UnExpected Twist Of Life AR Pt 10 Pg 66 (19 April) - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007

Hey di
when r u going to nxt part?
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART 3


Its been a week her mom left her last breath and Riddhima is not ready to face the reality.She is neither taking any food nor talking with any of her friends and even stopped attending the classes. Anjali and Atul returned 2 days back and they both were completely shocked with the sudden news.Muskaan has been a great support all this time.She is by her side at all the time .Anjali even asked Riddhima n Muskaan to come and live with them in their house.But Riddhima dnt want to go away from this home where she has all memories of her mom.Every time she thinks about her mom and her last few hrs in hospital she started to feel like its because of her that her mom is not there with her.If may be she has that money on time,may be she will be alive today.May be she wnt be alone,may be she will also be a normal happy person,may be her friends not worry reg.her.She dnt want to trouble anyone more.She want to free from all this emotional tensions.Suddenly she started to feel that her body is released from all the tensions,darkness covered her eyes and fall on the ground unconsciously.

Muskan who has seen Riddhima in that condition ,immediately rushed her to the hospital.The doc examined Riddhima informed that her blood levels are very low due to the heavy stress and for not taking food from the entire week.Atul who takes Riddhima as his little sis was worried by seeing her in that state.After this he is not going to allow either Muskaan/Riddhima to be in their home alone.He wants them to come n live along with him and Anjali.By knowing how much sensitive person she is ,he is not going to take any other chance to see her again in this condition.

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After few days :

Anjali and Atul succeeded to convince Riddhima and Muskaan to live with them.At first Riddhima dnt agree to move in but her friends make her understood how much they will be worried for them if they live alone in that place.Atul suggested her to visit her house whenever she feels to be there.He also makes her understand that she is not alone and they will be there for her .By then even Riddhima changing a little.She is trying to be open with her friends,started to attend the classes.Spending much more time with her friends.She is changing .. changing a lot for good.One day her thoughts are filled with all her mom memories,how they both used to live happily,how her mom wake up her every morning,how she help her in her studies,how she is there with her in all her happiness and sadness.She remembered how they spend her mom last birthday and its been a year .Today is her birthday again but today she is not there with her.Suddenly she wants to be in her home .After being there , she goes to a near by beach to spend for a while alone.By sitting on a rock, all lonely thoughts again flooded in her mind.Though her friends are trying each and every min to take care of her,though she is trying to convince herself that she is not alone,somewhere she is not ready to accept the reality.While she is in her thoughts suddenly a person comes from behind and embrace from behind.Riddhima who is shocked from that unexpected gesture jerked away from his grip.That person is Armaan,who came to spend sometime there.He saw her sitting there alone ,in her deep thoughts without giving an interest on the things which are going around her,He noticed that her face is expressionless not unlike he saw her at their first meet.

"So,Riddhima ji,kaisa hain aap?".

"How is ur mom.hmmm theek hi hongi,right!After all she has a daughter like you.So do you get that money? You know I waited for a very long time at that night.But I can understand,may be you found someone who offer much more money to spend a night with you.But if you are open to the offer even now or if your mom again went not well,dnt forget that I will be always there to help you,"Armaan said with a smirk and goes from there to attend his phone call , without even giving any chance for her to reply.

After listening all his words,all the guilty thoughts of not able to save her mom again tortured her.She again started to feel that she is the sole reason of her mother's dismay,she is responsible for all the trouble her friends are facing ,suddenly she feels like she has no right to live anymore and not to be a burden to her friends.She just dnt want to face that torturing thoughts in all her life.She dnt want live anymore.She started to walk towards the sea.Armaan who is attending his call.see her walking towards the sea.At first,he thought may be she is walking and enjoying the cool breeze.But after seeing her emotional less face and her drowning in the sea he completely shocked.He just cant see her anymore.A sudden fear ran in his body and immediately ran to take her out of the water.Armaan jumped into water without second thought.She was unconscious till then nd her breath was shallow .Armaan was too restless to watch her in this condition.

he picked her up in his arms nd rushed to doctor and informed Atul,as he is the only person he has known of her from their first meeting.

