MG ff *Pehla Pehla Pyaar* Rewriting in ghsp forum

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Radhika

@ridhz21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

lovely ff....
pls add me to ur pm list.......cont. soon

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123pritha

@123pritha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

wonderful updates

loved them

pls add me to ur pm list

continue soon

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

hey saumya.. i jst found ur second creation..
i truly luved ur description bout geet. truly a apple pie.
such cute gal crying.. aww~~ tats really sad...
i really luved d whole choco scene..
gosh... geet is damn cute.. i feel like pinching her chubby chubby cheek afta u describing it.. aww~~okok control control...
n mr.confident.. he is truly a adorable.. thou wif 2 teeth missing 😆
feel like hugging him now.
loved d lil cute fight btwn crying baby n mr.confidence.

i had already requested u to add me at ur another FF.. jst in case u havent add me...
keep writing.. eager to read more

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Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

cont soon...
add me to your pm list...

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saumiee

@saumiee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

edit..will rewrite in ghsp forum..😃

Edited by pinkmoon - 12 years ago

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

awsum news. u made my night😃

cute update. Sweet that from earlyon it's establshed that geet will always find
her savior in maan.
Continue soon.
Wud luv to read more.

Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Yayy can't w8...😊
update soon x

Ediited:: awesome update
Loved it
Awww loved how maan was angry that geets sister shouts at her
Wanna hug the cute little maan so much
Awww can just imagine our little maaneet walking hand in hand lyk little teddies😍😍😍
want a longer update next tym plz 😊
Next chapter our little maaneet are gunna bid us bye,,,,gunna miss the little cutiepies🤗
cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago