geet's feeling side is so sailent........... i want listen geets feeling too.......
ab kya hoga babaji.... pl kuch karo..... hey muski to kuch narhi karti......
love........286pearl
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ smj1977 oh my God ....how did u read my mind and every1 else's mind in here. i mean that was just the perfect medicine for my far too wounded heart. thank u thank u thanku soooo much for that cute input of u'rs. made my day
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muski, i am sure she is not geet it must b AROHI her friend.hope its her only i jst cant see maan suffer like this. waiting 4 V day
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muski ....i am missing MAAN's littel wify so much ...please bring her back to the characeter,,,,,.....i am so sad for maan....he is living in hell .....
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 55 : i wonder how can one change so much😲 Geet jumped in joy - thanxs Maan she said promptly. He thought had it been his little wify she would have to run to him, hug him & kiss him all over. Well she is not little any more. He tried to look at her, she really looked happy. Geets happiness is all wat he wanted. But why was he not feeling happy the way he did seeing her happy. How much he felt he was lacking.
Geet - Maan why don't u suggest some name
he couldn't have thought of any name..the only name he knew was Geet... how can geet forget everything about maan she nvr failed to understood him when she was young ....his act always made her understand his feelings nd noe she cant even understand what he wants ...😲

Geet - there is also a party after that..it will be great if u could join me for that too this is heights man !!! .......she almost forgot eveyrhtign about him ....😡😭

He wondered since when did she like parties, she really did grow he thought & he was still probably living an imaginary life that doesn't exist anymore. He had to move on with her, they were married. She was Geet. If he can't accept her that is his problem which he really needs to fix it soon before she actually starts feeling the difference in his behavior. Wat shocked him the most was how come she never realized it until now.maan and me both in the same boat😆 ....... but i pity maan 😭😭😭😭😭 what shocks me more is here maan spent his evrytday thinking about hsi little wife and here geet has completely changed just not by behavior ... completel up to down ...........😲.

kind sad but brilliant update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 wont forget to mention m loving this track...... just cant see maan hurt and that too because of geet ........😔

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww
muski i jsut read 56 parts till now
and can/t stop reading
u r just awesome

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