ff:new beginings - updated chap14 on pg 28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

It's really awsome! Thanks 4 giving such a nice story. Is it really gonna happen?

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nammmu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

hey tats great abhay drinks blood

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koyal-kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Edwardtabs
It's really awsome! Thanks 4 giving such a nice story. Is it really gonna happen?

nope😭 not going to happen

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: nammmu
hey tats great abhay drinks blood

thanx but thats animal blood. he is a vegetarian vampire🤣

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Kaushiki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

very gd.......

liked d way u deacribed Piya looking at Abhay

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

good..
abhay talking with piya is good..
but they caught at d wrong time..
aryan i getting on abhay's nerves always..
not good..back off aryan..

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Lisa George

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

awesome update koyal👏 it was all i cud hope for😃 loved d park scene...abhay n pia r attracted to each other... so we can c all d makings of a passionate love story ☺️n i jus loved d ur description of abhay's vampire form n d confrontation scene....aaaww poor abhay's hurt😭 tht aryan's a troublemaker 😡😡 wat a pest pickin fights with abhay brilliantly written...👍🏼 thanks n pls update soon😃

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koyal-kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: saphira7988
awesome update koyal👏 it was all i cud hope for😃 loved d park scene...abhay n pia r attracted to each other... so we can c all d makings of a passionate love story ☺️n i jus loved d ur description of abhay's vampire form n d confrontation scene....aaaww poor abhay's hurt😭 tht aryan's a troublemaker 😡😡 wat a pest pickin fights with abhay brilliantly written...👍🏼 thanks n pls update soon😃

thanx i am happy you liked it