MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2 - Page 43

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maan_mishthi

You know I din knw abt ur ff INNOCENCE LOST until u mention abt it in one of ur post ...

You can't bliv i read the whole story in one go ... sat arnd 12 pm nd din left my lappy until complete the whole update ...it took me 3 hours ...

M just impressed by ur writing skill ...👏

Innocence lost ..i love the maan's obsession with geet ...nd how he manipulates the poor soul ...he may be dangerous but not bad , it seems.

And he didn't even knew what irked him more-her question or that criminal's name from his geet's mouth.

Confuses me ...as in one of update maan stated he dznt claim innocents ...so raindar was criminal ??? 😕

nd why dzn maan think only meera can poison geet's mind ...she has brains to think


Ahhh thanks a lot 4 ur humble comments dear😳

U r ri8-he's dangerous but not as bad as he seems...u will get to know why

Good question-was rajinder a criminal? if not then how cum maan is connected to his death?

Why maan thinks meera poisoned geet's mind against him-well sweety it's his insecurities which make him think this way...he trust no one in the world save geet and to an extent,his brothers
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Posted: 14 years ago
I still doubt that Maan is an evil person... why would he kill someone????

But if he actually did something like that ...then why??

I feel sad for Geet...poor girl she has so much trust in him...she loves Maan so madly...and here he is simply dominating her and scaring her away... why is he hurting her so much???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

mygod.. how could you?!😳


JUst how could you!!😲... Leave with THAT for a CLIFFHANGER!

IT is C.R.U.E.L.🤔


And Geet getting wise to her husband's antics is pretty close I guess.. cant wait!



Ri8 now I'm feeling like a CRIMINAL😆

Ah yes like I told u b4 a sensible geet is on her way😉...so yes she is indeed close
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakadafi

Maan's just sinking deeper minute by minute. Even before he can properly distract her, he creates another doubt for her. The story is getting more and more interesting...


Correct...poor maan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

I still doubt that Maan is an evil person... why would he kill someone????

But if he actually did something like that ...then why??

I feel sad for Geet...poor girl she has so much trust in him...she loves Maan so madly...and here he is simply dominating her and scaring her away... why is he hurting her so much???


I see my readers are constantly coming up with intelligent question😊

Not only geet...maan is equally mad 4 her-but the major difference between their love is what I told u all b4,i.e geet loves maan unconditionally whereas maan is literally obsessed with her.

And yes he is not hurting her...he is in fact trying to keep her away from all the dirt and grime of his life so that it doesn't affect her or her innocence...not knowing that it is only making her vulnerable to an even bigger heart break😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

maan babu u r toh dead ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

maan babu u r toh dead ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
part 19
it looks like Maan himself is speaking the truth or the things happened by himself to Geet...
rather he is still more raising confusions and also mistrust in Geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear
loved it...so its mean that rajiender was a criminal
looking for ward to next part
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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