All were utterly shocked to know Riddhima tried to commit suicide.They knew that Riddhima went through a lot.But from last few days,she was opening with them.She avoids talking reg.her mom.They also stopped by seeing her sudden sadness whenever certain memories crossed in their convos.They thought it will take a quite more time to come out of this grief,but they never thought that she will even think of a step to commit suicide.They r not understanding what all in a sudden happened that their Ridhu decided to end her life.By the time Riddhima gained consciousness,she see all her friends along with Armaan by the side of her.

"How are you feeling now Ridhu,"Muskaan asked in a concerning voice.

Riddhima remains silent.

"Why did you do this Riddhima",Anjali asked"Why ?Dnt you know how much we all wrer worried for u,cant you see how we all are being with you at every sec from the past few days,cant you see how we try every single sec to make you come out of your grief, then why did you do this ???".

"I know Anjali,I know how much you all are worried for me.I know how much you all think reg.me at every sec.I know Muskaan not went to visit her parents on the weekends to just be by my side.I know how much you all stopped enjoying your life to just be there with me.I just dnt want to worry you anymore.Its just because of me my mom is not there with me today.Its me,can't able to save her.Its just me !!! I dnt want to be a burden to all of u.I dnt want to face this guilty torturing feelings in all my life,"Riddhima said by break downing into uncontrollable tears.

All are hell shocked to hear that words.Specially Armaan,from the time,he is in the hospital neither he asked Atul nor he given a thought why Riddhima tried to commit suicide.But now after hearing her words he is understanding the whole situation.For the first time he felt how worse his words hurted her and how much she went through.In all,the way she is feeling as a reason for her mom's death is hurting him the most.May be if he had trusted her and her words that night and helped her ,may be now she wont be in this guilt.

"How could you think that Ridhu",Anjali said in a hurt voice.

Atul,"Rddhima you are not a burden to us.I take you as my little sis and we all feel u as our family member.Dnt it make u feel not alone !Muskaan not went to visit her parents because she thought that her friends needs her the most.How can we enjoy and party ourselves,when we ourselves want to spend time with you.And Ridhi you are NOT responsible for Padma aunty's death.Its fate,you have to come out of that guilt and face the reality.Do u really think that mom will be happy to see u feeling like this?',asked in a soft and slow voice making her understand the situation.

"I - - I'm sorry bhaiya!I dnt do this again,I'm so .. soorrryy,"Riddhima said with her trembling words.

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A Month later '

Riddhima REALLY changed a lot.A lot for her not just because for anyone else.She is really happy in her life.She is opening with the people around her.She adopted new hobbies.One of which is Painting.Her many feelings reflects in her work.Even a change can be seen in Armaan.He and Atul became a much more good friends ,after that incident.After knowing all reg.Riddhima from Atul,Armaan also started to have feelings for her.Even today Atul or anyone dnt know what happened between Riddhima and Armaan n neither either Riddhima or Armaan talked reg. this.Atul is seeing a lot more change in Armaan.He saw him stealing glances of her.He even stopped being with that stupid girls.Though Armaan encountered Riddhima a few times when he was in Atul house,never had any serious convo.After that incident Riddhima almost avoided him.How much he tried to deny his feelings for her,for the first time Armaan Malik really going to make this feeling work.He want to be there for her ,as her love,as a support, in her life.For that he is going to wait how much time it take.


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Thats Part 3 Guys ... I Truely Try Not To Get Any More SaD Parts ... But I hope U All This One ... Do Comment Please :))


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Editing : Ritu
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Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey very nice part..update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi N ,H.... loved this part too..I know i always do coz You r amazing writer ...loved every scene u plotted .
it shows us a reality .Man is so weak nd can loose his/her cool under the effect of crucial circumstances...this was exactly done by Ridhima....
But i must say Armaan saved her shows ,he is not bad at heart ,but a tough nut to crack. And now when she has already break it than he is going to be her shield nd will protect her from every hardship n obstacle in her life.


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Edited by janu1610 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyya

dii verry nice partt hope they fall for each other soon

thx for the pm

continuee soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey diii😊........... awesome part di👏👏⭐️...........just loved it.............hwwwwwww ridz tried to commit sucide😔............i hope armaan will help her to come of stress n where she actually live life for her not anyone😊............. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff

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Posted: 14 years ago
you know one thing that this story os awesome dear it was great to read it
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part......................................................😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
I luved this part...she trued to commit suicide ..aww thats sad..hope she cumes out of this depression soon

update ssoonnn

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