DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

ANGRY NOTE-

heyyy guysss

plzzz comment dears

v write it with so much difficulty

so tht u can njoy reading it

or atleast press d like button

n yaaa plzzz do tell us if d ff is bullshit

or wt v can improve

so tht v can stop writing it n also improve writing it

LUV

ROOPALI n HINAL

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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heermeher

@heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

That was really sweet way of celebrating birthday

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#243

hii hinal and roops...
glad to see that u r writing an ff..
and must say its very engaging...
loving it to the core...
simply superbbb
keep writing

love u both

reva

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#244

beautiful part.
loved it.
aww so sweet the celebrate dadi's birthday.
loved it.
precap is interesting.
continue soon.

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#245

Loveee the part!!

Continue soonn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

loved the update...

more than maan-geet loving maan-pia bonding and their masti

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

awesome part

thanks 4 d ud n pm

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

I need to read it from the beginning dear
will do it sometime Ok
The current part was good
Dadis surprise bday party was well planned and executed by the whole family
Pia seems to be super cute.
Jalebis and brownies mouth watering mmm.
So what gift that must be
me will keep thinking till u girls update again
BTW I liked your angry note too.